Oct 08 2016

A Man in Love – Chapter 10

My gratitude goes to all of you who have been following this story “A man in love”, particularly those who have given me enthusiastic feedback 😍 on Chapter 9 or on Facebook. I can’t believe this is my tenth chapter already. Thank you very much for keeping me motivated! 💓💓💓💓

— Ms Puddle

Chapter 10

Master William and I will spend the rest of the day in the head office, which, unbeknownst to me, he has this planned all along. Rather than relating to me all the details of his conversation with his aunt, he fills in the blank whenever I appear clueless to him.

“I informed Aunt Elroy I was ready to start working full-time, and she could officially begin the transition,” he explains on our way back to the mansion from the hospital. “So my aunt immediately asked if I had the date in mind.

His début, he implied. It signifies an important milestone in his life, which is long overdue. He adds, “I said no, and she urged me to consider it as soon as possible.”

In a nutshell, of his own volition, the heir is prepared to step up and take over the office, executing the powers and duties of the presidency, even before his début.

“How did Madam Elroy react? Was she skeptical?” I ask without hiding my amusement, and Master William laughs spontaneously, his frown breaking into a sheepish grin. “You know both of us very well, Georges.”

I chuckle. One of his favourite quotes is a verse from the Bible, “How meaningless to think that wealth brings true happiness! Those who love money will never have enough.” (Ecclesiastes 5:10 NLT)

In other words, the person with the respectable name “William A. Ardlay” hasn’t kept his nose to the grindstone at all, despite rumors to the contrary. (In fact, almost all rumors about him are invalid. For example, he’s not a feeble old man.) Ever since his graduation from college, the heir has been reluctant to stay in the office for many hours; he took frequent breaks to enjoy the nature and solitude. His half-hearted working attitude remained the same when he worked together with me in London, aiming to expand the family business in Europe. He set aside a few days every week for a part-time job in the Blue River Zoo, where he could spend time taking care of the caged animals. When his aunt came to London to visit the young generation in the boarding school, St. Paul’s Academy, she seriously brought up the topic he had been dodging – his début, but he managed to persuade her to wait until after he returned from Africa. However, who could have predicted that he would vanish into thin air only months after he started volunteering in Kenya?

At this point he elaborates, “She was bewildered at first, and you’re right, she strongly doubted my words after she grasped my intentions. Thus, in order to prove that I’m more than determined, I told her I would follow in my father’s footsteps from now on, and I even expressed my wish to borrow his three-piece dark suits to appear more like a chief executive than a college graduate.”

“Really?” I retort, a mixture of disbelief and curiosity is evident in my tone. “Sir, do you know your late father, Sir William C. Ardlay, worked seven days a week, from dawn to dusk?”

This question is for him; he hasn’t stopped surprising me today. What have really motivated him to be an industrialist, so much so that he’s willing to curb his love for nature and subdue his fondness for animals?

As he gives me a nod to confirm his determination, I append in all seriousness, “And was Madam Elroy pleased?”

He shakes his head, a strained smile gracing his lips. “She was alarmed,” he answers, “if not terrified.”

“Madam Elroy? Terrified?” I repeat, cocking my eyebrows incredulously. That’s impossible. Never in my life have I seen her show any trace of fear.

“No kidding!” he exclaims in a dignified tone, and yet his lips curl up into a half smile when he mimics his aunt’s reproof in a panicking tone, “She said, ‘Don’t make rash promises, William!'”

A heavy sigh emits from his lips as he closes his eyes for few seconds. Then, he goes on, his eyes downcast and his voice back to normal, “With a straight face she cautioned me to never ever become a workaholic and even made me vow that I’d take it easy for another while until I’m back in shape.”

“Back in shape?” I echo, unable to comprehend what that means. Master William looks up and explains, “My aunt thought I had just recovered, but I reassured her that physically, my body had long recuperated… Only my memory had taken an extra lengthy vacation before returning to its host.”

He chuckles at his own joke, his eyes twinkling merrily. I suppose the last thing Madam Elroy wants is history repeating itself. Nonetheless, his good humor attests his high spirits. I have a hunch he’s quite satisfied with the outcome of his meeting with his aunt, even though this costs him the freedom to indulge his vagabond’s lifestyle.

