Forget-Me-Not Chapter 10
Disclaimer: Candy Candy and all characters belong to Keiko Nagita, character images to Yumiko Igarashi and anime to Toei Animation.
Thank you all for following Forget-Me-Not. Your encouraging feedback means more than you can imagine, and I truly appreciate your continued support. When I published last chapter, I thought by the time I publish the next, the war in Ukraine would have ended. Unfortunately and sadly, this is not true. Let’s continue to pray that it will not last much longer. 🙏🏻
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-Ms Puddle
Chapter 10
“Good night, Annie,” says Patty weakly.
“Good night, Patty! Too bad you’ve changed your mind,” Annie replies. Patty was invited to sleepover at the Brightons for another night, but on their way back to Chicago, Patty experienced motion sickness.
Wallace drops off Annie first mainly because Patty’s place is nearer to his family’s mansion. He didn’t know Patty felt unwell. The ladies were so quiet that he thought they had fallen asleep. It had been a long day after all.
Yet, being curious, he asks, “Did it happen to you this morning, Miss Patricia?”
Patty quietly shakes her head. At this moment, Annie suggests to her, “How about you come into my house anyway? My mother knows what to do and I can keep you company.”
Annie knows Patty’s parents are at a Christmas party and may not be home yet.
But Patty only smiles; she looks very pale. Annie gets the hint and bids them both good night. At that, Wallace is about to get off, but Annie stops him, saying, “Wallace, don’t worry about it. I can open the door myself.”
But Wallace insists on walking Annie to the front entrance. When the housekeeper shows up, Wallace says, “Good night, Miss Annie. I’d better go now.”
Then she reveals her suspicion. Since he was unaware of Patty’s relationship with Stear, during the ride, he brought up the fact that he had received the invitation and could have attended the memorial service a while back. Because neither of the ladies responded, Wallace sensed it was time to shut up. Around ten minutes of dead silence later, Annie started a new topic, but Patty had not chimed in ever since. Before long, Annie lost herself in deep thoughts too.
Now that Annie has filled him in, Wallace feels bad, asking, “What should I do now?”
“I guess we should respect her wish to be alone,” she replies. “Anyway, thanks again for giving us a ride today.”
He wants to say he’s the one who should thank the ladies; because of them, he got to spend hours with Candy, which was way longer than he had ever dreamed of. However, he utters, “Please thank Archibald for making the arrangement for me.”
As she nods, he waves goodbye and runs back to his car. By the time he takes a peek at the rear seat, Patty has dozed off, her glasses slid down her nose. In repose, she no longer looks edgy and surprisingly pretty, her thick eyelashes casting shadows on her cheeks in the dim lighting. On one hand, he’s glad that she has complete trust in him. On the other hand, pity rises inside him, wondering what drove her boyfriend to leave everything behind. It was a point of no return in so many aspects of things.
With renewed respect for Alistair, Wallace does not have the heart to wake up the sleeping beauty. Her house is about twenty minutes from here, so he figures he can wait till he arrives at her place. But on his way there, a car comes out of nowhere, driving at an alarming speed. To avoid collision, Wallace spontaneously jerks the steering wheel. Due to snow and slushy mess on the road, the car skids and ends up hitting the curb.
Wallace grumbles before getting out of his car, “What a crazy driver! Must be drunk!”
Patty rouses and looks around; she recognizes the secluded neighbourhood, so she alights and approaches her friend. He’s checking if there’s any obvious damage, and what he dreads has materialized. One of the tires is now flat. As he mutters something under his breath, noticeably peeved, she buttons up her overcoat and timidly says, “I know my way from here, on foot.” She hardly knows him, and she’s loath to get stuck with him.
“Then what about me?” he retorts, hiding his frustration beneath a wry smile.
Once she realizes her self-absorbedness, she murmurs, her eyes downcast, “What a selfish whim I am.”
But he instantly utters, embarrassed, “No no, Miss Patricia!”
“I’m serious. I should not desert a friend in time of need, and it’s snowing.”
“It’s nothing. I can fix it. It just takes time,” he explains. “Unlike my brother. He’s an engineer.”
She drops her head, her heart constricted. Stear would have fixed this in no time. Then she hears him add, “But a gentleman should not let his lady friend walk in the dark by herself, for sure not in Chicago, especially this area! Besides, you’re feeling unwell.”
Before she came to the United States, Stear had told her that Chicago had long registered a consistently high crime rate, so she mumbles, wrapping her wool scarf tighter around her neck, “I’m better now after the nap, but you’re right. Thanks for your kindness.”
“No sweat.”
After making sure his car is locked, he gives her his umbrella. “I suppose you need this.”
She’s touched. “How about you?”
“It’s only dry snow,” he says, putting on a beret and a coat. Then he gestures with his hand, saying to her, “Would you like to lead the way, Miss Patricia?”
She thanks him with a grateful smile and opens his umbrella. As surmised, she’s not chatty, at least not with him, so he attempts a different conversation starter, “Candy told me you’ve applied for a few colleges?”
When she nods in response, he sincerely expresses his admiration, “I have not met any young ladies in my social circle who’s keen to attend a college. Most of them grow up with their governesses, and after their introduction to society, they are basically waiting for the day to be transferred from one luxurious life to another through marriage.”
Then he continues telling her why he found Candy very special. “She honours her calling in life and embraces it,” he concludes after a lengthy but coherent speech.
Patty agrees wholeheartedly and even discloses how she was inspired by Candy’s boldness to face the discrimination and harassment at St. Paul’s Academy.
Wallace thinks, so she originated from London, just as I have suspected.
