Forget-Me-Not Chapter 6
Disclaimer: Candy Candy and all characters belong to Keiko Nagita, character images to Yumiko Igarashi and anime to Toei Animation.
I’ve been quite busy lately as I enroll myself in training during my spare time in hopes to advance my career. Please bear with me because this is the shortest chapter in Forget-Me-Not yet. Thanks for your understanding! Before I present the chapter though, I’d like to thank Corinne Messeant for her contribution. She took a picture in her recent vacation, and let me quote her words:
“Bonjour Ms Puddle au détour d’un chemin en vacances dans le Perigord, j ai vu cette colline et je n’ai pas pu m empêcher de la prendre e photo et de vous la partager🥰 je viens de finir de lire pour la 2e fois le roman “Candy” c’est peut être pour cela que cette colline m a fait penser à la colline de Pony 😉 portez vous bien en attendant la suite de votre fanfiction.”
Merci beaucoup, Corinne!! 🥰
— Ms Puddle
Chapter 6
When Candy is walking briskly towards Mr. Cartwright’s ranch, even from a distance, she can see three men ambling in the opposite direction, two of them wearing dark suits. As she slows down to act more like a lady, the sun is breaking through the morning clouds. The hair of the man in the middle shines like glowing molten gold, and she suddenly recognizes him and the one with dark hair right beside him. When she halts her steps in astonishment, she perceives that the man with sandy blond hair is also flabbergasted to see her. He’s oblivious to the fact that this is already the second time Candy witnesses him being with Mr. Cartwright. That being said, she did not identify the old man standing to the left of Albert until now, mainly because she did not expect to see the landowner sauntering with Albert and Georges.
Why on earth are they here on Mr. Cartwright’s property?
Albert, being caught in the very act, blushes profusely, not really because he’s being discovered. Arguably, he won’t be displeased if Candy finds out sooner or later; it’s just that he prefers to stay anonymous. Hence, there are other reasons why warm blood rushes up to his cheeks, which Albert is only willing to admit to himself. He finds Candy’s innocent looks very endearing; not only that, he actually misses her very much, especially since he’s been thinking about her this morning, and talking to Mr. Cartwright about her has intensified his feelings of nostalgia. On top of that, her voluminous hair, though a bit unkempt, reminds him of the mornings when he had to drag her out of bed so that she would not be late for work. Nevertheless, his inner voice urges him to deal with something far more urgent. In case Candy asks him, should he tell her the truth why he is with Mr. Cartwright in his ranch?
For the time being, the landowner is seriously having doubts whether he can keep a secret for Mr. Ardlay anymore. The same applies to Georges too. He wonders if his young boss is prepared for this situation. Regardless, Georges will keep tight-lipped about the land purchase, unless the others leak out the news.
It looks like none of them, including Candy, is moving until Albert makes a gesture of greeting to the girl. Thus, she emerges from her trancelike state, taking her first steps towards the threesome, and Mr. Cartwright raises his voice to ask the girl coming towards them, “Candy, is something the matter?”
Only then Albert becomes aware that she might need something from Mr. Cartwright, but as she shakes her head, striding forward at a quicker pace, Albert is able to close their gap with a few long, decisive steps. Candy notes that he’s not wearing any coat today, but he looks gorgeous just the same, his hair and skin particularly sleek, and his striped tie in navy and silver perfectly matches his dark grey suit.
As the other men follow behind Albert, a cowboy appears out of the blue, his horse neighing. As soon as the cowboy spots Mr. Cartwright, the cowboy charges his horse towards the old man. The old man immediately speaks up, his face marked with consternation, “Candy, Mr. Ardlay and Mr. Villers, one of my cows is actually calving today… might be having difficulties now.”
When Albert looks highly concerned and Georges frowns in response, Mr. Cartwright turns to the girl in their midst, asking, “Is everything all right, Candy?”
When she nods with a reassuring smile, the old man responds, “Excuse me then.”