At the same time, I wonder what causes Master William to be this elated, to have reunited and made peace with his aunt, to finally embrace his destiny by taking up the role as the head of a huge business enterprise, or to continue living elsewhere with his ‘sister’. Perhaps a combination of all these and more?

Regrettably, by the time we reach the office building, he still hasn’t revealed a word about his roommate and his living arrangement. I haven’t forgotten his promise to me earlier today, that he would explain why he had opted to stay with her. Of course, he is still unaware that I have discovered who she is. Yet, I know the behavior appropriate to my position and status, and I won’t push my master unless he takes the initiative.

On the other hand, he must have apprised his aunt of his absurd decision, for her first task for me was to hire bodyguards. Yet, it’s a known fact that Madam Elroy is ruthless and uncompromising when it comes to order and business, so how Master William could move his aunt’s heart and prevail is beyond my imagination. What sentences of persuasion did he use when he reasoned his wish to continue to live like an ordinary man from the working class? Did he tell his aunt whom he had been living with all this time? Or is he going to hide Miss Candice from his own household?

Just like my first reaction to Master William’s recollection, if his aunt knew her nephew practically owed his roommate his life, she could have questioned why he didn’t reward his friend profusely, considering that there are numerous things he can do to return the kindness right now. If Miss Eliza can live like a princess, Miss Candice has the absolute rights to lead a luxurious life as the adoptive daughter of William A. Ardlay.

At the mention of this name, it suddenly dawns on me that his firm resolve to settle down, taking up the tremendous duties as the rightful heir, may very well have something to do with his so-called sister. Think about it, what he can do for her right now is relatively limited when his aunt is in charge as the matriarch. He’s fully aware of his aunt’s unfair treatment to Miss Candice in the past, and as long as he stays low profile, his legal daughter has nobody to fall back upon or with whom she can share her plight. That is, she will continue to be the subject of disapproval and meet with contempt due to her lowly background.

On the contrary, once Master William undertakes the role as the patriarch, the matriarch will have no choice but to step down; as a result, he will have substantial authority in the family. But it seems to me even that is not enough for him, because he goes the extra mile to take over the vast business enterprise, asking his aunt to begin the transition. In other words, he decides to live up to the name of Granduncle William. Only then he can exercise his power and influence to stand up for Miss Candice, to vindicate her innocence, and to fight for her rights. For instance, Master William can make Dr. Leonard apologize and make amendments. If Miss Candice wishes to pursue her nursing career, she can select any hospital her heart desires. The working condition will be considerably much better in a hospital than in a tiny clinic.

Presently, his words ring in my ears, ‘…regardless of whom I would turn out to be, I would take care of her to the very end…’

Hence, I stand in amazement of this new understanding. He is keeping the promise he made to himself, and with William A. Ardlay behind Miss Candice, who dares to openly look down upon her?

Is Miss Candice the major motivation for Master William to overhaul his working habits? Does he have a long term goal in mind for her, as her legal guardian, her big brother or a close friend?

As soon as we show up in my office, my secretary shoots up from her seat. She’s taken aback, obviously; our unannounced arrival has seemingly brought a blush to her cheeks, as if she has been caught red-handed. After greeting one another, I speak to her, “Mrs. Thompson, please unlock the president’s office for Sir Ardlay.”

“My pleasure, Mr. Villers. Sir Ardlay, please allow me to get the key for you.”

“Thank you,” he replies with a polite smile. When her eyes meet his blue ones, her blush gets deeper. At once, she averts her gaze and literally flees from our sight. What’s the matter with her today? My highly experienced secretary is a little older than me, and I’ve never seen her more abashed. Maybe she needs some time to collect herself, but why? Is she still feeling guilty or embarrassed due to her arrogance yesterday? Or does her awkward behavior arise from seeing the charming boss clad in fine Italian suit?

