Forget-Me-Not Chapter 6

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  1. Halcyon Days says:

    Hello,

    I have enjoyed my time reading the progress of your fan-fiction so far. It is amazing how competently you manage to grasp the crux of Nagita’s story without writing a mere replica of it- but at the same time, not losing any of your own individual writing style either. It appears that you have comprehensively understood the meaning and significance of fan-fiction which is purported to offer insight into a story where the original author-for reasons unbeknown and her own-decided to leave as ‘loop-holes’ and moot points.

    The photograph by your contributor is also beautiful and it reminds me of a tranquil landscape I had visited during a camping trip with my colleagues and friends.

    Hopefully, this global pandemic will become a long and distant memory and we may all resume to our otherwise more extrovert and outdoor way-of-living.

    Best Wishes!

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hello @Halcyon Days, thank you for taking the time to catch up my fanfiction, and your positive feedback and encouraging words are greatly appreciated ❣️ 🤗 I’ll try my best to keep up.

      About the photograph, I like it a lot too. I can see different mountains from where I live, but none of them reminds me of Pony’s Hill like this particular photo.

      I suppose many of us wish that the pandemic will soon become history, but based on the current trend, I’m not so optimistic at all. 🥺 Yet, best wishes to you too!

      • Halcyon Days says:

        Perhaps the situation will improve following the availability and circulation of the medication/pill provided by Merck and Pfizer. It could also help those who are vaccine hesitant, at least up to a certain point.

        • Lynn says:

          I would agree.. No matter how many restrictions are imposed by governments, a cure for this global pandemic is required since neither restrictions nor vaccines on their own constitute the panacea. Vaccination is essential but it’s a lame duck on its own without the required medication to reinforce its effectiveness.

  2. DanielleV says:

    Hello @Ms Puddle!
    This photograph shared by your friend is lovely. If she lives anywhere nearby, she’s very lucky.
    Nature is very important to both Candy and Albert. Therefore, it would make sense that they would choose to live in the countryside in the USA, UK, or anywhere else in the world. Keiko Nagita has also expressed her love for nature and she has reflected this via her most significant characters in the CCFS being Candy and Albert.
    What also unites those two beautiful blondes is their utmost affection for Ms Pony’s home and you have adeptly depicted this in your awesome fanfic so far.
    Thank you!

    • Ms Puddle says:

      My sentiments exactly, @DanielleV. Thank you for your encouraging words! 🤗 As you’ve pointed out, it’s clear Candy and Albert shared quite a few common interests.

      • DanielleV says:

        They also had quite a lot in common in terms of their mentality and altruistic mindset.

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Well said, @DanielleV. Candy is sure lucky to have Albert as her best friend (likely her lifelong partner too 😉 )

      • DanielleV says:

        There’s a question I’ve been meaning to ask you about the old novel.
        In the newer version, Candy clearly states that there is no paternal nor fraternal relationship between her and Albert and that she views Albert as a man very special to her. In her letter to Annie, Candy also explains that she was never properly and legally adopted as her childhood friend was. It is crystal clear that Nagita wanted her readers to know (even though some delusional and unintelligent fans continue to desperately deny it via their silly tantrums) that there is absolutely no father-daughter nor brother-sister relationship going on between Candy and Albert. Did Nagita make this perfectly clear in the old novel as well?
        Thanks!

        • Ms Puddle says:

          It’s a good question, @DanielleV. The thing is, I’ve only read snippets of the old novel, so I don’t know the answer.

          However, I did read one letter in the old novel that Candy was very angry at Eliza or Neal (or both) for getting in the way of Annie and Archie’s courtship. While this part is more or less the same in the final story, Candy in CCFS did not write to the Lagans directly. What’s more, in the old novel, Candy seemed to be threatening the siblings that she might use her influence as the adopted daughter of Granduncle William.

          I don’t know what the others think but I myself don’t like this in the old novel at all. In CCFS Albert used his authority to end the opposition to the engagement, and it seems he did it out of his own will, not because he had been affected by anyone. What do you think, @DanielleV?

          • DanielleV says:

            Those are significant alterations. Thanks for letting me know, Ms Puddle.

            In response to your query, it appears to be straight-forward in the CCFS that Albert acted upon his own free-will when making such important decisions. Candy does not seem to have urged or pressured Albert in any way-either directly or indirectly. On the contrary, the textual evidence of this revised novel suggests that Albert’s dynamic actions in clearing Candy’s name and endorsing the engagement between Archie and Annie were the products of his own initiative, exclusively.

            Again, this is based on the textual evidence provided by the official translations of the CCFS which I have access to and in my possession (aka bookshelf). I am not in the position to make the same claim for the original text as I don’t know Japanese.

  3. DreamCatcher says:

    Thank you very much for sharing the progress of your new fan-fiction. The photograph by your contributor is also awesome and contributes effectively to your story.📷✨

    It’s rather ironic how Candy could not figure out that Albert had been her POTH all along. No wonder Albert (aka ‘Anohito’) would tease her inability to discern appearance from reality and thus draw erroneous assumptions about people. Candy had even thought that Albert was a pirate and later on suspected that he may have been involved with the mafia because he was spotted wearing expensive dark suits.🤣

    I’m so looking forward to the next chapter of your fan-fiction. I want to see your take on how Candy eventually finds out that Albert was her beloved POTH.❤️🔥

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thank you so much @DreamCatcher for your kind words, and as you said, the picture that Corinne Messeant has taken is very nice 🥰

      About Candy not realizing that Albert was her prince, I couldn’t agree more with you. In the manga it might make sense because the time between her discovery and his confession wasn’t long. However, in CCFS my guess is at least two years had elapsed.

