A Man in Love – Chapter 16

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  1. antlay31 says:

    Que ce chapitre est triste en effet.
    Mme Elroy toujours aussi intransigeante envers Candy même le jour des obsèques d’Alistair et cela malgré l’intervention et l’opposition d’Archibald.
    Très intéressant le passage entre Georges et Vincent. Ce dernier aussi devait ressentir qu’il n’était pas considéré comme un membre de la famille à part entière, par certains, on comprend pourquoi ses visites se faisaient si rares, il devait se sentir plus à l’aise à naviguer sur les océans.
    Cela a dû être un déchirement pour Albert de quitter Candy, un soir d’hiver, lui laissant juste une brève note et de l’argent et en ne laissant aucune trace derrière lui.
    Merci Ms Puddle ce très beau chapitre chargé d’émotions.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Antlay mon amie! 😘 Yes a sad chapter, and it was a little hard for me to write this in the new year when everyone was in a joyous mood… 😌

      Totally agree with you about Vincent, also an outsider in the family just like Candy. I found the scene in the manga very touching actually. 🙂

      Yes, it was time for Albert to leave… He can’t stay with her forever… Sigh…

  2. marmalade says:

    happy new year Ms. Puddlehaven and everybody who keep following this story like i do…
    Thanks for this chapter.. sad indeed… but i believe there will be rainbow after the storm
    waiting for the next chapter, hopefully next will be longer than this one…..

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Happy new year marmalade! Wishing you all the best in 2017! 🎇🎆🎉🎊

      You’re right, my friend, that there’s something good at the end of a storm. Thanks for following the story 😍🙂

  3. Martha Cervantes Quiroga says:

    I feel the cold and the sadness of Albert : (

  4. Mariacristina says:

    Fantastico! Sai catturare il lettore… è come tuffarsi in quell’atmosfera degli inizi del secolo scorso… emozionante…

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Grazie Mariacristina!! 😘 Yes I know I have written an emotional chapter, but you know it’s my imagination based on the wonderful manga version. So glad you like it! 😍❤

  5. JeannyJJ says:

    😢😢😢
    The pain Albert had, leaving someone he cared so much and not telling her his whereabouts is too much to bear…
    Imaging Candy woke up freshed, but just to find out the one she cared so much had left her without telling her where he was, without a way to contact him. She must be heartbroken at some point. 💔
    But isn’t this the way Candy come to find out about her feelings for Albert?

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thank you JeannyJJ for following still ❤. As you said, I wrote this based on the manga version. Albert had made a decision to leave Candy when she was asleep.
      Right, he decided to disappear… She wouldn’t be able to find him. That was always the case in the past, but this time, Candy couldn’t take this blow. 😫😥

      True, she didn’t know how precious someone was until that someone was gone… Sigh…

  6. Hani R says:

    Realmente muy triste el capítulo… Mi pregunta es, ¿Por qué le pide a George que nunca le cuente sobre él a Candy? ¿No piensa verla nunca más? Que terrible separación para los dos… Pobre Candy… La Tía siempre la culpo de todo…¿Qué dirá cuando sepa que fue ella quien cuido a su querido William? ¿Qué dirá cuando se de cuenta que William la ama con todo su corazón?

    • Ms Puddle says:

      ¡Muchas gracias por leer! 😊🙂

      You asked many good questions, and yes this is a sad chapter, as shown in the manga. You will find the answers in the next chapters, and thanks for following! 😘

      Saludos! 😃🙂

  7. Candy Bert says:

    Thank you for this new beautiful chapter full of emotions, indeed, there are so very sad and painful moments! :'(

    Aunt Elroy was so harsh with Candy and even with Archibald, poor lad who has just lost his big bro, she could have been more gentle!

    A touching dialog between Vincent and Georges. Indeed, Vincent Brown must have understood Candy very well!

    Finaly the leaving of Albert from Magnolia home! After all, it was totaly possible that Albert has come at Georges’ home in the middle of night. His sorrow and dejection were so palapable through Georges’ eyes. Sigh…

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Candy Bert 😍 Thank you so much for your kind words. Yes, this chapter isn’t easy to write, and that’s why I’ve been putting it off… Just kidding 😋😉 Yes, Albert had chosen to leave Candy in the middle of the night. He couldn’t tell her in person about his recovery… Sigh…

      Aunt Elroy was very mean to Candy by not allowing her to attend the funeral… The old lady blamed her for everything and intentionally isolated her from others… Vincent must have understood her feelings.

      Merci beaucoup mon amie ❤❤

  8. Delia Diaz says:

    Gracias a ti por compartir tus aportaciones. Te mando un mega abrazo

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