I must admit Master William is dashing and gallant in appearance and manner. His late father’s clothes fit him so well as though they were tailor-made. In other words, the young heir has the same height and athletic build as my benefactor. Yet, he takes the resemblance of his deceased mother. The same held true for Rosemary. That explains why the siblings looked so much like each other, except Master William has his father’s blue eyes. If my previous secretary were here at present, she would have fainted, believing that late William C. Ardlay has come back to life.

Anyway, the president’s office has been locked for nearly two years. Soon after we shockingly discovered that Master William had gone missing for a while, Madam Elroy’s health plummeted and began to show signs of old age. She could no longer come to the office every day. Therefore, the chief financial officer, her most trusted delegate, has the key for the cleaning staff.

Meanwhile, the new president paces himself around the grand office, letting his glance wander about. It’s not at all a surprise that it is maintained in its best possible conditions. As a matter of fact, this is the first time Master William ever steps into this particular office. Like everything else that belongs to the Ardlays, this spacious room is elegantly decorated and furnished from top to bottom with European style. Some ornamentation is even designed with antique taste.

Moments later, I hear him murmur to himself, “Compare to the total area of my current apartment, including the bedroom and bathroom, this office is almost doubled…”

He sounded neutral, not happy nor excited. As his voice fades, I decide not to give any comment to his remark; he wasn’t talking to me anyway. About several minutes of silence later, with two creases forming between his eyebrows, he turns towards me, asking in a thoughtful tone, “Why don’t you ask?”

Ask what? What’s on his mind?

So I pretend, “I beg your pardon, sir?”

He stares at me for a long moment, clearly unconvinced that I didn’t hear him. Without another word, he leaves his spot and heads towards the windows in pensiveness. After throwing a quick glance at the double doors, which are securely shut, he turns to face the windows. The silence between us disperses when he speaks up, “Remember I told you I could do anything just to get my memory back?”

“Yes, I remember, sir.”

No words come forth from him after that, as if he needs a respite. Then, out of the blue, he whirls around and declares, “Georges, I’ve braced myself for this day. I’ll be the chairman, CEO and the president of this enterprise.”

“Yes, Sir Ardlay,” I assure him, nodding once firmly. “No doubt.”

Right then, a confident smile makes its way across his handsome face. “Arrange a meeting then, Georges. It’s time to introduce me to the executives and the vice presidents.”

To one who doesn’t know him well, he’s like a young king who has recently inherited the kingdom; he’s ready to battle and conquer. In a sense, that’s very true, but my gut feeling tells me there’s more. He wanted to reveal something to me just now but held back at the last minute.

(To be continued…)

A Man in Love

Note: Again, this is purely my imagination inspired by the manga version of Candy Candy. Thank you, my dear friends, for your continued support and positive reviews to my previous chapter (not in any specific order)! ❤❤

Tania Frias, Loren Rios, Evelyn, Reeka, Mariacristina Marchetti(mari), Anonymous, Gina Riquelme Orellana, marmalade, Cary, Sarah, JeannyJJ, and antlay31


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    • Martha Cervantes Quiroga on October 20, 2016 at 7:55 am
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    Este capítulo me ha dejado muy asombrada, primero descubrir que el trabajo de William Albert Ardley en el Blue River Zoo era en sus ratos libres, pues estaba ya ampliando los negocios familiares en Europa, ¡Wow! Después, la certeza de George que la identidad del compañero de cuarto es un secreto que ambos comparte. Pero lo mejor, todas la conjeturas de George sobre las razones que han motivado a William a hacerse presente como jefe de la familia, en todo caso motivado para proteger a Candy. Es como si todas las piezas del rompecabezas empezaran a encajar.
    Thanks. I really love this story! I finish reading with a sigh. See you soon

    1. Yes dear Martha in CCFS Albert wrote to Candy that working in the Blue River Zoo wasn’t the only thing he did in London. He wasn’t having fun time but to work with Georges, to prepare to start business there. I believe he meant to expand family business. However, I can double check CCFS. 😆

      About Georges’ speculation, they are my guesses too, that WAA wanted to protect Candy so that he could make her happy. In the manga, the night when he recovered, he stared at her (sleeping form) and wanted her to be happy… Sigh… He loves her, but not selfish. 💗

