Forget-Me-Not Chapter 3
Disclaimer: Candy Candy and all characters belong to Keiko Nagita, character images to Yumiko Igarashi and anime to Toei Animation.
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— Ms Puddle
Chapter 3
Not long after Albert gets off the carriage that takes him back to the Pony’s Home, he starts searching high and low for Candy, assuming she’s hiding somewhere out-of-sight. Approximately an hour later, the sun is making its descent, and he gets so warmed up that he has already taken off his overcoat, carrying it over his arm. He figures he shouldn’t have ruled out her favourite place, so he follows his intuition to trudge up the hill, despite his exhaustion after a long day of walking around in his not-so-comfortable dress shoes.
Hence, when he spots a familiar silhouette leaning against a tree near the hilltop, relief washes over him. She’s seemingly absorbed in her thoughts, oblivious to his arrival. He knows he should have stayed where he is and simply raises his voice to call her name, but his legs are taking him toward the tree, as if he were in some kind of trance. When her face comes into his view, his heart skips a beat, his eyes helplessly fixated on her lovely orbs and rosy complexion.
Since his debut, he’s obligated to attend a handful of social gatherings as the president of his family business enterprise, so he’s been introduced to many ladies, the majority are either the daughters or the wives of Ardlay’s senior executives or business partners. Needless to say, Albert is accustomed to seeing well-dressed women with meticulous makeup and elaborately coiffed hair. However, like Mr. Cartwright said, Candy has outstanding natural beauty. Her discolored, thick cotton clothes with obvious stitches, including the white bandana, have transformed into fabrics of wonderful shades of coral, her eyes sparkling in the sunlight and her tresses reflecting the warm hues in the sky.
Yet, Albert is mainly captivated by Candy’s forlorn expression, so her appearance is not the only reason why he is bewitched the instant he lays eyes on her. She usually hides her true feelings except when she’s alone, so her melancholy moodiness doesn’t lessen her charm but actually brings back wistful memories of what he’s been through with her. If he could turn back the clock to the same season last year, when they were on good terms with each other, he would boldly approach her without a second thought. She would readily let him hold her in his arms, pouring her heart out so that he could share her burdens. Perhaps this is why he misses her person and her trust so much. Honest interactions among his peers are rarities in the business world. He can talk to Georges and Archie these days, but it’s just not the same. Sadly, things have changed between Candy and him; he no longer has the privilege to be her listener. While his thoughts are in a muddle, she discovers that he’s gazing at her like an idiot.
Unbeknownst to him, he has been on her mind the entire afternoon as a friend she sorely missed, so his presence catches her completely off guard. Not only is she mortified, as though she’s exposed, but she also questions herself if any of this is real. This must be a dream… I’ll soon awake to find myself being the only soul here on Pony’s Hill, as always in the past few months.
Candy then remembers Albert should have left with the nurse called Kimberly. Why did he come back? And what did he say? About my safety or something. What made him worry about me?
At any rate, Candy is way too flabbergasted to process all these in her brain. When she’s going to slap herself to see if she’s dreaming, Albert turns around and takes leave. At this precise moment, she realizes he’s really here with her, but he is leaving in a rush without waiting for her to respond. It’s like when she’s starving, someone offers her a meal, but before she can eat, the meal vanishes.
On top of that, if she’s not mistaken, he didn’t say her name at all. Was it intentional? Is he scared of me? Or he doesn’t want to be with me longer than necessary?
Candy finally tastes her own medicine and understands how it feels to be given the cold shoulder. If she stays mute, Albert would likely believe she couldn’t wait to get rid of him. This misunderstanding will only wedge them further apart; the mere imagination of such consequence unnerves her. Right then, the voice inside her head is screaming at her. Don’t let him go just like that!
So she calls him “Albert” on the spur of the moment. He freezes like a stone statue for about ten seconds, and then he raises his chin to the sky without a word. Some locks of his hair near the highest part of his head appear particularly glossy and slightly reddish because of the setting sun, but she’s not in the mood to admire his brassy, copperish hair. Rather, she’s dreadfully anxious, awaiting her sentence, and the longer she waits, the more discouraged she gets. As she can’t see his face, this prolonged dead silence puts her in a panic; her heart is thumping so hard like it’s going to explode in her chest. It’s odd that he does not move or speak at all. What’s going on? Is he troubled that I didn’t use his formal title?
Candy couldn’t be more wrong. For one thing, Albert is actually quite pleased that she cares enough to stop him from departing. Prior to this, he was convinced their friendship no longer mattered to her. All these months she had not written a single word to him, and his nephew Archie insisted he should do nothing so as not to push her further away. To release his pent-up frustrations, Albert continued devoting his time and energy to work, actively exploring new business opportunities.
For another, hearing her use his middle name is a real bonus. Before her relocation, she followed the example of the rest of his family and always respectfully addressed him as Granduncle William. There was nothing wrong about this except that he didn’t like it at all, as though she had tried to erase their past.