She concludes, “We are equal in God’s eyes; men and women are created in the image and likeness of God, in spite of our origins.”
“Well said!” He readily agrees, adoring Candy even more after hearing her account.
“So I stood up for what I believed in, which was… unprecedented.”
He can imagine, but aloud he remarks, “You must be proud.”
“No, I was scared, but it was liberating…” she replies in a low voice, looking down. “I mustered up the courage not to let my so-called friends dictate how I should feel or act anymore.”
Then Wallace asks about what her friends made her do; once he gets a vague idea, he can barely contain his indignation. However, when he asks for details about the bullying, Patty evades the issue, “If Candy wants to tell you more, she will.”
“The Lagans,” he says nonetheless, “are notoriously spoiled.”
She returns a polite smile without another word, but he goes on, “In fact, because of them, my parents decided not to send us to study abroad like the Cornwell brothers-”
He halts abruptly, inwardly cursing himself for his blunder. However, whatever he says next might only make things worse. Then her question comes when she perceives that he’s mortified, “Did Annie tell you?”
When he nods, she breathes out a long sigh, staring into the distance. As they continue strolling, other than their footsteps and the cars occasionally passing by them, they are completely silent. So far there are but a few pedestrians far away from them.
Five minutes later, Wallace breaks the silence, “Miss Patricia, what do you plan to study?”
Patty is hesitant to tell him about herself, so she replies, “I haven’t finalized my decision yet. How about you? What’s your major?”
As a matter of fact, none of the ladies asked him this question today, including Candy. Needless to say, he was disappointed about that. Aloud, he begins, “I’ve always wanted to be a journalist, but-”
“Journalist?” she echoes, interrupting him.
“Yes, what’s wrong?”
“Nothing,” she answers briefly, shaking her head slowly from side to side.
“But too bad,” he continues, “my parents-”
By now, they’ve reached the key junction near their destination, and she cuts him off again, “I’m terribly sorry, Mr. Ritchie.” She addresses him using his last name to keep it formal. “The snow is getting heavier, and my place is around the corner.” She doesn’t want her neighbours to spot them walking together.
“You must be tired of me,” he utters in a mocking tone. “I got it.”
“No, I don’t mean that,” she promptly denies, passing the umbrella back to him regardless. The moment he steps forward and grabs the shaft right above the handle, she releases her grip and dips her head to avoid his eyes, mumbling, “Thanks for walking me home.”
She lives in an affluent neighbourhood like his family, whereas the Brightons have recently moved and downsized their house, now selling their grand mansion.
“My pleasure, Miss Patricia,” he replies. “But quite frankly, for my peace of mind, let me walk you to the door.”
This morning he picked up the ladies from Annie’s place, so he has no idea what her house looks like. Yet, most of the houses on these streets have manicured lawns behind the fence, and the paths leading from the gates to the front entrances are often obscured by all sorts of bushes.
Only then she remembers, lifting up her chin, “Oh no… I’ve left my bag at Annie’s house!”
Looking her straight in the eyes for the first time, he’s stunned by her charm; she’s shy and always avoids direct eye contact. Not only that, once he realizes he’s within her arm’s reach, his face turns red. Compared to Archibald, Wallace is admittedly inexperienced with ladies.
At this very moment, a well polished black car swishes by and rounds the corner. As the driver pulls the car to a stop, the window on the passenger’s side is rolling down. Then a fashionable lady sticks her head out, looking at them with amusement.
“Patty, I thought you were with Annie? Who’s this good-looking fellow?”
This unexpected encounter jars Wallace out of his daze. Like Miss Patricia, this charming lady wears glasses and also speaks in a British accent; Wallace wonders if she’s Mrs. O’Brien, but her vibrant looks seem to indicate that she’s at most ten years older than Miss Patricia. Is she one of her cousins?
He then turns to look at the lady right beside him; she covers her mouth with a hand, undoubtedly flabbergasted.
=o=o=o=
“Albert,” Candy calls his name in a tender voice. “Wake up.”
His eyes flutter open. Feeling disoriented, he slowly brings his focus to her smiling countenance, her petite frame backdropped with the evening sky. Candy has become such a beauty… wait, where are we?
They are not alone, and yet the deck is not crowded. Albert is half-lying down on a lounge chair, his long legs stretched out. He then recalls the cross-Atlantic trip where Georges escorted young Candy from Pony’s Home to St. Paul’s Academy. Unbeknownst to her, Albert boarded the same ocean liner bound for England but often stayed in his own stateroom to prepare for his works in expanding the family business in London. Back then, when the passengers were boarding, he could see Candy from afar, accompanied by Georges and dressed like a real lady, like right now.
That said, Albert must admit Candy undoubtedly looks more mature than her younger version for the time being. In addition, her sparkling eyes are brimming with adoration.
“The ocean breeze makes me feel chilly… are you cold, my love?”
She shakes her head, a contented smile on her face. “Your Christmas gift to me, this white fur coat, is very warm and snug.”
“Wonderful,” he responds affectionately. “When I passed by a boutique during my business trip, it caught my attention. Its colour reminded me of you, not because of your last name, but because you had been my angel when my morale had been at rock bottom. Not only that, you’re pure and innocent, like fresh snow that hasn’t been contaminated.”
She lowers her gaze and blushes even deeper. The next thing he knows, his right hand reaches out to her; she grasps his hand tightly with her own and gently says, “Albert, we should go now.”
“Why? Are we in a hurry?” he teases. Even though he has no idea why he’s traveling with her and where the ocean liner is taking them, an idea brings a mischievous smile to his lips. “I’d be more than willing to get up if a certain lady lets me kiss her, Candy.”