“No worries,” says Albert. The landowner mouths “good luck” to him, giving him a wink, before he heads towards the horse. The cowboy is about to dismount to help, but Albert marches forward and offers his hand. With support from both the cowboy and Albert, Mr. Cartwright is able to mount the horse in one agile movement. Then the landowner thanks the businessman and waves his free hand before the rider urges his horse forward.
The cowboy’s appearance has caused quite a commotion, so Candy is completely distracted. By the time Albert returns to her side, she’s forgotten about the question on the tip of her tongue. Instead, she hears Georges say, “Miss Candice, I believe Sir William wants to have a moment with you alone.”
Albert is not the least surprised that Georges is able to see through him. Then Georges turns to the heir, saying, “Sir William, I’ll be waiting in the car.”
“Thank you, Georges,” Albert utters with appreciation. “I won’t take long. No change of plan.”
After giving the young boss a nod of acknowledgement, Georges bids his goodbye to Candy and walks away. While Albert waits until Georges is out of earshot before speaking again, Candy raises her eyes and surreptitiously adores his features for just a second too long. When he catches her staring at him, she instantly lowers her gaze, her cheeks flushed like rose petals. As a result, not only her youthful complexion gives a bashful glow, it also has an additional touch of loveliness.
Albert reacts with a look of stupor, unknowingly fixing his eyes upon the girl, but within seconds his strict upbringing helps him to pull himself back together. He coughs to gather attention from her, and when she does, he asks, “Candy, have you got the invitation to the memo-“
Before he finishes his question, she responds with an exaggerating nod. When a dazzling smile spreads across his lips, she diverts her eyes to the ground again, unable to keep their eye contact. Her inexplicable diffidence bewilders him, and the memory of their previous interactions on the hill comes back to his head. The sun was setting back then, and she behaved like this too. Does anyone else think that Candy has changed? Or is it just me? Since when did she become so shy and awkward with people?
But he clears his throat and says in a matter-of-fact tone, “Georges and I are on a tight schedule today, Candy.”
She nods then looks up, and he asks sincerely, “But would you do me a favour?”
Despite being somewhat troubled by his formal tone, she manages to banter with him, “It depends.”
The mischievous grin on her face makes her even more adorable, but he averts his eyes and produces a letter from his pocket, saying, “I was going to mail this to you-“
She cuts him off impatiently, taking the letter from his hand, “What is it about?”
He shakes his head, feigning disapproval while clicking his tongue. “Be patient, Candy. You will know when you read my letter.”
As she pretends to pout and stares at somewhere far off, crossing her arms over her chest, he chuckles. Then he utters with a rueful frown, “I really have to go.”
When she responds by dropping her defensive posture, he asks, “But will I see you tomorrow?” At the same time she says, “I’ll give you my verbal reply tomorrow then.”
Because they spoke up simultaneously, neither could hear each other clearly, so she raises her eyes to his, her round eyes glittering questioningly. However, after they lock eyes for several seconds, a mutual understanding is established without a word. A slow smile works its way across his face and into his resplendent eyes, and the same happens to her. The next thing she knows, he leans forward and plants a peck on her forehead, which catches her off guard.
“See you soon, Candy.”
Lucky for her, Albert turns on his heel and hurries his way to join Georges. Otherwise, he would have noticed that her rosy cheeks have turned beet red. He smells different but amazing today, and his fragrance seems to have radiated from his neck. The last time he gave her a chaste kiss like this, which he said was an amulet, was after she had successfully escaped from Neal’s trap. Candy knew Albert meant to comfort her then, and indeed his amulet had miraculously helped her simmer down.
Little does she know that he was overwhelmed with profound feelings for her, which he couldn’t quite explain. He wants to blame it on his recent disturbing dreams, mixing his flashbacks of their times living together in a tiny apartment and his times in Kenya with Kim, but then he remembers he had a similar experience ten days ago when he was departing from the orphanage. Back then he was held back primarily because they got an audience.
So perhaps his dreams weren’t what had influenced him. Maybe his mind has been preoccupied by the fondest memories of Candy ever since Mr. Cartwright demanded an explanation of what had truly motivated Albert, so Albert was in the mood to show great affection towards Candy. He did refrain from pulling her into his arms and was able to give her a light, friendly kiss without touching her with his hands. Yet, he caught a whiff of her sweat mixed with soap, which seemed to be lingering in the air even after he pulled away. It did not bother him at all, but rather, he became even more nostalgic as the mental snapshots of them happily doing chores together resurfaced in his mind.
