A Man in Love – Chapter 10

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  1. Martha Cervantes Quiroga says:

    Este capítulo me ha dejado muy asombrada, primero descubrir que el trabajo de William Albert Ardley en el Blue River Zoo era en sus ratos libres, pues estaba ya ampliando los negocios familiares en Europa, ¡Wow! Después, la certeza de George que la identidad del compañero de cuarto es un secreto que ambos comparte. Pero lo mejor, todas la conjeturas de George sobre las razones que han motivado a William a hacerse presente como jefe de la familia, en todo caso motivado para proteger a Candy. Es como si todas las piezas del rompecabezas empezaran a encajar.
    Thanks. I really love this story! I finish reading with a sigh. See you soon

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Yes dear Martha in CCFS Albert wrote to Candy that working in the Blue River Zoo wasn’t the only thing he did in London. He wasn’t having fun time but to work with Georges, to prepare to start business there. I believe he meant to expand family business. However, I can double check CCFS. 😆

      About Georges’ speculation, they are my guesses too, that WAA wanted to protect Candy so that he could make her happy. In the manga, the night when he recovered, he stared at her (sleeping form) and wanted her to be happy… Sigh… He loves her, but not selfish. 💗

      Muchas gracias por leer, mi amiga!! 😍

  2. mari says:

    Più lo rileggo e più mi piace… sono ansiosa di leggere il seguito…

  3. Sarah says:

    Bonjour Mme puddles
    J ai dévorés ce chapitre trop court à mon goût 🤗 Mais tu as su bien mettre les pensée de la tente et Geoges moi même quand j avais lu le manga j ai essayé d’imaginer comment la tante et Geoges avait pu réagir à la réapparition de Albert
    La tante n est pas si mauvaise car elle aime réellement son neveu et comme le dit Georges candy à était bénéfique pour lui finalement il y a compris il a des responsabilités il étai pour lui d’avancer
    Hâte de voir la suite et je le demande pourquoi il n’a pas voulu dire que c’est candy qui l’a sauvé….
    😊 😘

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Sarah!! 😘 The chapter is short because I want every chapter to focus on one or two points 😀 merci beaucoup! 😍

      I also think Aunt Elroy loves her nephew very much, and after missing for a long time, whatever he wanted she would likely grant his wishes. About Candy, Georges would find out from Albert himself 😉 Thanks for following 😘

  4. antlay31 says:

    Bonjour Ms Puddle

    Je rejoins et je partage le commentaire de Candy Bert concernant le respect mutuel entres les deux hommes.
    Albert est toujours hésitant à se confier totalement à Georges et d’un autre côté il montre un engouement et une volonté de diriger la société et le clan familial probablement pour protéger Candy de sa famille.
    Quant à Georges il demeure toujours aussi discret et ne prend même pas la perche que lui tend Albert quand ils se trouvent dans le bureau.
    Je me demande pourquoi Albert est si hésitant à se confier à Georges. Albert pensait-il que Georges ne puisse pas comprendre sa relation entre lui et Candy ou bien avait-il peur que Georges devine ses sentiments plus qu’amicaux ou fraternels envers sa protégée…
    Hâte de lire la suite.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Antlay, mon amie! 😍
      Glad you agree with the relationship between Georges and his young boss in this story. Yes, they have mutual respect. 😀

      I believe the amnesiac experience has changed Albert considerably, and his willingness to work hard might have something to do with Candy. ❤ However, there’s probably more, and I’ll write in the future chapters.

      About Georges’ reaction to Albert’s question to him, Georges played on the safe side just in case he misunderstood the question. Do you think it makes sense?

      About Albert’s reluctance, you’ll read why in the subsequent chapters. 😘

  5. Candy Bert says:

    J’aime vraiment la relation entre Albert et Georges que vous décrivez, Ms Puddle! Ce respect mutuel, cette hésitation d’Albert à se confier complétement, c’est tout à fait fidèle à ces deux personnages. Bravo!👏
    Je pense comme vous, qu’Albert a décidé de prendre les rennes de la famille et des entreprises, à temps plein, afin de mieux protéger Candy, du moins en grande partie. Candy a tellement souffert au sein de cette famille à cause des Lagans, de leur mauvais traitement et des mensonges qu’ils ont perpétrés sur elle et qui ont biaisé l’impression que la tante Elroy a eu de Candy. Albert avait commencé à la protéger en l’adoptant dans l’urgence pour lui éviter le Mexique, pour moi c’était la seule raison car il ne l’a jamais considérée comme sa fille, quoiqu’en disent certains! Là encore vous le montrez très bien en utilisant le point de vue de Georges.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thanks again, Candy Bert, for your kind words. 😍 Yes, like you, I think Albert rushed to help Candy by adopting her, but he never really wanted to be a father at a young age. Besides, physically, he wasn’t old enough to be her father. 😌😅