Just then, someone gives his shoulder a nudge. Who is that?
He promptly turns his head over his shoulder. A little boy in his pajamas is staring at him with a smile on his face. Albert suddenly becomes aware he’s in a dim, tiny office, reclined on a worn out chaise longue and covered by a light blanket. Like the boy, he’s also wearing nightclothes. Why am I with a kid? Where am I?
Though the fingers of dawn are rendering the room grayish blue, at this moment Albert recognizes the pattern of his sleeping suit; he blinks, his head reeled with what took place last night. When a rooster crows, he’s finally awake and remembers the details, including why he’s stayed at the orphanage and spent a night with the boy called Sean.
Nevertheless, Albert can’t help but whip around to look for Candy, but of course she’s no longer here. It was merely a sweet dream… we were in love, heading somewhere together.
“You were talking in your dream, Albert.”
Sean’s comment makes Albert almost lose his composure, but the man pastes a grin on his face, shrugging casually. “Really? What did I say?”
“I just woke up,” he replies, a smile materializing on his face, “but I heard Candy’s name, so I poked you. You want me to find her?”
The boy spent the night sleeping on a thick mat right beside the chaise longue. Last night, when Albert went into the office with Miss Pony and Sister Lane, waiting for Candy to show him whatever she had in mind, Sean appeared out of the blue, sucking his fingers. Just when Sister Lane got up from her chair, intending to bring the boy back to his bed, he melted down, crying and clinging to the male visitor. The man quickly finished his cup of tea and invited the boy to sit on his lap; as soon as the boy settled down, the boy grinned ear to ear and wiped his tears with his own hands. Miss Pony explained that Sean missed his father dreadfully, but his father had unfortunately lost his life in a car accident, and his mother could not afford to raise all the kids on her own. Besides, she had been suffering from a chronic disease.
“Chronic disease?”
“Yes, some form of arthritis, we were told,” answered Sister Lane with a sigh.
When Candy entered the office, she appeared rejuvenated and no longer wearing the red cape. However, Albert did not turn his head; he was talking to Sean, gently stroking the boy’s blond curls. When Albert asked if the boy missed his mother, the boy nodded firmly, biting his lip. Candy was moved to witness that, and despite the fact that the boy was holding back tears, Candy had never seen Sean more content. She surmised the boy’s late father must have blond hair too, because Sean did not act like this when Wallace had been here earlier.
“Wallace?” echoed Albert, looking up at Candy. “Who’s…”
But Candy inadvertently avoided his eyes and brushed the invisible dust from the letter in her hand, her gaze downcast as she spoke, “Here, Granduncle William. This is from Dr. Martin.”
Her reaction essentially answered his question, and a grim picture appeared in Albert’s mind. The young man’s name must be Wallace Ritchie, who visited Candy today… How long have they been seeing each other? Since the memorial service?
Nevertheless, Albert consciously masked his feelings and started reading the enthusiastic reply from Dr. Martin. Needless to say, he was extremely touched by Dr. Martin’s counter-proposal, his dejected feelings transformed into those of excitement.
“Candy, would you want to work for Dr. Martin again?”
“Probably,” she replied, careful not to let her answer sound too glib. She had indeed pondered on that possibility. Albert really knew her more than anyone, but Candy averted her eyes and mumbled in a monotone, “That’s all I wanted to show you.”
He gave an understanding nod and responded by taking an exaggerated look at his watch. “I must go now, Miss-”
Before he finished talking, Sean threw a tantrum and accidentally knocked over the teapot. Spontaneously, Albert pushed the boy away from him, and the instant the lid fell off, spilling the tea, a piercing shriek escaped from Candy.
“Albert!”
That was enough to distract him and caused him to turn in her direction. By then, the tea was dripping over the edge of the desk.
“Ouch!”
He flinched as his thighs were drenched in dark brown liquid; Candy dashed to his side and cried his name again before she dragged him away, her voice filled with anxiety.
While Sister Lane was busy wiping the desk, the boy started panicking, partly in fear of punishment but mainly because he was genuinely worried about the male visitor. Just then, Miss Pony approached the man with a neatly folded towel in her hand, but Candy acted decisively, speaking to Miss Pony, “Let me help him.”
Albert resolutely declined, “No, I can take care of this myself!”
But she ignored his protest and took the towel. “Please follow me, Albert.”
“Can I come too?” Sean whimpered with pleading eyes. “I’m so sorry.”
While Sister Lane said “No” and explained that it was the child’s bedtime, Albert answered, “Yes, Sean, you’re welcome to be my helper. I hope that’s ok, Sister Lane?”
After exchanging glances with her partner, Sister Lane acquiesced and uttered in a stern tone, “Sean, you have to go to bed after this.”
The boy agreed. He then trailed after Candy, holding the visitor’s hand while walking to the boys’ bathroom. When Albert and Sean went in, Candy said, “Albert, I’ll fetch the first-aid kit now.”
But he stopped her by landing a hand on her shoulder. When she spun around, he remarked, his voice not much louder than a whisper, “Candy, it’s worth getting wet because I could hear you say my name again.”
She was nonplussed, her eyes widened and her face flushed with pink. He was going to say that it meant so much to him to see that she still cared about him a lot, but he changed his mind at the last minute.
“Besides, the tea was not burning hot, so it wasn’t too bad. Don’t bother getting the first-aid kit.”
She murmured with a quizzical frown, “Are you sure?”
When he gave her an assuring nod, fixing his eyes on her, she unexpectedly turned on her heel and strode out.