      Muchas gracias por leer, mi amiga!! 😍

    • mari on October 16, 2016 at 7:43 am
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    Più lo rileggo e più mi piace… sono ansiosa di leggere il seguito…

    1. Grazie mille Mariacristina!! 😍😘 I’m touched, speechless too 💓

    • Sarah on October 16, 2016 at 12:48 am
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    Bonjour Mme puddles
    J ai dévorés ce chapitre trop court à mon goût 🤗 Mais tu as su bien mettre les pensée de la tente et Geoges moi même quand j avais lu le manga j ai essayé d’imaginer comment la tante et Geoges avait pu réagir à la réapparition de Albert
    La tante n est pas si mauvaise car elle aime réellement son neveu et comme le dit Georges candy à était bénéfique pour lui finalement il y a compris il a des responsabilités il étai pour lui d’avancer
    Hâte de voir la suite et je le demande pourquoi il n’a pas voulu dire que c’est candy qui l’a sauvé….
    😊 😘

    1. Bonjour Sarah!! 😘 The chapter is short because I want every chapter to focus on one or two points 😀 merci beaucoup! 😍

      I also think Aunt Elroy loves her nephew very much, and after missing for a long time, whatever he wanted she would likely grant his wishes. About Candy, Georges would find out from Albert himself 😉 Thanks for following 😘

  1. Bonjour Ms Puddle

    Je rejoins et je partage le commentaire de Candy Bert concernant le respect mutuel entres les deux hommes.
    Albert est toujours hésitant à se confier totalement à Georges et d’un autre côté il montre un engouement et une volonté de diriger la société et le clan familial probablement pour protéger Candy de sa famille.
    Quant à Georges il demeure toujours aussi discret et ne prend même pas la perche que lui tend Albert quand ils se trouvent dans le bureau.
    Je me demande pourquoi Albert est si hésitant à se confier à Georges. Albert pensait-il que Georges ne puisse pas comprendre sa relation entre lui et Candy ou bien avait-il peur que Georges devine ses sentiments plus qu’amicaux ou fraternels envers sa protégée…
    Hâte de lire la suite.

    1. Bonjour Antlay, mon amie! 😍
      Glad you agree with the relationship between Georges and his young boss in this story. Yes, they have mutual respect. 😀

      I believe the amnesiac experience has changed Albert considerably, and his willingness to work hard might have something to do with Candy. ❤ However, there’s probably more, and I’ll write in the future chapters.

      About Georges’ reaction to Albert’s question to him, Georges played on the safe side just in case he misunderstood the question. Do you think it makes sense?

      About Albert’s reluctance, you’ll read why in the subsequent chapters. 😘

  2. J’aime vraiment la relation entre Albert et Georges que vous décrivez, Ms Puddle! Ce respect mutuel, cette hésitation d’Albert à se confier complétement, c’est tout à fait fidèle à ces deux personnages. Bravo!👏
    Je pense comme vous, qu’Albert a décidé de prendre les rennes de la famille et des entreprises, à temps plein, afin de mieux protéger Candy, du moins en grande partie. Candy a tellement souffert au sein de cette famille à cause des Lagans, de leur mauvais traitement et des mensonges qu’ils ont perpétrés sur elle et qui ont biaisé l’impression que la tante Elroy a eu de Candy. Albert avait commencé à la protéger en l’adoptant dans l’urgence pour lui éviter le Mexique, pour moi c’était la seule raison car il ne l’a jamais considérée comme sa fille, quoiqu’en disent certains! Là encore vous le montrez très bien en utilisant le point de vue de Georges.

    1. Thanks again, Candy Bert, for your kind words. 😍 Yes, like you, I think Albert rushed to help Candy by adopting her, but he never really wanted to be a father at a young age. Besides, physically, he wasn’t old enough to be her father. 😌😅

      I know many of you understand why Albert returned to his family, even taking up the leadership. I do believe part of it is that he wanted to protect Candy and give her better prospects in life. He murmured to himself that he knew the hardships she had been through and wanted her to be happy, right?