As a matter of fact, ever since Albert resumed working with Georges after his recovery, he has been saving his income so that one day he could repay both Candy and Dr. Martin, the two kind souls who had given him the much needed support in the lowest points of his life. Nobody, not even his aunt, can deter him from spending his hard-earned money on whatever he likes. Roughly a year has since elapsed, and Albert feels confident enough to proceed to the next step. He has seriously considered his motivations, and truth be told, he has no ulterior motives to make Candy feel bad or indebted, nor would he request anything from her. He respects her boundaries, and if she wants him to leave her alone, he will. In other words, the purchase of the land has nothing to do with her attitude to him, and if he does successfully become the new landowner, he will even seek ways to remain anonymous.
That’s why Candy’s unforeseen reaction, calling him “Albert”, has such an impact on him. Never before has he felt so exhilarated that his speculations likely turn out to be erroneous. Since their situation is not as bleak as he has imagined, he’s in raptures, feeling like he has just miraculously salvaged the priceless treasure he thought he had lost to fire. Yet, somewhere in the back of his mind he knows that even if their friendship may be rekindled, there is a chance they would not be close friends ever again. Thus, he urges himself not to get his hopes up too soon. Meanwhile, he’s aware he should not keep Candy hanging in midair, but he’s grappling with these contrasting inner voices. His aunt was gravely strict with him and started training him to control his feelings when the traditional mourning period after his late father’s demise was over, so it astonishes Albert why it takes him so long this time to keep his emotions at bay.
During the agonizing wait, Candy further perceives that her stiff, unfriendly manners must have upset Albert, which pricks her conscience. In retrospect, she had legitimate reasons to be angry at him before, but she admits she did him wrong after their reunion at Lakewood, acting like she’d been avoiding him like the plague. To be fair to herself, staying away from him was the fastest way for her to become emotionally detached from him. She took this route in order to protect herself from unwanted stress or depressing thoughts, so she did not mean to hurt his feelings out of spite.
Above all, the realization that this is the first time they are together at her beloved refuge affects her to a point that it mercilessly shatters her already weakened resolve to keep a distance from him and even revives her repressed hunger for his companionship. While pondering her options, she figures she wants everything to start afresh between them, and yet she wonders if he has similar sentiments. Regardless, driven by her ardent wish to reconnect with him, she decides to take the plunge and steels herself to scurry towards him instead of waiting for him to react.
“Candy-” Albert speaks up in a throaty voice, slowly spinning around. Only then he notices she’s heading in his direction, which is another pleasant surprise. Though she’s barely within his reach, they can talk to each other without yelling, and since he’s standing on the downward slope, her eyes are level with his.
“Yes?” she responds, halting her steps. Hearing her name again from his mouth stirs her up, and a smile of relief materializes on her face. He’s far from being indifferent to her, and his friendly countenance helps reinforcing her determination to rectify her mistake. However, as soon as the two lock eyes, she becomes self-conscious and looks away immediately, lest her eyes betray her thoughts. A fleeting glance at his eyes is enough to make her heart throb. They look like those fascinating pools of light crystal orbs reflecting the diffused light from the sky.
On the other hand, Albert is struck by Candy’s sudden shy demeanor. Her youthful face is suffused with the most enchanting blushes. He swallows hard, trying to rehydrate his throat. He might have regarded her as merely a young girl years ago, but when he was her roommate, he admired her as a kind nurse or treated her like his little sister. After living together for a year or so, she became a dear friend whom he was most comfortable with. They never ran out of topics to talk about, whether serious or silly. Yet, for the time being, Candy looks so adorable that Albert has to avert his eyes to avoid being caught staring at her again. Something about Candy has indubitably changed in the past six months, or maybe he himself has changed? He can’t quite put his finger on it. Last time he felt this confused about his own feelings was when Kim gave him the nickname “Al”.
After settling down in Kenya, Albert naturally hung out with the co-workers who were also fluent in English, and of these people the one that really stood out was Kim. She was the first person who befriended his pet skunk, Poupe. Kim’s cheery disposition, her lengthy blond curls and the freckles on her tan skin reminded him of Candy back in London. Even though Kim was the youngest among the staff of the medical clinic, she often offered her help because she had been in Kenya longer and could speak a bit of the native language, Swahili. Weeks later, Albert found himself drawn to her. One evening after the clinic was closed for the day, the staff on cleaning duty stayed late to do their assigned tasks. When Albert and Kim happened to be alone in a room, she asked out of the blue if she could simply call him “Al”. He didn’t see why not, so he said “yes”, looking at her over his shoulder. The moment their gaze met, he sensed that the attraction was mutual. After that, he began calling her “Kim” too.
At this very second, Kim’s teary orbs flash across his mind; this afternoon she said only he could help her. How could he say no? It’s in his nature to help others in need, let alone Kim. Thus, although he originally planned to return to Chicago after the appointment with the landowner, Albert was willing to make last-minute adjustments for her.