Only after Albert is gone that Candy realizes her question about Mr. Cartwright has totally slipped her mind. Oh well… I can always ask him later… possibly tomorrow?
The mere thought that she will see him again soon invigorates her, so she’s eager to carry out her original goal of coming to the ranch. She plans to read his letter after rescheduling the appointment for Miss Pony and Sister Lane.
=o=o=o=
Having finished all his tasks in the medical clinic, Albert began a slow saunter towards the cabin he had rented as his temporary lodging in Kenya and marveled at the magnificent scenery of the vast landscape. It was his favourite time of day when the afternoon was transitioning into the evening, the sun languidly sinking across the sky. Before long, something shiny caught his attention, and he saw a lady with lengthy blond tresses about two yards ahead of him. He sped up his pace to approach her, saying, “Hi, you’re Kimberly, right?”
When she turned around to face him, Poupe also recognized her, even though she looked much younger when not wearing her nurse uniform.
“Good memory,” she affirmed, a sweet smile gracing her lips. “Are you lost, Albert?” she teased him; he was the new guy with a pet skunk.
He laughed then answered, “No, but if I want to send a letter to London, is there something like a post office in this village?”
“Yes, there is,” Kimberly replied, reaching out to the skunk on Albert’s shoulder. Poupe jumped to her hands with no reluctance. “But it’s quite far away from the railway so I’m not sure how long it takes for them to deliver mail overseas.”
“Oh, is that right?” he responded, sounding thoughtful.
“Do you have your letter with you?” she asked, stroking Poupe’s fur. “I know Jag’s relatives work in the city.”
As always, she kindly offered her help, her hazel eyes sparkling and her skin luminous under the warm evening sun. He helplessly averted his eyes before he replied with a question, “You mean Jagdeep?”
“Yes, his relatives migrated from British India to construct the Uganda railway around a decade ago, Jag told me.”
“I see. In that case I can ask him myself. Thank you, Kimberly.”
“Don’t mention it. I didn’t really help.”
Then Albert whistled a tune. Poupe understood and leaped out of Kimberly’s hands back to his shoulder, and he said to her, “The main road forks here, so bye now. I’m heading this way.”
She later found out he lodged in a place not that far from hers. Since that day, they often ran into each other before or after work, and their friendship naturally grew. One early morning, she spotted him on her way to work, and she gave him a nudge as soon as she had caught up with him. He jumped with a start and complained after taking off his sunglasses, “Just when I thought I heard someone running towards me… So it was you?”
They burst out laughing. He must admit she looked attractive clad in an African sleeveless flowery dress and sandals. Soon after that, he thought out loud, “How old are you, Kim?”
She was taken aback, and she stopped in her tracks, asking him with a frown marring her features, “Did your mother ever teach you that it’s rude to ask a woman her age?”
Sadness flashed across his eyes, but he promptly concealed his emotions and apologized.
“Just kidding, Al!” she exclaimed. Then she questioned without hiding her concern, “What’s wrong? Are you offended?”
“Nothing,” he uttered with a chuckle, putting his sunglasses back on his face. She stared at him, unconvinced.
“Really,” he insisted, pasting on a smile. When she narrowed her eyes in a skeptical way, he tried to distract her by telling her about an orphan girl in London named Candice White, but Albert deliberately kept it a secret from Kim that Candy had been adopted.
“When I first saw you in the clinic, you actually reminded me of Candy.”
“No way!”
“Yes, it’s true. Anyway, I just started writing a letter to her. She’s taking a summer break from school, and I suppose she’s less than five years younger than you.”
“How do you know for sure?” she bantered, giggling.
He answered with a half-smile, “Based on my educated guess, you’re at least eighteen.”
She unexpectedly stopped walking, staring at him intently. As he looked at her with his eyebrows raised quizzically, she revealed, “I take that as a compliment, Al. I’m actually turning twenty this year.”
