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Feb 23 2014

Love Never Fails Chapter 41: Showdown

This chapter is shorter than usual, but I hope you’ll like it. It took me much longer this time, so thanks for your understanding!


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7472782/41/Love-Never-Fails

The following is the teaser:

At any rate, the Leagans couldn’t fathom why their young son had such a fascination, if not obsession, with this girl. Nevertheless, the Leagans had always granted Neil whatever he had desired in his life. This time was no exception either though they could easily foresee the chaos by welcoming her into their family.

Since then, Sarah herself had been feeling jittery, not to mention the inexplicable heart palpitations. She just hoped that nothing awful would result from any of this.

Talking about their son, he was supposed to join his parents this afternoon, but he had sent a maid to inform them that he had needed a rest before dinner time. After finishing their tea, the Leagans went for a leisure stroll through their garden. As the shades of evening had fallen on the landscape, Sarah suddenly felt a strange premonition coming over her, and she suggested to her husband, “Raymond, why don’t we head back and check on Neil?”

“You look a bit pale, my dear. Are you alright?” he asked in concern.

She put on a faint smile, and at this point, Stewart in his chauffeur uniform approached them and said in a tight voice, “Sir Raymond and Madam Sarah, I’m afraid Master Neil’s car is missing.”

“What?” they responded simultaneously, astounded. It was an expensive car, a generous gift from Madam Elroy.

 

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  1. Brenda

    Hello Ms.Puddle, by the way, good post! Poor parents, they had spoiled Eliza and Neil too much! is Lyanne talking about Albert. Sorry ,I am little confused.
    See you later!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thanks Brenda for reading! It’s one of my favorite chapters in the story, and glad you like it! 😍

      I’ll check the other comments, in particular Lyanne’s, later. Thanks! 😃

  2. SweetCandyAndley

    OMG! OMG! OMG! Indeed you are becoming the master of suspense! Once more, this was a great chapter, I have to say that it was worth it to wait for it! Liked it a lot! My heart pumped so fast and furious, just as Abert’s. Godd work! I’ll stay tuned to you! Have a nice week Ms Puddle!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you SweetCandyAndley!! Glad you liked this chapter, but sorry to your poor heart though! 😉 Thank you for following, and have a nice week too!

  3. Tiny12

    I enjoyed reading it, but know i’am worried about candy. Well done chapter ms puddle!!!

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you so much for reading Tiny12! Yes I know… but you’re not alone. 😉 Thanks again! 🙂

  4. Lyanne

    A well done chapter, Ms Puddle. I’m happy Candy is okay, and I hope Aunt Elroy will not decline her nephew’s engagement to Candy.

    1. Ms Puddle

      Thank you Lyanne for reading my chapter! 😀

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