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Sep 10 2013

Love Never Fails Chapter 34: Departure

I’ve taken a short break from writing since I published my last chapter. Thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope you will enjoy reading this update, and if you do, please let me know. I would love to hear from you!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7472782/34/

The following is the teaser:

She tightened her arms around his torso while rubbing her face against his neck. He returned her embrace, savoring the moment while sniffing her flowery scent. Meanwhile, all the stress and drama since her birthday in early May flashed through her head. She had lost him twice. The first time he had left her right after the lion attack, and the second time she had made a heartbreaking decision to terminate their relationship. Hence, it meant all the more to her that she could finally return to his sheltering arms.

“Candy? Talking about Pony’s Hill…”

His voice trailed off when he gathered his thoughts. Without looking up, she caressed his cheeks lovingly. “Yes?”

He began, “By now you should know… I’m a Scottish?”

“Of course, why?” she asked, her fingers tracing his jawline while wondering why he had abruptly changed the topic.

He cleared his throat before he ventured, “As per our family tradition, each boy in the direct family line will be given a-“

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  1. Guest

    Salut j’adore votre histoire 🙂

    1. Ms Puddle

      Gracias!!! 😀

  2. Cheryl

    Great chapter! I was checking for your updates all day! I wish you wrote longer though! But anyway it was good and I like it!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you for reading! Nice to meet you here! ^_^

  3. Mavelle

    That was a fantastic chapter! You had me crying with happiness. PERFECT!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Sorry to have made you cry… Thanks for your compliments! ^_^

  4. FarmerGrlTX

    Hi, please forgive me I haven’t left a review for a long time if hadn’t for my real life issues. Your new chapter is absolutely one of the best stories I’ve read in a while. And believe me I’ve read a lot in the past few months. This rates right up there with some of the best ever written. I love the interaction and emotional dynamics between Candy and Albert. You had me frustrated, laughing, sad and downright hoping this thing would not end. In my opinion, the last part when Albert went to Candy was the most romantic scene I’ve ever read. Thank you for the touching update.

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you so much for your long review, FarmerGrlTX! I am speechless… I don’t think it’s as good as you have described, but thank you for your compliment! I feel like hiding now (blushing). 😛 Anyway, I hope you have resolved your issues by now. 🙂 Have a good day / night!

  5. CKati

    I just saw a request from w.a.a. for a new drawing and I think it’s a wonderful idea. She picked a beautiful scene. So will that be a challenge? 😉

    Again, very good chapter 😀

    1. MN027

      I’m with them. Go for it, Ms Puddle. New challenges are so fun and motivated too 😉

      I like the new chapter!

      1. Ms Puddle

        Yes I read the suggestion from waa… I will keep that in mind. Thank you for reading the chapter! ^_^

    2. Ms Puddle

      Yes CKati dear!! Thank you for writing a review! Glad you find their goodbye romantic! I’m very happy! 😀 Yup… Lots of things going on, so I need to keep the chapter focused. 😛

  6. Albertfanatix

    That was a good read last night, Ms. Puddle. Thank you very much for providing such lovely update. Hope you have a great day. 🙂

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you very much for reading! Glad you like it! You have a great day too! ^_^

    2. Ms Puddle

      Thank you for writing a review too! 😀

      1. Albertfanatix

        No problem. I’m sorry if I talked too much in the review page. I might have spoiled your writing mood for figuring out what Albert was trying to say lol. If I did, I’m sorry. I just like Mysteries! 😀

        1. Ms Puddle

          It’s OK… The readers will figure that out sooner or later anyway 😛

  7. Aria

    Thank you Ms Puddle…I was so excited when I received an email notification that you have posted chapter 34 of LNF. What a great writing!

    I am looking forward to the next chapter.

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you Aria!! It’s always encouraging to hear from eager readers, and you’re certainly one of them! I’m so happy you like my update! Thank you! ^_^

  8. Yanyan

    That was very beautiful chapter! Hope you update soon!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you Yanyan! Thanks for writing a review ^_^

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