“Aha!” he uttered happily. Then they continued their jolly chats about his teenage friend in London. “I met Candy when she was but a child… near an orphanage called Pony’s Home.”
“Pony?” she echoed.
As he nodded, she asked, “A small horse?”
Then he explained it was the name of one of the persons in charge of the orphanage in the southern part of Michigan.
“Michigan? You were from Michigan too?”
He merely smiled at her; he neither confirmed nor denied his origin because he had indeed spent years in Lakewood as a boy.
In retrospect, telling Kim about Candy was Albert’s spontaneous attempt to steer the conversation away from himself. Interestingly, Kim had not forgotten about Candice White; since then, she had initiated the topic about Albert’s peculiar friendship with the orphan girl once in a while, always referring to her as Candice White. Albert willingly cooperated, answering her questions about Candy. Initially, he surmised Kim was intrigued to know about a girl who lightly resembled her; another possible reason was that he had written a letter to this girl but nobody else.
One evening after they began seeing each other, they were holding hands, meandering through the winding country road while admiring the sunset. Then Kim mentioned Candice White again, which was absurd to some extent, so Albert was upset and asked Kim directly, “Are you suspecting anything?”
As Kim lowered her head and kept her silence, Albert said with emphasis, pulling her into his arms, “Listen, Kim. I do care about Candy, but she’s only a friend.”
When Kim quietly nestled her head against his shoulder, he lifted up her chin gently so that he could see her face. He then asked, “You don’t believe me, do you?”
Her facial expression betrayed her. Troubled by the insecurities in her eyes, his heart constricted. Her instinct must have sensed that he had reservations about their relationship; truth be told, he still could not be utterly honest with her, especially about his real identity. However, at this moment, he let his emotions get the better of him and succumbed to his desires. He dipped his head and sealed her luscious lips with a tender kiss. She gasped but instantly responded to him with love, encouraging him by circling her arms tightly around his waist. As much as he found her desirable, he broke off their first kiss not long after that, partly because he didn’t want to scare her and partly because he had mixed feelings. On one hand, he was truly delighted to advance their relationship, but on the other hand, his conscience bothered him even more. Yet, she couldn’t have looked more alluring, her flushed face beaming with joy.
From that day on, Kim finally stopped asking him about Candice White. At any rate, Albert had not anticipated that the names “Candice White” and “Pony’s Home” would become the clues for Kim to reconnect with him one day. Time flies, and now Candy is nineteen herself.
“Sir, are you looking for me?”
A man’s voice jerks Albert back to the present, abruptly ending his recollection of how he got to befriend Kim before he fell for her.
When Jagdeep returns from his leisure walk in the late afternoon, he’s startled to see a blond-haired gentleman standing right outside the mountain lodge, apparently lost in deep thought. Jagdeep does not think he knows the visitor, but who else can be visiting him? Nonetheless, Jagdeep would rather not hazard a guess.
At the sight of Jagdeep, the pensive expression on the visitor’s face is replaced with a grinning one.
“There you are, Jagdeep!”
His voice did match Albert’s, and Jagdeep’s jaw drops. Kimberly only told him that Albert no longer kept his hair past his shoulders, but Jagdeep is unaware of Albert’s natural hair colour.
“Al… Albert?”
Albert reacts by animatedly opening his arms wide. Without hesitance, Jagdeep accepts Albert’s welcoming gesture by giving his old friend a bear hug. After all, they were close friends while working in the same medical clinic. Even after Albert moved to a different place to work, Jagdeep continued to keep in touch with him, visiting each other from time to time.
“So, how are you?” Albert asks as they let go of each other.
Jagdeep relates the improvements of his sleeping patterns to his friend and thanks Albert for his generosity from the bottom of his heart. Jagdeep is about two inches shorter, and he used to have an athletic build like Albert, but Albert can feel that his friend has lost a significant amount of weight. Yet, Jagdeep does not look that sick anymore, so relief unleashes within Albert. He encourages Jagdeep to keep up his daily exercise, rain or shine.
