A Man in Love – Chapter 11

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  1. antlay31 says:

    Bonjour Ms Puddle

    C’est un chapitre très intéressant, vous comblez parfaitement certains passages qui n’apparaissent pas dans le manga ou le dessin animé notamment la scène de la présentation de WAA aux membres principaux de la société. J’imagine leurs regards surpris en découvrant que le président de cette immense compagnie et aussi le digne héritier du clan Ardlay est si jeune.
    J’aime beaucoup les passages où Albert se montre impatient de rentrer à la maison afin de dîner et de passer du temps avec Candy.
    Trop drôle la scène où ce pauvre Georges d’habitude si discret se fait prendre en flagrant délit par son maître alors que ce n’était pas son intention de le suivre et de le découvrir aux côtés de Candy. 😀 Albert va t-il penser que Georges l’espionnait ? Hâte de lire la suite !

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Antlay! Merci beaucoup 😍😘

      So glad you enjoyed reading my imagination of what could have happened the first time the young heir appeared to the senior executives 😆😋

      But after all it was the first day as president, and I suppose Albert was anxious about Candy too. She spent her first day in happy clinic too ☺

      Yes you’ll read more about what happens to Georges in next chapter. Many thanks for your continued support, my dear friend! ❤💓

  2. Anonymous says:

    Sono assolutamente d’accordo con i commenti degli altri lettori, ogni capitolo è un’emozione nuova… attendo ansiosamente il seguito…

  3. JeannyJJ says:

    Ms. Puddle, I always love it when you describe certain things in the story. For this one, I like how you describe people’s expression for meeting Albert. I can picture it in my mind.
    I also noticed the line ” he glances up on the clock on the wall from time to time,” Albert must be wanting to get back to Candy so she wouldn’t worry. 😛
    Another great chapter! Looking forward to the next! 😀

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hello dear JeannyJJ! 😍 Thank you so much for your encouraging words, and I’m so glad you like that particular scene when the executives first met their young president. 😊

      Yes in my imagination I believe Albert would get impatient by then; he used to be able to cook for Candy remember? 😝

      Thanks again for following! 😘

  4. marmalade says:

    oh my Gosh…!!!! salute for u miss puddlehaven…… it’s such a thrilling story to read…. i am waiting for the next chapter… cant wait already…
    btw, i had read several story from the link u share me at last chapter… i like the story, but u made me curious about the third child of Candy and Albert…. is it a boy or girl… plz… write again about the continuation of the story

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hello marmalade!! 😍 Thanks for your encouragements. So you have already read that short story plus others? Wow, you’re a fast reader I must say.👍👍 I don’t think I’ll write yet another sequel to that, but thanks for your interest 😘

      • marmalade says:

        hi…. u know, ur story drive my curiosity so that i re-read the comic book again…. i am wandering the end of ur story at this chapter 11 was the one when Candy buy 5 oranges and called ma’am by the seller. but at the comic book, Albert hasnt gain his memory yet….

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Thanks for asking, marmalade! 😍 I actually expected this question.😆 I was inspired by this scene in the manga, but it was not the same evening. Apparently, it’s a place where there could be many people buying groceries, including Candy and Albert. Does it make sense to you, my friend? 😁😀

          • marmalade says:

            okay… so it’s just the other night, but almost the same situation? hehe……
            btw, i am so curious about the third child of candy and albert… in your story “papa, what make a prince?” because at the end of that story, u wrote that candy is expecting…
            me… i like it to be son, so that they have 2 heirs.. and may be from that we can make it another story, u know like nowadays story where sibling fight for love, money and position….. but, that’s classic modern story, may be u can twist the story to be something fun to read, something to drive us to wait impatiently and so excited when the next chapter already published….

            • Ms Puddle says:

              Not the same situation but the same marketplace with crowd of people. 😊 The same lamppost too lol 😋😉

              About ‘papa what makes a prince’: many thanks for your eagerness, marmalade 😘 sorry I don’t think I have time to write a sequel for that. But you do have a very interesting plot in mind, so why don’t you think about writing it, marmalade? 🤔😀

          • marmalade says:

            haha… not good in writing… just reading…. if u happens to have time, plz do consider to write the next chapter, even if it’s a short epiloque…

          • marmalade says:

            been keep on checking ur website for the next chapter of this story, but everyday i keep on disappointed…. hahaha….. been more than 2 weeks already…. hope the next chapter is long enough… so it worth waiting…

            • Ms Puddle says:

              No marmalade… It’s not over two weeks yet… LOL 😌 But many thanks for your eagerness to read. 😍 When I read your comment, I already had my final draft ready, I couldn’t help smiling… Even though it’s not very long 😅😝

  5. Martha Cervantes Quiroga says:

    I hope Albert did’t think George was spying. I enjoyed this chapter. “Your sister must be worried, sir” I loved this phrase.
    Saludos mi estimada Ms Puddle.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      You’ll know in next chapter how they would react to this surprised encounter, dear Martha! 😍 So glad you liked that phrase from Georges. 😘

      • marmalade says:

        ms puddle, the way u said “you’ll know in next chapter how they would react to this surprised encounter” makes me wander what will come to ur next chapter, if they meet each other, of course candy will introduce albert to mr. william’s right hand man… or will george blurted out unconsiously calling albert mr.william instead?

  6. chosen615 says:

    The orange scene!! I love it because in that scene Candy and Albert looked like a lovely couple indeed. So glad you related it to A Man in Live 😀
    I cannot but admire every detail of your story again.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      You bet, chosen615! 😍 I was inspired by the orange scene in the manga. Like you, I think they are cute in that episode.

      Of course, the marketplace was always there, and it must be a popular place for groceries shopping in the neighborhood. 😉 Thanks for your compliments, dear chosen615! 😘

  7. Candy Bert says:

    Le grand jour pour WAA, sa présentation en tant que PDG, vous l’avez décrite telle que je pouvais l’imaginer. Une grande surprise pour l’équipe, en effet!
    Pauvre Albert qui voyait le temps passer en s’imaginant l’inquiétude de Candy pour son retard et manquer du temps avec elle!
    J’ai adoré la scène entre Candy et Albert, observée par Georges, maintenant Albert sait que son fidèle ami est au courant que Candy est sa co-locataire! Eh Eh… 😉 Je me demande quelle sera leur discussion à ce propos!?

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Candy Bert!! 😍 Merci beaucoup! 😘 So glad you like my imagination of what could have happened in the head office 😊

      About Albert’s impatience, it’s understandable. He didn’t expect he would be so late, and he probably still wanted to cook for her 😆 Yes, he saw Georges, and you’ll see in next chapter about what’s going to happen 😁

  8. Anonymous says:

    I guess I am the first one to read and comment on this chapter,as I check for update days and nights😂。good writing。

    • Ms Puddle says:

      And you’re lucky that I happen to see this notification 😘
      Thanks for reading! 😁😀 Glad you like it 😄

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