“Where are you going?”
“To get you some clothes to change!”
He doubted there were any clothes that fit him, but he went ahead and gingerly took off his damp trousers. As he dried his legs with the towel, Sean offered his hand, and Albert let him help.
“I really miss my daddy,” the boy muttered. “Can you be my daddy?”
“Unfortunately, no, Sean,” the man replied as tenderly as he could.
“Why not?” The boy did not hide his disappointment at all.
“It’s simple. I’m not married,” Albert answered, smiling however. “I have to find a wife first, and so far I have no luck.”
Sean suggested eagerly, “Candy is good. I like her.”
I wish… But Albert laughed with amusement, hiding his feelings. “It’s not that simple, Sean. When you’re older, you will understand.”
“Not again!” The boy sounded angry, crossing his arms. “All adults speak like that!”
“Ok ok,” Albert came up with an excuse. “Tell you what, I’m afraid I’m too old for her.”
“Too old?” the boy repeated doubtfully. “Why?”
Candy was on her way back to the bathroom; she didn’t mean to eavesdrop, but their conversation threw her off balance. As she tried to register Albert’s words, it suddenly occurred to her that Albert had not legally adopted her. What did he mean by not having any luck? What about Kimberly?
Then she heard what he said about their age difference. Maybe it’s the other way… he thinks I’m too young for him…
Seconds later, she reprimanded herself for dwelling on this issue. After all, she should try to move on and forget him. Hence, she coughed to get their attention.
“Candy, is that you?” asked Albert.
“Yes.”
“Sean, can you bring the clothes to me?”
“Of course!”
The boy then came out, speaking earnestly, “Candy, please tell me you like Albert too.”
“Sean!”
The grown-ups called his name simultaneously. While Candy could not be more embarrassed, Albert urged, “I beg you… hurry up, Sean. I’m cold.”
The boy instantly grabbed the clothes from Candy’s hands and rushed back in.
“Candy?” Albert called her from inside. “What a delight to know you’ve kept my pajamas! I’ve been wondering about that… but-”
“But?” she echoed.
“Does this mean I’m going to stay here tonight?”
“Good question,” she murmured after letting out a sigh of resignation. “We don’t even have a guest room here.”
When the man and the boy walked out from the bathroom, Miss Pony had come to check on them. The sight of Albert dressed in the familiar clothes evoked fond memories of Candy’s precious moments with him back in the apartment. The young lady helplessly glanced away, the logical side of her brain reminding her to address him as granduncle again and ask him to leave the orphanage but the emotional side wishing he would spend the night here.
Her dilemma didn’t last long. He said to her, “I still have my luggage in the car, so I can get changed again and leave.”
Candy’s heart sank upon hearing that; she felt with dismay that she apparently lacked the willpower in this matter. Presently, Miss Pony apologized and then added, “Mr. Ardlay, it’s our responsibility to discipline the children, and I should not have let Sean get his way tonight.”
“It was partly my fault too,” said Albert with a rueful frown. “In any case, I’ve caused you all enough trouble tonight-”
The boy spoke up, half sobbing, “Can’t you stay? It’s snowing out there.”
Miss Pony nodded in agreement. “Sean is right. What do you think, Mr. Ardlay?”
Candy recalled that she wanted to talk to Albert about Mr. Cartwright, so she chimed in, “If you don’t mind, we have an old chaise in the office.” She wanted to append “Granduncle William” but she ended up swallowing the grand title.
“I guess I have no choice then,” Albert acceded after peeking out of a window. The car and the area were covered in a fresh blanket of snow, not to mention it was quite late now. The newly-fallen virgin snow reminded him of his Christmas present for Candy, and he considered giving it to her anyway. He didn’t have to tell her the reasons behind it.
Sean happily clapped his small hands. Inwardly, Albert felt grateful to the boy, so he held the boy’s hand, asking, “Would you like to sleep in the office with me?”
Sean was in raptures, but Miss Pony’s reluctance was obvious. Yet, she gave her consent because taking Sean back to the large bedroom now might disturb the other children’s slumber.
Albert went to bed exhausted but sleep eluded him. He contemplated various possibilities of what he could do to enhance the orphanage. At least there should be a proper guest room. Maybe Candy would leave the orphanage one day, but she would highly likely visit her foster mothers from time to time. Albert reckoned he could now afford a substantial reconstruction, if not expansion, because Mr. Cartwright insisted on selling the land at a price favourable to the young businessman. However, if he proposed a reconstruction plan, he essentially gave away that he was the landowner.
Apart from that, Albert had also been thinking about Candy in the wakeful hours of the night. He had been unaware how much he had missed her tactile contact until after the minor accident. He could have avoided being soaked, but her high-pitched scream, dripped with concern, had had such a profound effect on him that he had to take a look at her face. The very picture of her round, frightened eyes had been heart-stirring, and in a split second, his outlook of his relationship with her had drastically changed. I definitely see some encouraging aspects to our situation! I was disturbed by her indifferent attitude but I’m more convinced than ever that it was a pretense…
Now that his despair had been replaced with hope, he forced himself to relax and tried to blot out all thoughts by listening to Sean’s rhythmic breathing. Maybe I can do something for Sean too… Money will certainly help. Before long, the man succumbed to fatigue.
Then a soft knock at the office door draws Albert’s attention from his thoughts.
“Is that Candy?” Sean asks the man, his small face lit up.
Albert doubts it. Candy likes sleeping in, but he replies, smiling, “Let’s go find out.”