So Jagdeep thanks Albert again for providing the temporary shelter, and that is when Albert casually inquires, “So where’s Kim? Isn’t she with you?”
To his dismay, Jagdeep whirls around and takes a step backward, avoiding his blue eyes. Albert, filled with apprehension, asks without delay, “What’s the matter?”
But Jagdeep looks down without a reply, and Albert’s worried frown deepens, unable to tolerate the suspense any longer. He places a heavy hand on Jagdeep’s shoulder and demands, “Is Kim in trouble or what? Tell me!”
Not only the tone of his voice, but also the weight of his hand reflect the angst Albert is feeling right now. Jagdeep then spins sideways and casts him a fleeting glance before he finally speaks up, “I hope… I mean I think she’s fine. She’s not here but she’ll be back.”
Albert does not have the slightest idea that Kim has packed her belongings and left the morning after she came. Since Jagdeep sounds far from anxious, Albert presumes Kim is coming back anytime soon, so he eases up a little and removes his hand from Jagdeep. A strained smile then erases the creases between his brows.
“I’m terribly sorry for my outburst, Jagdeep. She’s your fiancée after all.”
As Albert rakes his hair with his fingers to mask his embarrassment, Jagdeep opens his mouth for a long moment before words come out, “How much time do you have for me, Albert?”
The businessman checks his watch, saying, “Regrettably, I have less than an hour left.”
Then Albert explains that he is as busy as a worker bee, but he has specifically allocated an hour time slot for his friends from Kenya. It was bad timing unfortunately. When Albert reached the mountain lodge, the helper answered the door and said the male guest had gone for a walk.
“I’m supposed to attend a formal dinner with my relatives after this, so I need to go back to the villa to freshen up.”
The dinner is hosted by his aunt, who is scheduled to arrive with Archie’s parents in half an hour, approximately.
“Fair enough. Then let me show you something. Follow me.”
=o=o=o=
“Candy, please open your mouth slightly,” says Annie. When Candy obeys her like a little girl, Annie explains, “By doing this your eyes will relax, so this gives me more time between your blinks.”
Candy is sitting down on a chair in Miss Pony’s office, already dressed up, but Annie insists that her friend can use some cosmetics. “With gloomy weather like today, you’ll look too pale in dark clothes.”
Candy understands what Annie means; both Annie and Patty appear very stylish and overall more mature than usual, comparable to those Gothic beauties. Understandably, Patty has been very quiet and reserved ever since she stepped into the orphanage. While Annie focuses on applying makeup, Patty is busy taming and weaving Candy’s curly hair into a loose braid over her left shoulder.
Needless to say, Miss Pony and Sister Lane are thrilled to see Annie again, who has grown to be a graceful and charming lady. Also, they are more than pleased to meet Patricia and Annie’s boyfriend, Archibald, who urges the teachers to call him Archie. He’s such a handsome, gentle and chivalrous gentleman, not unlike his young uncle. In fact, Archie’s soft, shoulder-length hair reminds Miss Pony of another good-looking young man. Miss Pony has forgotten his name now but remembers he was Candy’s friend in London; he wanted to visit the place where Candy had spent her childhood, especially the hill she had fondly talked about repeatedly. That was the only time Miss Pony and Sister Lane had seen him, and Candy had not mentioned this friend from London ever again.
Meanwhile, in the kitchen area, when Archie is patiently waiting for the ladies to get ready, the teachers are unable to stop talking, like how they discovered Annie on the same day Candy arrived and how the girls grew up together like twins until the Brightons adopted Annie, and so on. Of course, Archie knows all these already, but he keeps smiling and nodding, sipping his cup of coffee while listening to Miss Pony and Sister Lane reminiscing. His manners are pleasing, and the teachers could not be happier for Annie.
When someone opens the office door at last, Archie quickly stands up, and he hears a scurry of footsteps. More than a handful of orphans, mostly girls and two young boys, are very curious to see what Candy is like wearing a fancy dress with a pair of polished leather shoes with heels.
