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Oct 10 2013

Love Never Fails Chapter 36: Victims

Thank you all for sending me feedback to my previous chapter. Originally I wanted to write a little more this time, but due to many things that are happening in real life, I have decided to publish a short chapter. Please bear with me, and I will try to update soon again. Many thanks for your patience and understanding!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7472782/36

The following is the teaser:

Meanwhile, although her cheek burnt with pain, she simply swallowed her tears, expecting another blow from her grandpa. Ever since he had found out her affair with Paul, her grandpa had been very stern to her, not to mention that he had been on edge all the time. Hence, her open protest just now must have filled him with wrath in spite of her perpetual plea of not forcing her to marry her cousin in America.

In the beginning, when she had first known about the prearranged marriage as a young teenage girl, she had fantasized about falling in love with her handsome cousin based on his portrait drawn by an artist. Years later, knowing that he would study in London, she had even romanticized how they would meet for the first time. However, her dream had gradually shattered by the fact that he had declined her grandpa’s invitations again and again. Then, her grandpa had decided to send her to study in America, and being more independent and popular among peers, men or women, had further opened her eyes.

Roughly a year ago, when Beatrice had returned to Scotland for the summer, she had finally met Aunt Elroy, who had admired her and assured her that William would eventually show up one day. It was by chance the young lady had found out that her cousin had resided in London for months by then. That had been the last straw to her. Her pride had been wounded, and her mindset had significantly changed. She had come to acknowledge that her cousin had had no interest in meeting his betrothed at all. It was around that time she had expressed her wish to choose her own path, including her husband. Unfortunately, her grandpa had disregarded her by steadfastly holding his ground. He had always been quick-tempered as far as she could remember, so whenever she had broached the subject again he would get aggravated.

 

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  1. Aria

    I am glad that you are feeling well now.

    Yay! Go Candy! 🙂

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you, Aria! I hope you’re doing well too! 🙂

  2. Aria

    Hi Ms. Puddle,

    Hope all is well with you. How is this cold weather treating you?

    Poor Candy and Albert, never a dull moment for them 🙁

    If I were Candy, I might not be able to handle the obstacle that came one after another. I would just break up with him and go back to Terry but Albert is worth the headache though. It would be a great loss to me as Candy. See! Another dilemma 🙁

    LOL

    Anyway, as always it’s a great story and I can’t wait for the next chapter and hopefully it will be a longer one 😉

    Warm Regards,
    Aria

    1. Ms Puddle

      Hello Aria!

      I’ve had a terrible cold for a long time, but it finally bids me goodbye! 😛

      About the obstacles… well, that’s how the story goes, but this time Candy is more determined than ever, just like Albert! 😀

      I’ll try to write a little more next time, Aria! 😉

      Best regards to you too!
      Ms Puddle

  3. Anonymous

    Me gusta la historia, lloré con la despedida de Terry pero también creo q el perdió cuando se rindió ante la situación con la tipa esa, aún así me recuerda a alguien y no pude evitar sentirme aludid. Cuándo estará listo el siguiente capítulo? Saludos!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Muchas gracias por leer!! 😀
      I will write soon. Thanks for your patience! 🙂

  4. Sadie

    Lovely chapter! I like it!!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you for reading! 😀

  5. Lyanne

    That was very readable chapter though it’s short. I can’t wait for the next chapter. 🙂

    1. Ms Puddle

      I’ll hopefully write a little longer next time. Thanks for reading! 🙂

  6. Monique

    Hello, Ms Puddle. I’m glad that Stear has finally confessed to Patty and I wish them the best. Your chapter is somewhat joy and alarming at the same time. I actually enjoyed reading it.

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you for reading and telling me what you think! Yes I expect the chapter to be shocking to some people 😛

  7. Josie

    Hi Ms. Puddle,
    I just noticed that I was lucky that I read your most recent chapter. For some reason, I have the strange idea that I have read the story before…..anyhow, I love it!….. I do wish that the good George will be able to find out about Beatrice’s boyfriend to save Sir William from the bad Mr. Duncan McGee and that Beatrice will ask Sir William’s help once he finds out about their intrigue to force him to marry her.

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thanks again! You will know what’s going to happen in next chapter… I was planning to include in this chapter but decided to split 🙂

  8. Josie

    Hi, I began to read Love Never Fails last week and I was hoping that by the time I finished all the chapters, I was going to read the happy ending. As I began my reading of your last chapter (36), I was disappointed to notice that it was going to be a short one because it meant it was not going to be possible to cover everything that must happen to complete all the drama for everyone involved in your story. Please, tell me if the rest of the story could be found under different name since I noticed as well that 2011 was the publishing date. I must say that I liked the way you have wrote this story where Candy and Albert end up together. I always have a preference for Albert and not Terry. My apologies to all the fans of Terry!
    Ms. Puddle, I hope you are doing well with your daily life and that you can find time to write more to this story. Wish you well.

    1. Ms Puddle

      Hi there, nice to meet you here. I’m still writing this story, one chapter at a time. Currently it’s only published in fanfiction.net, and yes I just got chapter 36 out! The story is reaching its climax soon and my plan is to wrap up the story as soon as possible. As you said, I started writing around this time in 2011, but I had taken breaks in between to write a few short stories. 😛 Anyway, thank you so much for reading “Love Never Fails”! I’m so glad you like it! 😀

  9. Yanyan

    I like your new chapter, Ms Puddle. Please write more!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you for reading! Glad you like it! 😀

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