A Man in Love – Chapter 20

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  1. Lovly Ardley says:

    Ms Puddle

    También me encantó esta historia. Estoy un poco triste porque se acabó 🙁

    Espero que escribas más ya que tienes un extraordinario talento. I love you

    Lovly Ardley

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hola Lovly Ardley,

      ¡¡Muchas gracias por leer!!

      I like all my stories, and I’m grateful to all of you who write to me about them. Thank you very much! 💓❤️💖

  2. Mariacristina says:

    Carissima Ms Puddle, sono un po’ in ritardo ma volevo ringraziarti per questo ultimo capitolo e per tutto il racconto in generale che m’ha fatto emozionare…mi è piaciuto particolarmente il collegamento con “Peculiar Relationship” visto dagli occhi di Georges… sei stata bravissima… grazie ancora!

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Ciao amica! ❤️ So glad to know you have enjoyed this story, and yes there is some overlap with my other story Peculiar Relationship, but I tried not to repeat myself​, so how they found out Georges was sick is different this time. Grazie per il tuo sostegno, Mariacristina 💕💓

  3. Martha Cervantes Quiroga says:

    Ms Puddle
    I am happy because while I was reading about George and Candy’s letter, I understood the reason why Candy took revenge and named Albert Granduncle William, I think Candy decided played his game.
    The other point is the reaction Albert after his confession to Candy. I always imagine about that and your version it is pretty. I agree, I could see the Albert’s smile and felt his happiness.
    Thank you very much, my friend.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hola Martha, yes this story is my imagination based on the manga and CCFS, and I’m sure some readers might have imagined differently. I’m so glad you’re in agreement with my version, and I’m more than certain Albert was both happy and relieved that Candy accepted him as her prince. He was her first crush after all, and in CCFS, her attitude changed totally since then. She let her feelings for him show in her letters. It’s undeniable she missed him a lot… Sigh…

      Thank you Martha for your continued support ❤️🌺😘

  4. Sarah says:

    Bonjour
    Merci beaucoup de ce magnifique chapitre
    Un peu court à mon goût peux être que je ne voulais pas que l’histoire finissent 😍
    J ai repris depuis le début j adore lu et relu plusieurs fois je ne me lasse pas 😜
    Tout est si bien décrit sur Albert ❤️
    Je ferme les yeux et imagine les scènes que vous avez du si bien d’écrire
    Mille merci espère avoir bientôt le plaisir de lire une nouvelle histoire sur nos 💏
    🙏😘😘😘

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Sarah, ❤️🏵️🌹

      I’m very touched by your comment, and I felt very much encouraged too knowing that you’ve re-read this story over again.

      Merci beaucoup! 🌹😙❤️

  5. JeannyJJ says:

    Hi, Ms Puddle.
    So sad that this story has come to an end…😢

    Just wondering if this was in CCFS, about Sarah clearing Candy’s name because you also wrote it in the “Peculiar Relationship”.

    Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing!
    😊

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Yes JeannyJJ, this is the end. I thought of writing an epilogue but finally decided to leave it as is. 😅

      Yes, in CCFS it was Albert’s order for Sarah Lagan to clear Candy’s name during the opening party. We are not sure how many people were present however, but it said the clan.

      Many thanks for your continued support, JeannyJJ! 😗❤️

      • JeannyJJ says:

        I think this really showed how much Albert cared about Candy. Albert wanted to show and let the clan know that Candy is truly worthy to be part of Ardlay (and the future wife for the head of Ardlay)! 😮🤔

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Exactly, JeannyJJ. I believe Albert cared about Candy as a person. ❤️ He probably wasn’t thinking of the future matriarch, but to make amendments and seek justice for Candy without her knowing about it. The fact that the Lagans were required to make a formal speech (likely against their will to openly confess their past misjudgement) in their happy occasion also speaks volumes of Albert’s authority in the clan. Even the Lagans had to take his order, so to speak 🤔🙄

  6. Reeka says:

    Hello again, Ms Puddle.

    Just now, I re-read again this chapter more thoroughly. I laughed involuntarily when reading part that georges saw Candy’s drawing in Albert’s office. When he seemed doubtful if Candy searched Albert in Rockstown carrying this drawing around the little town. Bcos, sure she wouldn’t find Albert, none would recognize Albert from Candy’s drawing. I remembered the drawing in manga, it’s like Albert’s face had been crashed by a truck. 🤣🤣🤣 hahahaha

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thanks Reeka for rereading! 😗 Indeed it was a very funny looking drawing, and because of that it speaks volumes of why Albert loved it so much and even put it up in his office for his executives to see. 😂 Of course it was the meanings behind the picture that touched him. Imagine the flabbergasted moment when he discovered the truth from her mouth… Sigh

      That explains why Candy herself couldn’t help smiling when she spotted a bit of Dr. Martin’s drawing amongst her stuff in her jewelry box. 😍❤️

  7. antlay31 says:

    Bonjour Ms Puddle

    Merci pour ce merveilleux chapitre Ms Puddle, le seul regret c’est que l’histoire soit terminée.
    Tout comme Candy Bert et Reeka, la lecture des premières lignes m’a déroutée. Mais j’ai compris rapidement que le plus bel homme de l’assemblée ne pouvait être qu’Albert ! 😀
    L’histoire écrite du point de vue de Georges est très intéressante et comble les blancs de CCFS.
    Quel beau discours que rend Albert à son épouse, tendre et émouvant à la fois ! 😍
    Quant aux paroles de la chanson, elles sont juste parfaites et reflètent à merveille les sentiments qu’éprouvent Candy envers son Prince. 💞💕💓
    Merci Ms Puddle pour cette merveilleuse histoire et pour le temps et le travail passés à écrire pour notre plus grande joie. 😍😚💞💕👏

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Antlay, merci 😙

      I’m glad that you also like Albert’s groom speech and the song I picked. That’s very encouraging, especially I know how busy you are in real life.

      It’s not easy to write pretending to be Georges, but I’m happy to hear that you think his observations filled in the blanks. This reminds me I have yet written another post about Georges’ comment about Candy’s childish drawing. 😁😅 I should try to find it to show that I didn’t make this up. Georges did have some sense of humor after all. 👍😊

      Thanks again for your support and compliments. ❤️😍 I enjoyed writing this​ story actually. I just couldn’t update as frequently as I wanted. 😂😅

  8. reeka says:

    Hahahah same with Candy Bert, when I read first paragraph, I was a bit lost. I thought … did I miss a chapter? LOL. Great way to start it, Ms Puddle. I can imagine it’s not easy to write story in other character’s POV. And you made it perfectly with this “absent-minded Georges”, a virtue which was not so him at any normal day 🙂 .

    Albert’s speech was really moving, it had to be that way though. Their love story was so inspiring it would touch many people’s heart. Somewhat cliche, a cinderella kinda story, but our Candy was strong and had much more great qualities compared to Disney princesses, I say. And her story to have finally found her prince was not easy as well, no magic whatsoever 😉

    I love the lyric, my friend. Yes, it is sooooo perfect for Candy and her prince. Beautiful. But if I have to be honest, I don’t fancy Glover’s voice. Hahahaha. Oops.

    Thank you, Ms Puddle. See you and Take Care.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hello Reeka! Nice to know that you like the song too! The lyrics are simply perfect, and I didn’t know much about the song until months ago. Like you, I wasn’t fond of the singer’s voice 😂, but one day I heard a cover version on Spotify. It was very well done so the words caught my attention, and I couldn’t believe my luck, so to speak. 😅

      This story is special because it’s from Georges’ pov, and I do think he knew a lot more about the relationship between Albert and Candy than what was written in CCFS. His comment about Candy’s childish drawing speaks volumes, don’t you think? 😁

      I didn’t want to write another few chapters so you’re right, the easier way is to make Georges absent-minded… Lol 😊 Glad to hear that you also found Albert’s speech moving. I simply rephrased his letter to Candy in CCFS plus some of my own ideas. Sigh… He was deeply in love, no doubt. ❤️

  9. Candy Bert says:

    What a beautiful gift for Candy’s birthday, thank you very much, Ms Puddle! 💖🎂🎁
    By reading the first sentence I was wondering where were we? And when I read “the most handsome man” I knew it was Albert, so his wedding! 😍

    You put so many things in Georges’ recollections and present time. You reminded me your other wonderful fiction “A peculiar relationship” with another POV.
    I particularly loved the moment of Albert’s speech about his wife which was so moving, and Candy’s reaction too.💑💘👍
    The lyrics of the song are absolutely perfect to describe Candy’s feeling for her POTH.

    The only sad thought for me is this story is finished. Thank you, my friend for having entertained us with it, another beautiful story of yours, but as it is said in my country “Les meilleures choses ont une fin” that means best things have an end. Thank you for all your great work (stories, drawings, posts, answers to our comments always with kindness) and the time to do it, despite you are so so busy. 💕💖💗👏

    Take Care and have a beautiful Monday! 😘

    PS: just a typo I saw in the sentence before the last : you wrote “the gloom” instead of the groom. 😉

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Bonjour Candy Bert! Seeing that you left a comment here really touched me 😍 Merci beaucoup, mon amie ❤️

      Thank you so much for pointing out the embarassing typo!! I promptly corrected it… Lol… 😂

      There are so many things I wanted to fit in this chapter, my friend. However, I only put focus on a few important milestones in Candy’s life. This story is already longer than what I have planned ☺️, and originally I was going to stop in last chapter 😅 but I changed my mind.

      The song was from the movie Shrek, and I happened to read the lyrics months ago and was astonished of how perfectly​ it could describe the emotions of our beloved heroine, Candy! ❤️

      Take care Candy Bert. Best wishes 😗😙

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