(to be continued…)
=o=o=o=
Writer’s note:
Thank you so much for reading. So glad I could post this just in time for Candy’s birthday! Hope to hear from you soon. 🥰
Stay safe and take care, my friends!
Literary analysis response to something
Hi! Yes, she is an Albert fan. She mentioned in a class how she loved reading mangas growing up and said, Candy Candy. So me being me, I had to ask her 😂
Yes, so I have a deep love for reading anything from classical literature to more modern works and even fanfiction 😂.
We have an inside joke with English and film majors to see who can find more references to Shakespeare in books or movies 😂Usually, Shakespearean works are used as a foreshadowing of future events or comedic relief.
However, if Romeo and Juliet are used to reference a relationship, it foreshadows that the characters will not end up together for some tragic reason. In Candy Candy, the first foreshadowing we receive is in Scotland when Candy sees Terry’s book as she mentions Romeo and Juliet. There’s confirmation when Terry leaves for America. In the play, Romeo leaves Juliet, and the events that follow are tragic. The second foreshadowing is when Terry is now actually portraying the role of Romeo. The confirmation is the tragic event that happens with Susana. This tragic event leads to them splitting up for good. I would say that the encounter in Rockstown confirmed the relationship is over and gave the fans closure.
Now the Author mentions Hamlet in the novel, which provides further closure. When speaking about Hamlet, there are three main ways you could look at it. (I hope this isn’t a spoiler to Hamlet😂)
1. The relationship between Hamlet and Ophelia also ends tragically. Whether you believe Hamlet truly loved Orphelia or not (that’s a separate argument 😂). The point is they did have a relationship that ended tragically because Hamlet neglected Ophelia and had other priorities. Hamlet’s duty was first to avenge his father and then everything else. We can connect this to Terry feeling a more significant duty to Susanna and choosing to stay with her over his love for Candy. By doing this, he ends their relationship just as Hamlet brought, in a way, death to Ophelia and their relationship.
2. The possible connection between having Terry play Hamlet could symbolize them sharing the same tragic flaw. Hamlet’s tragic flaw is his inability to act. The reason there’s so much tragedy and so many people die because of his lack of taking action. Hamlet doesn’t tell anyone what is going on. Instead, he is contemplating what to do and even his existence. Terry has the same approach when the tragedy with Susana happens. He doesn’t seek help; he keeps it to himself and doesn’t know what to do. The ultimate conclusion for both is that, in a sense, they lost what they found valuable.
3. At the end of Hamlet, everyone is dead except Horatio. Fortinbras becomes king and restores the broken realm to order. However, this was a way that Shakespeare created that full circle moment. Earlier on in the play, we learn that Hamlet’s father killed Fortinbras’ father. This is why Fortinbras was matching towards Denmark to avenge his father. However, when he arrived, he didn’t have to kill anyone because they were all dead. Many people interpret it as Hamlet being the vessel used to restore peace. Anyways, we could claim that Terry was a vessel in Candy‘s life so that she could have that full cycle moment.
In the end, I could be reaching and overanalyzing it 😂 maybe it is pretty literal, and having Terry be successful in a play could be to show that he is okay now and fully recovered from the breakup. I don’t know 🤷🏻♀️
I have tried to keep this short. So I didn’t go into the textual evidence and any of that. There are also a couple more different approaches. I tried my best to summarize. If you have any questions or if anything seems unclear, I am happy to clarify.
Thank you:)
I just realized I didn’t post this as a reply to our conversation thread. I am so sorry about that. I also realized I left the title that I had saved in my notes app 🤦🏻♀️ and I kind of just copied and pasted it, so so sorry about that first sentence.
No worries about that, Anna Katerina. I’ll reply to your other comment later. Have a great weekend!
Thanks Anna Katerina! I must say I enjoyed reading your analyses of Terry’s character and the possible foreshadowing of future events in his life, because I’m not as familiar with literature and Shakespeare’s works as you.
Yet, I don’t necessarily agree with you re Romeo and Juliet and the subsequent breakup. Why? Susanna played Juliet in the play but she got to stay with ‘Romeo’, unlike Candy. 😉
Otherwise, thank you for sharing your thoughts with us! All I know for sure is that Terry’s character was an afterthought, as the author wanted her story to be more different from Daddy-long-legs. Yet, back then she was determined to separate Terry and Candy because she aimed to achieve the full circle ending.
Hi! Thank you very much. I guess I am just so passionate about literature, haha.
I see what you mean about Romero and Juliet. I totally agree! I think the way I saw it was that the couple had already been assigned to Candy and Terry’s foreshadowing (and usually, it relates to one couple only). Thus, I didn’t see it related to her relationship with Terry. But I understand what you are saying, and it makes sense.
Also, I am a theater nerd, and it is a common saying that those who play Romero and Juliet are bound to have a real relationship (similar to how you don’t mention Macbeth before a show because it brings bad luck). I guess that would apply to how Terry and Susana end up together. I find it funny how Shakespearean works have created so many superstitions 😂
Funny enough, Daddy Long Legs was one of the first big kid books I read along with Anne of Green Gables. Anne of Green Gables is what actually sparked my love for reading.
Have a great day 🙂
Hi!!! I just discovered your blog after reading “Love Never Fails.” It excites me to find your blog and see that you continue writing ❤️ I read this Fic’s chapters, and I love it so much. Hopefully, we will get an update soon because the plot is so exciting and keeps you hooked. Thank you for blessing us with your creativity and fantastic writing.
Thank you Anna for reading two of my stories 🤗. Your positive feedback is greatly appreciated!
