Forget-Me-Not Chapter 2

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  1. DanielleV says:

    Hi Ms Puddle,

    I find this approach to your narrative riveting. I agree with many of the comments in this section that you’re giving much more complexity into Candy’s character.

    It would have been interesting to know what angle and how far Nagita would have gone into enriching Candy’s character if she wasn’t confined within editorial obligations and protocol. It’s ironic that she always wanted to break free from the alleged rigid terms of the Shōjo manga only to fall within even stricter terms from her publisher.

    I wonder whether it’s a matter of falling into such confines or mustering the strength of character and individual freedom to accumulate enough confidence so as to assert yourself and your work. I’m sure that other writers also confront such hurdles but they appear to be more willing to defend their work and eventually surmount such impediments. I’ve read about writers such as Jeffrey Eugenides, Toni Morrison, Esmé Weijun Wang, and many other such notable thinkers who often had to come face-to-face with their editors or other members of their professional environment which tried to thwart their work but to no avail because they would fiercely defend their work to the end. I ought to admit that I agree with this stance; I would also defend my own position when it came to my thesis at university when I was a postgrad as well as now that I’m in the job industry as I constantly have to defend as well as develop and evolve my work on a continual basis.

    That said, it goes beyond saying that people will confront hurdles in their work but what matters is how willing and determined they are to focus less on complaining and more on taking action. I guess each person has their own temperament and will-power. Certain people are passive recipients whilst others bear the self-esteem and confidence to be far more active and rebellious.

    Definitely looking forward to the next chapters of your new fan-fiction and I hope you consider to share more of your fan-art with us.

    Many Thanks!

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hello @DanielleV, glad to hear you enjoy my new story, and I hope you will like the following chapters too.

      I couldn’t agree more with you about the rest of your comment. I also wish Nagita-sensei could have spent more effort in section 3 and focused on character development.

      Just curious, what’s your expertise, DanielleV? You don’t have to tell, of course.

      I might draw again but for now I’ll concentrate on writing. Thanks for asking 😊

      • DanielleV says:

        Don’t mind at all. I completed my studies via a joint major in political science and sociology. I’m currently working in the public sector in a relevant field of expertise. It’s an administrative position.

        How about you? If I remember correctly, you’re a software engineer / pc specialist, right?

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Wow, @DanielleV. You’re in United States, right? Washington DC?

          Yes I’m a boring software engineer but I don’t consider myself any specialist, though I work across different platforms, Windows, Linux and Mac.

          • DanielleV says:

            Yeah, we’re back in DC ever since that orange clown got ousted and, presumably, people will be far more intelligent not to vote that moron back in the next elections. Best to never be complacent, however.

            And there’s nothing boring about being a software engineer; that’s a contradiction of terms. Your job and expertise are not only fascinating but they are also essential in our contemporary professional as well as research field.

            That being said, you’re creative in both the artistic and technological domains and you should be proud of that.👍

            • Ms Puddle says:

              Thank you @DanielleV for your encouraging words. I’m blushing already ☺️

              With the new administration, the rest of the world don’t get daily “jokes” anymore on Twitter lol. Let’s just hope that the previous president does get the punishment that he deserves. 🙏

              • DanielleV says:

                For us in the States, however, that moron’s Tweets were no joke because we were aware of the repercussions on a a financial as well as socio-political level. Needless to mention that the US was reduced to a laughing-stock worldwide because of that circus freak. Eventually, people received the “wake-up-call” and cast in their invaluable votes and the sensible majority won and, above all, Democracy prevailed.

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