A Man in Love – Chapter 2

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15 Responses

  1. Cristina CV says:

    I love the George´s pov about the Pony´s Hill… OMG!!!! he was caught red-handed… or in the suitcase???

  2. Dee Anne says:

    no more I can say… this is awesome! and nice to know that Neil got punched from Archie, lol.

  3. Evelyn says:

    Excellent continuation my friend on George’s POV between the timeline when he first found Master William and getting things ready for him to start working as the head of the family. There had to be a process to obtain the black suites he wore! Georges had to know where Albert lived and that he lived with someone! But who? Don’t think he knew it was Candy yet! He must have felt guilty for abandoning Candy for so long because of being preoccupied trying to find the whereabouts of Master William! All fantastic points filling in the missing gaps in the story! thank you Ms puddle for yet another excellent chapter my friend 😍

    • Ms Puddle says:

      You’re right, Evelyn! Lots of things have happened, but this is purely my imagination based on the facts in the story. This period of time in CCFS is not detailed enough for me unfortunately, so I revert to the manga settings instead. 😅😉
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      No, at this point George’s has no idea whom his master is living with. He would find out of course😁😆

      Thank you for your support, my friend! 😘💓 I’m glad you like this chapter😊😄

  4. Anonymous says:

    very good! looking forward for the next chapter。 thanks for your hard-working to fill up out hungry spirit

  5. antlay31 says:

    C’est encore moi j’avais du temps à rattraper !

    Je félicite Archie pour avoir mis une droite à Neil ! Celle-là il ne l’a pas volé ! 😀
    Annie a été très lucide en glissant à l’oreille d’Archie de ne pas évoquer les problèmes de Candy à George. Annie et Archie devaient rester discret afin que George n’intervienne pas, ils ne pouvaient prendre le risque que ce dernier leur demande où résidait Candy. Candy faisait partie de la famille Ardlay et il était inconvenable pour une jeune fille de son rang de vivre avec un homme sans être mariée et qui plus est sans identité. George étant le bras droit de l’Oncle William, le patriarche aurait été informé de la situation et annuler l’adoption de Candy, voire pire provoquer sa colère.
    Je me demande quelle explication George va fournir à la Tante Elroy ?
    Vivement le prochain chapitre !

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Excellent, my friend! You’re absolutely right, that Annie and Archie had to protect Candy by keeping her living arrangement a secret from Georges/Granduncle William, especially she just lost her job due to living with a male patient. Archie should know that Albert wasn’t earning much by washing dishes either. They probably barely made ends meet before.

      About Aunt Elroy, you’ll know in next chapter. 😘😋 So glad you like my special treatment to Neil. 😆

    • Candy Bert says:

      Ah! Je suis entièrement d’accord avec toi Antlay, Bravo à Archie pour avoir corrigé Neil, il l’a bien mérité! Mais tout à ses émotions il a failli révélé que Candy vivait sous le même toit qu’un homme, un vagabond sans mémoire! Si seulement ils savaient tous à ce moment-là qui se cachait derrière cet homme! En tout cas, nous lecteurs, on se délecte de la scène!

      J’aime beaucoup la façon dont George se remémore la jeunesse d’Albert, sa solitude et son isolement, quelle tristesse! Mais tout à coup un vrai rire se fait entendre sur une certaine colline et nous sommes dans le secret, nous savons bien qui est à l’origine de la joie d’Albert à ce moment-là!

      Il me tarde de voir la tête de George quand il réalisera qui vit avec Maitre William! 😆

      Merci Ms Puddle pour ce nouveau chapitre!

      • Candy Bert says:

        Oups! “il a failli révéler” et non révélé! 😳

      • Ms Puddle says:

        Bonjour mon amie, merci beaucoup! 😍

        I’m not as hardworking as you, Candy Bert. 😅 My chapters are much shorter than yours, so it seems nothing much happens. However, I’m glad both you and Antlay like my special treatment for Neil. I wanted more, but I figured Archie isn’t a bad guy after all.

        Indeed, he almost spilled the beans but Annie stopped him just in time. They couldn’t risk letting Georges know what was going on in Candy’s life. In CCFS, Candy herself explained that she couldn’t write to Granduncle William because she didn’t want him to find out she was living with a mysterious guy who had broken into his villa in Lakewood… lol…

        Anyway, I’m happy you like Georges’ recollections of Albert’s youth. That’s very important in the story. 💗💓

        • Candy Bert says:

          Thank you for your compliment, my friend,😘 😍 but you make stunning drawings, you write also great articles and translations from Japanese as well, all this take so much time!. Anyway a chapter doesn’t need to be long to be great! 😉

          • Ms Puddle says:

            Thank you so much for your support and compliments. 😍😘 I do all this as a stress relief. Keep up your good work, dear Candy Bert! I’ll keep on reading your romantic fic 💞💓💗

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