Ofc!!! I sometimes feel late to the party since I just turned 19 and barely discovered your blog. Both my parents liked Candy growing up, and they introduced it to me when I was a young child. I had seen them rewatched multiple times since I loved them so much and always felt unhappy with the ending until I discovered the manga in high school.
I have always been an Albert fan. I never really like Terry (maybe because I am not into toxic bad boys with mommy issues 😂). For me, Terry goes against the definition of what my generation calls “if he wanted to, he would.” Terry didn’t fight for his “love.” Also, major disappointed when he slapped Candy (red flag). My university friends (who now know of Candy and love it because I can’t shut up 😂) and I don’t fully understand how Terry has a huge fan base. We genuinely believe that our generation would have such love and care for Albert (I don’t know, maybe it is a weird gen z thing 😂). Albert has just set our standards so high that now when one of us likes a boy, we ask ourselves if he is a Terry or Albert. We only want an Albert and pray God sends us one haha
Anyways, sorry I went on a whole rant. The anime disappointed me because I wanted Albert to have more screen time. The manga was just so beautiful, and I loved it. Then I was like, I use FanFiction.Net for other books/shows; why not look up Candy Candy? I found your story and loved it. As fellow Christians, my friends and I loved the title and the fact that they waited for marriage (and that you included the struggle to wait for marriage and the self-control it takes).
My friends and I are determined that Candy needs a return in our generation (as it isn’t as commonly known).
Now we have been trying to catch up on your blog, and we love everything you post; it is just so helpful even if we are late to the party and reading things from years ago, haha
Thank you, Anna Katerina, for your enthusiastic feedback on my blog and my fanfics. I’m happy to hear that you and your parents have common interests, namely Candy Candy. 🤗
By now you might have known I also prefer the manga version to the anime. If you know Spanish, French or Italian you can purchase the official translation(s) of the Candy Candy Final Story as well. IMHO, the author was in favour of Albert, just like us, LOL.
I don’t understand why Terry has such a huge fanbase either, but it’s not just the gen Z thing. I’m older than you and have been an Albert fan ever since I read the manga as an adult. When I watched the anime as a child I didn’t understand the ending at all.
Anyway, thanks again and see you around. 😉
I am fluent in Spanish and somewhat in Italian, so I have checked out the book, but it is a bit expensive where I am, and as a broke college student, I have to wait for that. I have read the translations posted online. Also, one of my friends who also are interested in Candy is Japanese, so I practically made her my unofficial translator 😂
I am sorry; I think I didn’t express myself correctly; what I meant to say is that my friends and I think gen z would prefer Albert to Terry and not be as divided based on their preferences of characters in other shows. I know older people also love Albert (my mom and her friends included; actually, I recently discovered one of my university professors is also a fan 😂).
Also, I found it funny how people sometimes get bothered by the age gap because no one mentions Ryan Reynolds’s and Blake Lively age gap, and they are around 11 years apart. They are viewed as an ideal couple, so my friends and I use that as our argument 😂
I also agree, believing the author also had a preference for Albert. I am majoring in Literature, so I read a lot and do literary analyses. So now I naturally do one on every book I read; I have yet to discover if it is a blessing or a curse😂. Anyways, many authors want a full-circle moment in their books; it starts with the Prince, so it is logical to end with the Prince. I also believe she uses the literary device of allusion by having Terry star in Hamlet after the breakup. My favorite Shakespearean play is Hamlet, so I have seen some connections of why she chose that specific one (and Romeo and Juliet before).
Also, thank you! Since we found your blog, we have felt excited to read everything you have written!!!
Hi Anna Katerina, it’s nice to have a friend who can help you understand the novel better! When I read that one of your professors is also a fan, I assume you meant a fan of Albert? I wonder how you found out, lol. 😜
About the age gap, you brought up a perfect example of a couple with 11 years apart. Yes, nobody can deny their love to each other, but I guess you probably know by now that some fans simply refuse to listen to any reasoning when it isn’t what they want to hear.
So happy to know that you major in literature, and I’m looking forward to hearing your thoughts on why the author chose Hamlet for Terry and Romeo prior to that.
Of course, I couldn’t agree more with you about the full circle argument. I used to think it’s quite obvious, but apparently, some fans would rather turn a blind eye to that… 🤷♀️
Many thanks for reading my blog posts or fanfics. Your feedback is greatly appreciated 🤗
Hi there! How’s it going, Ms Puddle? Thanks for offering this fascinating chapter for us to read online. It seems that you have carefully thought of the plot because it’s so well-structured.
Talk to you again soon!
Hello @DanielleV, sorry I almost missed your message. Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback to my fanfic, and I’m so happy to hear that you think my plot is well structured 🤩🤗.
No worries, Ms Puddle. I sometimes don’t get updates or notifications either. It’s probably just a glitch.
Magnificent drawing! Candy is such an angelic beauty. You have done a great job in depicting our two dearly beloved blondes-Candy and Albert throughout the years. Each and every drawing is amazing. Thank you very much for sharing your drawings and stories.💕💌✨
Thank you so much @Christine 🥰 for your highly encouraging words to my fan works. Take care, my friend!
Same to you, Ms Puddle! Take Care!😊
Dear Ms Puddle,
I hope you are doing well. Warmer weather has finally arrived and I’m sure that many are anticipating a summer holiday. I hope you find some free time and get much deserved rest.
Your fanfiction is getting more and more intriguing. I also like the title you have chosen.
Best Wishes!
Thank you @Avon for your encouraging feedback! What a pleasant surprise 🤗
Warm weather hasn’t arrived to where I live yet, unfortunately. Are you planning for a trip in summer?