      Also, he has more bargaining power with his aunt when he was willing to work hard from now on. 😆😉

    • Evelyn on October 12, 2016 at 8:45 am
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    You know, Ms Puddle? What I love about Albert is that he comes across as confident and knows his place in the family. Your story is consistent with the Manga. Love how Georges respects and knows how far he can go with his young master. He knows that there are many emotions and feelings still rumbling inside his master’s head so he gives him his space. Likewise, Albert is not quite ready to pour out his feeling to Georges about Candy. Can’t wait to see how or if Albert discloses his true feeling to Georges about Candy. Notice the urgency in his voice to start working full time as leader of his family business! Can’t wait to keep reading…!! 😀

    1. Hi Evelyn, glad you like how I portrayed Albert in this story, 😍 and I believe he was fully aware of his place in the family, which is the source of his confidence. Yes, I do think Albert wasn’t the kind of man who would pour out his inner feelings all at once. Georges knew him well, and he would undoubtedly keep his speculation in his heart too. 😘💓

        • Evelyn on October 13, 2016 at 10:22 am
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        Albert is definitely a reserved guy! and we can see that by the subtle way he acted with Candy. Just enough for us to know that he was in love with her! ❤ ❤

        1. Exactly!! He’s not the type that shows emotions easily; Candy said in CCFS (in her unsent letter to Terry) that Albert had brilliant poker face… LOL… 😍😀 However, when he confessed to be her prince, his eyes were moist. That speaks volumes, doesn’t it? ❤

    • marmalade on October 11, 2016 at 11:46 pm
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    Hi… ms puddlehaven….. i am feeling so happy with the story.. can’t wait for the next chapter…. plz… write fast for i cant wait to read the next chapter….
    really wondering the plot of this story, each story has a different, unique plot like love never fails and peculiar story…. keep the good work…..

    1. Thank you marmalade!! 😍 I’m delighted to hear you enjoy reading this story so far. That’s very encouraging, and many thanks for reading my other stories too 😘❤

        • marmalade on October 13, 2016 at 12:38 am
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        btw, aside from these 3 stories, any short story have u written and published so far, just in case i havent been able to track them…. because i really enjoy reading your story…. and to be honest i am re-reading the story “love never fails” again and the story still thrilled me…..

        1. Awwwwww… marmalade, your comment made my day! I can hardly believe you still find Love Never Fails interesting ❤😍💓

          Anyway, you can find my other stories in fanfiction.net or here on my blog. If you like, I can send you the links 😘😘

            • marmalade on October 13, 2016 at 11:05 pm
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            yes plz… do send me the link…. hehehe… it can save a lot of my time in searching…. thanks a lot….

              • Ms Puddle on October 14, 2016 at 8:25 am

              Many thanks for your interest, dear marmalade. This is the link:


            • JeannyJJ on October 16, 2016 at 12:53 am
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            Ms Puddle, I’ve read “Love Never Fails” at least 4 times, “My Prince Charming” 5 times and “Peculiar Relationship” 4 times! 😬 You’ve written so many wonderful stories, can’t get tired of reading them. 💕
            I wish you will write another modern day fiction like “My Prince Charming” story.

              • Ms Puddle on October 16, 2016 at 1:55 pm

              Dear JeannyJJ, 😍 I can hardly believe you have re-read my stories this many times, and your comments is more than encouraging, which definitely motivated me to keep writing! ❤

              I actually have a modern day story in mind, but I can only write one story at a time. 😆 Many thanks for following and reading my stories. 😘💓❤

            • marmalade on October 17, 2016 at 10:29 pm
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            actually, i have read love never fails and peculiar relationship twice each story… haha…. i think i am the only one who keep on re-reading same stories several times….

              • Ms Puddle on October 18, 2016 at 9:10 am

              Dear marmalade, thanks again for your encouragement, and it’s my honor that you’re willing to read the same stories more than once 😍😘

    • Bertgirl on October 8, 2016 at 6:59 pm
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    Es un gusto leer historias tan bien realizadas. Ms. Puddle es responsable de que cada día ame más al príncipe de la colina.

    1. Muchas gracias por leer, Bertgirl! 😍

      I’m so glad you like Prince on the Hill more because of this story!! Gracias!! 😘💓

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