The kids then gaze in awe at the three women in black, and Archie can hardly believe his eyes. Where is the tomboy, the one who is skilled in lassoing or climbing trees? It’s not like he’s never seen her well-dressed or with a chic hairdo, but even though Candy is a bit self-conscious, she looks absolutely stunning. The next thought that pops up in his head is his uncle’s foreseeable reaction. Feeling slightly amused, Archie has no more doubt that he’s truly over Candy. He then levels his eyes on the ladies and says to them after planting a light kiss on Annie’s cheek, “What an honour it is to escort three beautiful ladies today! Shall we get going now?”
So Candy turns to say goodbye to her teachers. Her voice jolts them out of their daze, and one swallows hard while the other blinks, bidding their goodbyes. The truth is, they perceive for the first time in their lives that their beloved child has matured and can appear like a real genteel lady, so proper and elegant. With tears welling in their eyes, they tell her there is no need to rush home in the evening. Candy replies with an understanding nod, secretly wrapping her fingers around her prince’s badge in her purse as though it would give her the strength she needs. She can’t wait to see Albert to tell him she’s read his letter but at the same time she dreads meeting with Great Aunt Elroy.
=o=o=o=
Writer’s note:
Thank you so much for reading! I hope you like it, despite its length. As always, if you find any mistakes or typos in this chapter, please kindly let me know. I truly appreciate your time. Many thanks to Amy Giz 🥰💞 for making GIFs out of some of my fanarts, and I’m showing two here. If you want to view the rest of them, please go to Facebook and find them using these hashtags: anohito, mspuddle, candyxalbert, albertycandy.
Hello,
I have enjoyed my time reading the progress of your fan-fiction so far. It is amazing how competently you manage to grasp the crux of Nagita’s story without writing a mere replica of it- but at the same time, not losing any of your own individual writing style either. It appears that you have comprehensively understood the meaning and significance of fan-fiction which is purported to offer insight into a story where the original author-for reasons unbeknown and her own-decided to leave as ‘loop-holes’ and moot points.
The photograph by your contributor is also beautiful and it reminds me of a tranquil landscape I had visited during a camping trip with my colleagues and friends.
Hopefully, this global pandemic will become a long and distant memory and we may all resume to our otherwise more extrovert and outdoor way-of-living.
Best Wishes!
Hello @Halcyon Days, thank you for taking the time to catch up my fanfiction, and your positive feedback and encouraging words are greatly appreciated ❣️ 🤗 I’ll try my best to keep up.
About the photograph, I like it a lot too. I can see different mountains from where I live, but none of them reminds me of Pony’s Hill like this particular photo.
I suppose many of us wish that the pandemic will soon become history, but based on the current trend, I’m not so optimistic at all. 🥺 Yet, best wishes to you too!
Perhaps the situation will improve following the availability and circulation of the medication/pill provided by Merck and Pfizer. It could also help those who are vaccine hesitant, at least up to a certain point.
I would agree.. No matter how many restrictions are imposed by governments, a cure for this global pandemic is required since neither restrictions nor vaccines on their own constitute the panacea. Vaccination is essential but it’s a lame duck on its own without the required medication to reinforce its effectiveness.
Hello @Ms Puddle!
This photograph shared by your friend is lovely. If she lives anywhere nearby, she’s very lucky.
Nature is very important to both Candy and Albert. Therefore, it would make sense that they would choose to live in the countryside in the USA, UK, or anywhere else in the world. Keiko Nagita has also expressed her love for nature and she has reflected this via her most significant characters in the CCFS being Candy and Albert.
What also unites those two beautiful blondes is their utmost affection for Ms Pony’s home and you have adeptly depicted this in your awesome fanfic so far.
Thank you!
My sentiments exactly, @DanielleV. Thank you for your encouraging words! 🤗 As you’ve pointed out, it’s clear Candy and Albert shared quite a few common interests.
They also had quite a lot in common in terms of their mentality and altruistic mindset.
Well said, @DanielleV. Candy is sure lucky to have Albert as her best friend (likely her lifelong partner too 😉 )
There’s a question I’ve been meaning to ask you about the old novel.