      About Anohito teasing her “judging people by their appearance”, it’s so Albert don’t you think? 😉

  4. Gabriella says:

    Excellent work, as always! Please, do not worry about the length of your chapters. What matters is the content. Besides, less is more.

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Thank you @Gabriella for your encouraging feedback 🤗 I’m so glad to hear that “less is more”. 😚

      • Gabriella says:

        Your signature style is most certainly high quality writing reliant on being concise without resorting to verbosity. Needless to mention your proficient and excellent command of grammar usage and vocabulary. That being said, your written work is always a pleasure to read.

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Thank you so much for your compliments @Gabriella! I’m blushing right now… ☺️ Though I don’t think I’m that great a writer, I’m undoubtedly blessed with supporters like you 🤗

  5. Myra says:

    Hi!
    Pleased to read the next chapter of your fanfiction series. The main characters of your story are well-developed even though they are complicated personalities. But that’s alright because that is what makes them exciting and even more intriguing to begin with. I also prefer this more sombre version of Candy where she’s less of a happy-go-lucky (aka tra-la-la) caricature but a more intricate and mature individual who’s got her own embedded, well-hidden insecurities and personal conflicts to confront and eventually surmount.
    Hope you’re fine and not exhausting yourself too much with work. I know it’s not always possible because obligations have the habit of piling up mercilessly but some rest and time off the professional workload would help a bit.
    Talk to you again soon!

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hello @Myra! Thank you for your positive feedback to my fanfic❣️ Thank you for your concern! I do take breathers, and writing and drawing do help me relieve stress. 😉 This time I decided to publish a short chapter because I don’t foresee I have much free time until after next week.

      Take care and stay safe 😘

      • Myra says:

        It’s going to be very hectic for me at work too until the holidays. Free-time has become a luxury for some of us, apparently.

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Take care, @Myra! I was kinda stressed out and could not sleep well. It’s a warning sign to me so I forced myself to slow down a bit. Thank God now it’s better. I hope nothing like this happens to you, Myra 🤗

          • Myra says:

            Thank you for your concern which is very kind of you. I would suggest you sign up for a medical check-up and consult with your medical doctor. Perhaps you need to take some vitamin supplements or follow a specific regimen as advised by the relevant medical experts. No matter how much we enjoy our work and our job, our physical needs also need equivalent attention and respect.

  6. Christine says:

    Hello Ms Puddle, I’ve enjoyed reading this chapter very much. Thanks for sharing and keeping us posted.

    I’ve got a question which has to do with the novel. Was Albert’s age also mentioned in the old novel or was this additional information found in the newer text?

    Thanks, in advance.

    • Christine says:

      I almost forgot to ask if there is further information surrounding the age of the other characters in the old novel and if there are any discrepancies with the newer text.

      P.S. Please send my regards to Corrine and thank her for sharing that beautiful and serene landscape with us.

      • Ms Puddle says:

        Hi @Christine, I think there are discrepancies but I’m not 100% sure. It seems that even Nakayoshi Magazine had contradicting information when the manga was being serialized. That being said, many believe Anthony was around 16, the same as Archie, who was 2 years younger than Stear. Terry was younger than Anthony.

        However, in CCFS, Anthony was 15 when he died, and if I remember correctly, Terry’s age wasn’t even mentioned. I have a feeling that Terry was around Stear’s age though, because he could rent a place and start working full-time in Stratford. Just a guess though. Please kindly let me know if I’m wrong. Thanks! ☺️

        • Gabriella says:

          Interesting information. In the novel, however, Terry is surely not younger than Anthony because Archie and Stear mention sharing the same classes with him at the St Paul’s boarding school. In the revised novel, Terry is probably the same age as Archi or Stear or somewhere in between.

          • Gabriella says:

            Archie

          • Ms Puddle says:

            I think so too @Gabriella, and if I recall correctly, Terry said he had been in the boarding school for a long time.

            • Gabriella says:

              That’s an interesting point. However, it depends whether that boarding school comprised elementary school along with junior high and high school. Based on today’s standards, Candy would have been in junior high as she was only 13-14, whilst Archie, Stear and Terry would have been in high school. If Terry’s father had dumped Terry at that boarding school since elementary, it could explain why Terry had mentioned that he had spent a long time at that awful place.

              • Ms Puddle says:

                That’s a good point, @Gabriella. I don’t remember the details of that boarding school though. I just assumed Terry was possibly Stear’s age and had been dumped in that awful place since junior high. 😅

    • Ms Puddle says:

      Hello @Christine, thank you for your encouraging feedback 🤗

      About Albert’s age in the old novel, if I’m not mistaken, he mentioned in his reply to Candy something along the line “I was afraid I’d ruin the image in your memory. The prince was Anthony’s age…”

      So that’s why many fans used to think Prince on the Hill was around 15 to 16.

      • Christine says:

        Right.. So, there appears to have never been any definitive reference with regards to Albert’s age in the original novel as published during the late 70s. Did the situation change with the various revisions, thereafter, albeit prior to 2010? If not, it’s interesting that Nagita chose to insert a specific age for Albert as she had done for Candy, Anthony, Archie and Stear.

        • Ms Puddle says:

          Sorry @Christine I don’t know the answer to your question about the old novel. You might want to check with Mariella because she owns a lot of CC materials, including Nakayoshi magazines and the old novel(s).

          About this specific change in CCFS, I found it interesting too because the author specified how old Albert was but kept Terry’s age vague instead.

          • Christine says:

            No worries, Ms Puddle. I was simply asking out of sheer curiosity. Besides, Nagita is infamous for being vague and inconsistent regarding the Candy Candy story. In my opinion, she should have demonstrated some decent respect for her readers by providing a resolution as do all writers who respect themselves and their readers.

          • Christine says:

            I would also like to thank you for your recommendations. I’ll look into them asap.

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