      I know many of you understand why Albert returned to his family, even taking up the leadership. I do believe part of it is that he wanted to protect Candy and give her better prospects in life. He murmured to himself that he knew the hardships she had been through and wanted her to be happy, right?

      Also, he has more bargaining power with his aunt when he was willing to work hard from now on. 😆😉

  6. Evelyn says:

    You know, Ms Puddle? What I love about Albert is that he comes across as confident and knows his place in the family. Your story is consistent with the Manga. Love how Georges respects and knows how far he can go with his young master. He knows that there are many emotions and feelings still rumbling inside his master’s head so he gives him his space. Likewise, Albert is not quite ready to pour out his feeling to Georges about Candy. Can’t wait to see how or if Albert discloses his true feeling to Georges about Candy. Notice the urgency in his voice to start working full time as leader of his family business! Can’t wait to keep reading…!! 😀

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hi Evelyn, glad you like how I portrayed Albert in this story, 😍 and I believe he was fully aware of his place in the family, which is the source of his confidence. Yes, I do think Albert wasn’t the kind of man who would pour out his inner feelings all at once. Georges knew him well, and he would undoubtedly keep his speculation in his heart too. 😘💓

      • Evelyn says:

        Albert is definitely a reserved guy! and we can see that by the subtle way he acted with Candy. Just enough for us to know that he was in love with her! ❤ ❤

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Exactly!! He’s not the type that shows emotions easily; Candy said in CCFS (in her unsent letter to Terry) that Albert had brilliant poker face… LOL… 😍😀 However, when he confessed to be her prince, his eyes were moist. That speaks volumes, doesn’t it? ❤

  7. marmalade says:

    Hi… ms puddlehaven….. i am feeling so happy with the story.. can’t wait for the next chapter…. plz… write fast for i cant wait to read the next chapter….
    really wondering the plot of this story, each story has a different, unique plot like love never fails and peculiar story…. keep the good work…..

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thank you marmalade!! 😍 I’m delighted to hear you enjoy reading this story so far. That’s very encouraging, and many thanks for reading my other stories too 😘❤

      • marmalade says:

        btw, aside from these 3 stories, any short story have u written and published so far, just in case i havent been able to track them…. because i really enjoy reading your story…. and to be honest i am re-reading the story “love never fails” again and the story still thrilled me…..

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Awwwwww… marmalade, your comment made my day! I can hardly believe you still find Love Never Fails interesting ❤😍💓

          Anyway, you can find my other stories in fanfiction.net or here on my blog. If you like, I can send you the links 😘😘

          • marmalade says:

            yes plz… do send me the link…. hehehe… it can save a lot of my time in searching…. thanks a lot….

          • JeannyJJ says:

            Ms Puddle, I’ve read “Love Never Fails” at least 4 times, “My Prince Charming” 5 times and “Peculiar Relationship” 4 times! 😬 You’ve written so many wonderful stories, can’t get tired of reading them. 💕
            I wish you will write another modern day fiction like “My Prince Charming” story.
            😉

            • Ms Puddle says:

              Dear JeannyJJ, 😍 I can hardly believe you have re-read my stories this many times, and your comments is more than encouraging, which definitely motivated me to keep writing! ❤

              I actually have a modern day story in mind, but I can only write one story at a time. 😆 Many thanks for following and reading my stories. 😘💓❤

          • marmalade says:

            actually, i have read love never fails and peculiar relationship twice each story… haha…. i think i am the only one who keep on re-reading same stories several times….

            • Ms Puddle says:

              Dear marmalade, thanks again for your encouragement, and it’s my honor that you’re willing to read the same stories more than once 😍😘

  8. Bertgirl says:

    Es un gusto leer historias tan bien realizadas. Ms. Puddle es responsable de que cada día ame más al príncipe de la colina.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Muchas gracias por leer, Bertgirl! 😍

      I’m so glad you like Prince on the Hill more because of this story!! Gracias!! 😘💓

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