In the newer version, Candy clearly states that there is no paternal nor fraternal relationship between her and Albert and that she views Albert as a man very special to her. In her letter to Annie, Candy also explains that she was never properly and legally adopted as her childhood friend was. It is crystal clear that Nagita wanted her readers to know (even though some delusional and unintelligent fans continue to desperately deny it via their silly tantrums) that there is absolutely no father-daughter nor brother-sister relationship going on between Candy and Albert. Did Nagita make this perfectly clear in the old novel as well?
Thanks!
It’s a good question, @DanielleV. The thing is, I’ve only read snippets of the old novel, so I don’t know the answer.
However, I did read one letter in the old novel that Candy was very angry at Eliza or Neal (or both) for getting in the way of Annie and Archie’s courtship. While this part is more or less the same in the final story, Candy in CCFS did not write to the Lagans directly. What’s more, in the old novel, Candy seemed to be threatening the siblings that she might use her influence as the adopted daughter of Granduncle William.
I don’t know what the others think but I myself don’t like this in the old novel at all. In CCFS Albert used his authority to end the opposition to the engagement, and it seems he did it out of his own will, not because he had been affected by anyone. What do you think, @DanielleV?
Those are significant alterations. Thanks for letting me know, Ms Puddle.
In response to your query, it appears to be straight-forward in the CCFS that Albert acted upon his own free-will when making such important decisions. Candy does not seem to have urged or pressured Albert in any way-either directly or indirectly. On the contrary, the textual evidence of this revised novel suggests that Albert’s dynamic actions in clearing Candy’s name and endorsing the engagement between Archie and Annie were the products of his own initiative, exclusively.
Again, this is based on the textual evidence provided by the official translations of the CCFS which I have access to and in my possession (aka bookshelf). I am not in the position to make the same claim for the original text as I don’t know Japanese.
Thank you very much for sharing the progress of your new fan-fiction. The photograph by your contributor is also awesome and contributes effectively to your story.📷✨
It’s rather ironic how Candy could not figure out that Albert had been her POTH all along. No wonder Albert (aka ‘Anohito’) would tease her inability to discern appearance from reality and thus draw erroneous assumptions about people. Candy had even thought that Albert was a pirate and later on suspected that he may have been involved with the mafia because he was spotted wearing expensive dark suits.🤣
I’m so looking forward to the next chapter of your fan-fiction. I want to see your take on how Candy eventually finds out that Albert was her beloved POTH.❤️🔥
Thank you so much @DreamCatcher for your kind words, and as you said, the picture that Corinne Messeant has taken is very nice 🥰
About Candy not realizing that Albert was her prince, I couldn’t agree more with you. In the manga it might make sense because the time between her discovery and his confession wasn’t long. However, in CCFS my guess is at least two years had elapsed.
About Anohito teasing her “judging people by their appearance”, it’s so Albert don’t you think? 😉
It sure is!
Excellent work, as always! Please, do not worry about the length of your chapters. What matters is the content. Besides, less is more.
Thank you @Gabriella for your encouraging feedback 🤗 I’m so glad to hear that “less is more”. 😚
Your signature style is most certainly high quality writing reliant on being concise without resorting to verbosity. Needless to mention your proficient and excellent command of grammar usage and vocabulary. That being said, your written work is always a pleasure to read.
Thank you so much for your compliments @Gabriella! I’m blushing right now… ☺️ Though I don’t think I’m that great a writer, I’m undoubtedly blessed with supporters like you 🤗
Hi!
Pleased to read the next chapter of your fanfiction series. The main characters of your story are well-developed even though they are complicated personalities. But that’s alright because that is what makes them exciting and even more intriguing to begin with. I also prefer this more sombre version of Candy where she’s less of a happy-go-lucky (aka tra-la-la) caricature but a more intricate and mature individual who’s got her own embedded, well-hidden insecurities and personal conflicts to confront and eventually surmount.
Hope you’re fine and not exhausting yourself too much with work. I know it’s not always possible because obligations have the habit of piling up mercilessly but some rest and time off the professional workload would help a bit.
Talk to you again soon!
