A Man in Love – Chapter 7

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  1. Evelyn says:

    Hello again my friend! Bravo!!! Love how Georges slowly and cleverly knows how to ask always the right questions!! Yes I can completely see why he feels frustrated about the trust he so much longs for his young master to have with him! As we know, he completely confided in Candy and vice-versa just like a normal couples do! Love when Albert discovers the beautiful park where he ends up taking Candy most likely the next day?!? Interesting that Dr Martin already knows about Albert’s recovery of his memory upon Albert’s own confession. I never thought of this in the manga but is an interesting twist in your story! Did Dr Martin know at this point about Albert’s true feelings for Candy? 😊

    Thank you for this great chapter!!!

    • Ms Puddle says:

      You’re almost there, dear Evelyn! I always see Georges as a wise and observant man, and he must have figured out his master’s inner feelings by the time Albert decided to send Candy to Rockstown. Yes, you bet, eventually I’ll get to that episode 😍💖

      About Dr. Martin, it’s just my gut feeling, and I think he’s another observer who has seen everything 😋😉

      • Evelyn says:

        I Completely agree with you, Ms Puddle, that Georges must have known or at least figured out that Albert was in love with Candy definitely by the time Rockstown happened! I feel Georges figured it out soon after Albert recover his memory and got back in touch with Georges! I think even Dr. Martin must’ve had a hunch of Albert’s feelings at some point. I think Dr. Martin was wise enough and had been around long enough to read the chemistry between Candy and Albert!! 😉

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Exactly!! These two characters give important clues. If you remember, at the end of the manga, when Candy resigned, Dr. Martin mentioned something along this line: “If Albert lets you go, I can’t keep you either.” 😉😋

          • Evelyn says:

            I never really read into it more than just that if Albert gave his approval then he was ok with her decision to move back to Pony’s home! but you are right! Is there a deeper meaning to Dr Martin’s statement?

  2. antlay31 says:

    Bonjour Ms Puddle

    C’est à nouveau un chapitre très intéressant et brillament écrit où l’on ressent à la fois la frustration de George et la retenue d’Albert à se confier de nouveau à lui.
    Vivement le prochain chapitre, j’ai hâte de lire la réaction de la Tante Elroy !

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Merci beaucoup, Antlay! 💝 Yes, Albert won’t tell all… Georges will have to do some speculation here and there until he sees a picture in his mind later 😁😉

  3. JeannyJJ says:

    I like the part where Georges suggested gift rather than $$ for Dr. Martin and how Albert responded. (I can’t help smiling as I read those lines.) 🙂
    Looking forward for the new chapter. ^_^

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thanks JeannyJJ for your support and encouraging words! 😍😘 I like that part myself lol… Sometimes my imagination took me to places that surprise even myself 😁😀

  4. Candy Bert says:

    What a great chapter, Ms Puddle! 👏

    I really like how you make us understand the enigmatic personality of Albert and more precisely that of William Albert Ardlay by using Georges who knew him so well, very clever!
    I’m sad for Georges because Albert had struggles to trust him completely and I can feel his frustration, but it was consistent, they didn’t see each other for more than two years, and so many things have happening since. More, Albert had now Candy to confide in!

    George was a persevering man and he won bit by bit some elements with his smart questions, he lead Albert in more confessions but not all because WAA has show him with subtility he was the master, Georges had to wait to learn more. Yes it was a sort of chess game like has said Mari!

    I can’t wait for the encounter with aunt Elroy!

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thanks for your kind words, Candy Bert! 😍😘

      Indeed, many things have happened since Albert’s disappearance, and it takes time for him to become accustomed to confide in George again. You’re absolutely right, my friend, that Albert has Candy as his companion now. She’s not replaceable. 😀 Besides, part of the reasons is that Albert didn’t want to disclose too much at this point.

      But Georges wouldn’t give up so soon. Both he and his young master are intelligent men, and he can only probe his master a bit at a time with subtlety 😁😀

      Yes… Aunt Elroy next 😉😉

  5. mari says:

    Grande!!! E’ come una partita a scacchi, entrambi attenti a non rivelare troppo… amo questi risvolti psicologici… Ms Puddle, hai preso un personaggio secondario (Georges) e ne hai fatto un capolavoro…

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Grazie mille Mariacristina!! 😍😍😍

      Your kind words really make my day! For the past weeks I have struggled to find time to write this chapter, and I’m so happy that you think it’s like a game of chess 😘

      Many thanks for your continued support, my friend! 💕💓

      • Eydie says:

        Gracias, es hermosa esta lectura. Saber el punto de vista de otro personaje sobre la misma historia es muy interesante. Casi nadie se basa en ello para escribir un fic. Te felicito.
        Eydie Chong

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Muchas gracias por leer, Eydie! 💕

          I have this story in mind for a long time. I just need the energy and motivation to write it out. Thank you so much for your encouragement! 😘

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