Best wishes to you too! ☺️
If all goes well, my family and I are planning for a brief summer break. We could all use a bit of rest after work. I would also like to catch up with reading some books at the beach or the veranda overlooking the sea (with an ice-cold cup of coffee) which I enjoy doing so much.
Sounds like a plan, @Avon! Do you have a destination in mind? I booked off a week of vacation in late August as well, but I don’t have concrete plans at the moment.
We’re planning on spending our summer in Greece and do a bit of island-hopping in the North Aegean.😅
That’s very nice, Avon! Best wishes for your upcoming trip!
Thank you very much, Ms Puddle! Best wishes for your summer break too. Hope you have lots of fun and relaxation.🌊🐬🏖️
Hi there! How’s it going, Ms Puddle? Have you decided to get the booster shot? I’ve got the third one but to be honest I’m not looking forward to the fourth. We’ll see what the scientists have to say and what the CDC recommends in early autumn.
Resuming to Candy White, your fanart of her is absolutely stunning. I’m glad to read that you’re enjoying the process of writing this new fanfic. It’s always a good idea to escape the stress of work a bit and delve in beloved hobbies. My hobby is music (guitar and piano) but I wish I had more time to devote to those dearly beloved musical instruments. I used to play a lot when a child and a teen but then university exams and postgraduate studies along with a full-time job demanded more of my time.
Hope to hear from you soon and thank you so much for sharing your contributions with us.🙏
Hello @Irana93! Thank you so much for catching up. Your feedback is highly encouraging. I play piano for fun too, and sometimes I help out at church choir. That keeps my fingers moving. Being able to play a guitar is great because you can take it with you wherever you go. 🎶🎵
I did get my booster shot but like you, I don’t want to keep getting one after another. Have you seen the Pfizer loyalty card floating around the social media? 🤣
Have you been playing for years or is it a recent pastime? As for the guitar, you’re right, it’s far more practical but I still enjoy playing both instruments, nonetheless.
I haven’t heard about the Pfizer loyalty card on social media. Is this serious or just trolling?
Hi @Irana93 yes I’ve been playing piano for years but honestly I was better before lol. I wish I could play guitar though. Do you play the acoustic ones?
About the Pfizer loyalty card, it was just a joke floating around, although it might not be too far from the truth…
I mainly play the classical guitar but I’m been strumming the acoustic every now and then..
As for the Pfizer loyalty card, with all the insanity and chaos going around, nobody really knows who’s trolling and who’s being serious.
That’s so cool, @Irana93! I heard that picking up classical guitar is not easy at all. Did you experience a steep learning curve?
It wasn’t too difficult for me maybe because I started learning at a very young age. They say that the younger you are in learning a language or a musical instrument, the easier it is to acquire the knowledge and make it sort of second nature to you. What about you?
Hello Irana93, like you, it wasn’t too difficult for me to learn piano. My family could not afford an acoustic piano but a rich relative bestowed a used one on us when I was in elementary grade 4. Not young but not old either 😅
How fortunate of you! That is surely a lovely gift from your relative.
Greetings again! So pleased to have read the tenth chapter of your latest fanfic. Adding your beautiful illustrations is a great idea.
Many thanks and I am looking forward to reading what happens next in your fascinating fanfic!
Thank you @Halcyon Days for catching up! 🤗 Your encouraging feedback is much, much appreciated 🥰
You should consider publishing your work as you’ve got talent in writing. Apparently, editing will be required but that’s the case with all writing processes. Even the best of writers have to edit and re-edit their work. It’s part of the overall process of creative writing.
Exactly!
Thanks so much @Halcyon Days and @Avon. I don’t think I’m qualified, lol. Seriously, I really don’t have much time to write, but as a hobby it’s great. I’ve enjoyed entertaining my imagination tremendously. Besides, I have continued support from readers like you 🤗. Thank you!
It’s a pleasure to know that you’re enjoying your hobby because the CC community benefits so much from your contributions. What makes your work and blog stand out is that you have a healthy relationship with the CC community and most importantly, with Nagita’s CCFS novel. In stark contrast to quite a few deranged fans (which come from both sides of the fandom, unfortunately), your approach is always well-measured, balanced and impartial. You treat the story of Candy Candy as all normal and logical human-beings with self-respect do; you never get carried away and start lashing out against others nor do you allow this otherwise fictional story interfere with or superimpose your life. Certain fans need to seek psychological or even psychiatric help because they desperately try to defend Terry or Albert as if they’re their real husbands or lovers. In reality, they’re just fictional characters which are utterly incapable of bettering their miserable and dreary lives. Instead of getting into silly arguments over Candy Candy, those foolish old fans should get a life and find some meaning and thus improve (at least to some extent) their wretched existence before it’s too late. It’s not as if time is on their side, as most of those hysterical fans are in their 50s and 60s.
Thank you so much for your positive feedback and kind compliments, Halcyon Days. I’ll continue to try my best to keep up! 💪🤗
What a magnificent drawing of Candy! You never cease to impress, Ms Puddle. Love the eye-colour and expression. Candy looks so dreamy. It’s not much of a wonder that she had already enchanted Albert. Are you also planning to draw Kimberly? Yumiko Igarashi had provided an illustration of her but I’m not sure whether that was the way she looked like or how Candy imagined she would look like based on Albert’s description in his letter.
Thanks @Lakewood for your encouraging words! 🤗 Yes, I might draw Kimberly later. No guarantee yet at this point, and also I suppose I don’t have to stick with Igarashi’s design. After all, in my fanfic Kimberly is a few years older. Thanks for your interest though ☺️
Of-course you don’t have to stick to Igarashi’s design. The whole point of fanfiction and fanart is to form your own representations based on how you creatively imagine these beloved characters.