Hello @Myra! Thank you for your positive feedback to my fanfic❣️ Thank you for your concern! I do take breathers, and writing and drawing do help me relieve stress. 😉 This time I decided to publish a short chapter because I don’t foresee I have much free time until after next week.
Take care and stay safe 😘
It’s going to be very hectic for me at work too until the holidays. Free-time has become a luxury for some of us, apparently.
Take care, @Myra! I was kinda stressed out and could not sleep well. It’s a warning sign to me so I forced myself to slow down a bit. Thank God now it’s better. I hope nothing like this happens to you, Myra 🤗
Thank you for your concern which is very kind of you. I would suggest you sign up for a medical check-up and consult with your medical doctor. Perhaps you need to take some vitamin supplements or follow a specific regimen as advised by the relevant medical experts. No matter how much we enjoy our work and our job, our physical needs also need equivalent attention and respect.
Hello Ms Puddle, I’ve enjoyed reading this chapter very much. Thanks for sharing and keeping us posted.
I’ve got a question which has to do with the novel. Was Albert’s age also mentioned in the old novel or was this additional information found in the newer text?
Thanks, in advance.
I almost forgot to ask if there is further information surrounding the age of the other characters in the old novel and if there are any discrepancies with the newer text.
P.S. Please send my regards to Corrine and thank her for sharing that beautiful and serene landscape with us.
Hi @Christine, I think there are discrepancies but I’m not 100% sure. It seems that even Nakayoshi Magazine had contradicting information when the manga was being serialized. That being said, many believe Anthony was around 16, the same as Archie, who was 2 years younger than Stear. Terry was younger than Anthony.
However, in CCFS, Anthony was 15 when he died, and if I remember correctly, Terry’s age wasn’t even mentioned. I have a feeling that Terry was around Stear’s age though, because he could rent a place and start working full-time in Stratford. Just a guess though. Please kindly let me know if I’m wrong. Thanks! ☺️
Interesting information. In the novel, however, Terry is surely not younger than Anthony because Archie and Stear mention sharing the same classes with him at the St Paul’s boarding school. In the revised novel, Terry is probably the same age as Archi or Stear or somewhere in between.
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I think so too @Gabriella, and if I recall correctly, Terry said he had been in the boarding school for a long time.
That’s an interesting point. However, it depends whether that boarding school comprised elementary school along with junior high and high school. Based on today’s standards, Candy would have been in junior high as she was only 13-14, whilst Archie, Stear and Terry would have been in high school. If Terry’s father had dumped Terry at that boarding school since elementary, it could explain why Terry had mentioned that he had spent a long time at that awful place.
That’s a good point, @Gabriella. I don’t remember the details of that boarding school though. I just assumed Terry was possibly Stear’s age and had been dumped in that awful place since junior high. 😅
Seems legit.
Hello @Christine, thank you for your encouraging feedback 🤗
About Albert’s age in the old novel, if I’m not mistaken, he mentioned in his reply to Candy something along the line “I was afraid I’d ruin the image in your memory. The prince was Anthony’s age…”
So that’s why many fans used to think Prince on the Hill was around 15 to 16.
Right.. So, there appears to have never been any definitive reference with regards to Albert’s age in the original novel as published during the late 70s. Did the situation change with the various revisions, thereafter, albeit prior to 2010? If not, it’s interesting that Nagita chose to insert a specific age for Albert as she had done for Candy, Anthony, Archie and Stear.
Sorry @Christine I don’t know the answer to your question about the old novel. You might want to check with Mariella because she owns a lot of CC materials, including Nakayoshi magazines and the old novel(s).
About this specific change in CCFS, I found it interesting too because the author specified how old Albert was but kept Terry’s age vague instead.
No worries, Ms Puddle. I was simply asking out of sheer curiosity. Besides, Nagita is infamous for being vague and inconsistent regarding the Candy Candy story. In my opinion, she should have demonstrated some decent respect for her readers by providing a resolution as do all writers who respect themselves and their readers.
I would also like to thank you for your recommendations. I’ll look into them asap.
You’re welcome, @Christine! If you find anything please share it with us 😘
I’ll be glad to be of help. Best regards!