Looking forward to more of your awesome work!
Thank you @Lakewood for your continued support and encouragement ☺️🤗
If convenient and useful for you, perhaps you should consider forming a portfolio with all your artwork. Just make sure to copyright-protect your original work, especially the ones which are not based on fanart. It would be wise to do the same with your written contributions.
Thanks so much @Lakewood for your suggestions! For now my blog is basically my portfolio, where I keep all my fan-works in one place. ☺️
Just make sure to legally secure your work because you’ve put so much effort into it. Please, take this as friendly advice due to concern because I see your work (mainly your fanart) all over social media. This is great but it could also have repercussions. Unfortunately, it’s not the first time someone has tried to profit out of your hard work. Some were even so low and cheap that they even used your fanart for their profile pic without having consulted with you first.
Take care and all best!
Thank you @Lakewood for your advice and concerns. I used to care very much about people stealing my fanarts and/or erasing my signatures, but later I found that it was utterly impossible to chase after these people. 🙁
There are ways to seek legal action but it could get complex and become acutely time-consuming. Scammers are aware of this and that’s why they continue with their sordid actions assuming that nobody will take the time and effort to pursue them legally. The EU is actually looking into ways to expedite the process and assist people online to protect their work as well as legally pursue those who have allegedly broken the law or violated certain rules and regulations.
I see. Thanks Lakewood for your concerns, and what I can do now is to keep using watermark 🙏
Make sure to first publish any of your work such as your stories and art on your blog or FB page where there’s an exact date available. This will provide further confirmation of the ownership of your work.
I’ve never thought that’s important, Lakewood. I’ve always published on my blog first, but sometimes I don’t post on Facebook right away. Thank you very much for your advice!
Glad to be of help!
Hello Ms Puddle,
Finally got round to reading your newest additions to your latest fanfiction. It was definitely worth it, even the cliff-hangers. LOL
Take Care!
Hi @Anita, thank you for catching up! Glad you don’t mind the cliffhangers lol 😅 You take care too!
I heard that the number of cases in the UK might have trended down but is still high. Actually, it’s about the same here. When people are relaxed and don’t wear masks anymore, the hospitalization rate goes up again. 🙁
The situation hasn’t abated in the UK but for political reasons the corrupt government in power is indifferent to the health and safety of its citizens.
Similar is the situation in Greece and I wouldn’t be surprised elsewhere too. Political corruption and greed tend to have no borders and are scarcely restricted to only a few countries.
Same here in Canada, @Anita and @Myra. I don’t agree with the current protocol, and while the politicians are hoping to boost the economy, the omicron infections are actually threatening economic recovery.
It’s also the psychological factor as many people have been freaking out from all the lockdowns. The issue here is that governments keep on making the same mistake by taking it to the extreme; they will either impose severely strict lockdowns or they will set everyone free and on the loose. What ever happened to middle-ground policies and sensibility?
Myra, granted, our provincial government in British Columbia did implement the policies by phases and restrictions had been lifted gradually. That being said, I do have friends who recently got infected when more and more people stop wearing masks indoors, despite the fact that my friends were still cautious and kept their masks on. Sigh….
All the safety measures in the world cannot help as much unless people are willing to cooperate and be considerate to one another. Unfortunately, this is not the case and that’s the reason why this pandemic will most certainly not end anytime soon. It’s not enough if only some people maintain social distancing in tandem with focusing on hygiene and sanitation. All people or at least the greatest majority must maintain health and safety at all costs.
It’s funny though it seems people don’t care so much anymore these days, Myra, especially those who are fully vaccinated, because the symptoms are mild, just like flu. However, those who are unvaccinated should still be worried, I think.
The problem is that there’s a widely held belief-mainly among the unvaccinated-that the Omicron variant is harmless. While it’s not as dangerous as the Delta variant, Omicron continues to pose life-threatening health hazards in the vaccinated and unvaccinated alike. Nevertheless, the vaccinated have a better chance of avoiding hospitalization in contrast to the unvaccinated. Yet, all this information is fluid and the situation surrounding COVID-19 is changing relentlessly.
Facts.
Ms. Puddle, you have given us another exciting chapter. Things are progressing between Candy and Albert, and it was very amusing to see a small boy helping them with his innocent comments to find their way to each other. “Out of the mouths of babes…” I hope those two adults will soon discover what little Sean has already figured out.
Also I suspect that Patty and Wallace may be romantically involved. I’m glad because Patty is one of my favorite characters of the original story, and it was sad to see she was alone by the end of it. She deserves to be happy with a man who will love and support her, and I hope this man will be Wallace. It’s so nice that you seem to be giving her a second chance for happiness in your story.
Looking forward to your next chapter. And last but not least, your latest fanart is an exquisite portrayal of Candy as a young adult. Along with that one used in Chapter 7 and your current cover picture on your Facebook page, they are my top 3 favorites of your fanarts of Candy. However, in my opinion this new one is the best of them all. Congratulations, my friend. You have great talent, both as a writer and an illustrator.
Keep on the good work, and take care.
Hello @Fay, thank you for reading my update❣️ You should know me by now. No spoilers 😉
About my fanarts, you’re so sweet and kind 😘🤗 I’ll try my best and keep up. Take care, my friend!
Couldn’t agree with Fay more! Both your stories and drawings are of the finest quality, Ms Puddle. Many thanks!
Awww… Thank you @Anita and @Fay 🤗🥰 Blushing now…