All of a sudden, Candy starts sneezing and can’t seem to make it stop. The noises cut into Albert’s thoughts, and he immediately gives his overcoat a shake, saying, “It’s the chilly breeze.” Now that the sun is below the horizon, the temperature has plummeted. Albert is going to drape the coat over Candy but realizes she may not like it. With his hands holding its lapels, he ventures, “Do you mind?”
She covers her nose with her handkerchief, shaking her head. Though he’s unsure what her gesture means, he wraps his coat around her shoulders anyway. She wants to politely decline but blushes like a tomato when he secures the collar of his overcoat near her neck. She’s touched by his attentiveness, and his coat is surprisingly warm.
“Thank you, Albert,” she says his name, intentionally this time. Her tender expression melts his heart, reminding him of how sweet she was in the past. Then she asks, “Don’t you need it yourself?”
He shakes his head. The breeze makes him feel better actually. It’s at this very moment he musters up his courage to express what’s on his mind for months. With his eyes bored into hers, he enunciates each word with earnestness, “Candy, please forgive me.”
The tremor in his voice does not escape her ears. Without a word, she bashfully evades his penetrating gaze. Though he did not mention anything specific, she knows what he implies. By now, she no longer has a grudge against him; she has come to terms with the fact that Albert is not a penniless vagabond but one of the richest men in the country. But, beyond a shadow of a doubt, he still cares about her, so she should not ask for anything more. Perhaps it’s time for her to get to know the new him and accept him for who he is. Yes, she knows her place, and she’ll continue to fight her feelings for him, but she’ll be content to have him back in her life as a distant friend. At least they can keep in touch somehow.
Imagine Albert’s chagrin when Candy has not responded to his heartfelt apology. Perhaps he should elaborate? When he’s at a loss for what else he can say, she breaks the silence at long last, “Why do they call you granduncle?” She asks with her back facing him, careful to keep her voice casual.
“Do you really want to know?” he mildly retorts. Much to his relief, she has seemingly accepted his apology.
She turns around and nods with eagerness, but he reasons, shrugging his shoulders, “It’s a long story. I’m afraid you’ll be bored to death.”
But she’s not going to relent, so she straightens her face and pretends to be stern, warning, “You’ll regret it if you don’t tell me now.”
He exhales an audible sigh, shaking his head with a resigned smile. “It’s not the right time.”
“Don’t say I didn’t warn you,” she utters in a threatening tone, the corner of her lips tugging up however.
He’s wondering what she’s getting at. No matter what, he’s immensely thrilled that she was the one who started this playful conversation. In short, the wall between them is crumbling down, their awkwardness fading away, so he plays along, grinning from ear to ear with his arms crossed in a mock defensive posture, “Yes, Miss Candice. I’ve been warned.”
She nods and exaggeratingly clears her throat before she declares with a mischievous grin, “From now on, let me call you…”
She pauses for dramatic effect. Then she announces, giving a theatrical bow, “Graaandpa!”
At this, his jaw drops and his eyes widen. He doesn’t get her wordplay at first, but once he figures it out, he lets out a loud guffaw and drops his arms, his eyes shining with delight. It’s a positive sign, even though she’s teasing him, and he can’t remember when was the last time he burst into a hearty laugh.
Albert never appears more handsome to Candy than he does now. To distract herself, she quickly raises her eyes to the twilight glow of the sky, and yet she can’t help casting stealthy glances at his side profile. Within half a minute, his laughter dwindles to smiles, and he stretches out his hand to her, asking, “Does it mean we can be friends again?”
With her lips pouted, she pretends to mull over his question for a moment before she gives his hand a loud slap and utters, “Let me think about it!” Then she giggles and walks away from him. Inwardly, she’s overjoyed to have reconciled with him.
He takes it as a “yes”, feeling like a huge weight is lifted off his shoulders, and a satisfied grin spreads across his face. Then he takes two long strides towards her and says, “Candy, sorry I totally forgot until now. I promised Miss Pony and Sister Lane to bring you back home as soon as I find you.”
“Oh,” Candy replies in a murmur with her brow furrowed. They barely started talking. Even though her stomach is rumbling due to hunger, she wishes they could stay here for at least another hour. Then something dawns on her, and she gasps, covering her mouth. “Were you looking for me at the Pony’s Home?”
And what did he tell Miss Pony and Sister Lane?
“Yes, and they are worried about you too,” he answers without providing any details.
He used the word “too”, so that means he was worried as well, but why? She’s dying to know what he saw. Was Kimberly with him then? Is she currently waiting at the orphanage?
As much as Candy enjoys chatting with Albert here on Pony’s Hill, she agrees to go back with him, knowing that Miss Pony and Sister Lane are uneasy. On their way down, Candy has many questions in her head, and she expects Albert to relate something about the eventful day to her, in particular, his meeting with Mr. Cartwright or his encounter with Kimberly this afternoon, but Albert is so quiet that he seems not himself. Occasionally he even grimaces.
“What’s wrong, Albert?”
“I should know better. These brand new shoes… I think I’ve got blisters on both feet.”
“Ouch!” she responds loudly, frowning in concern. “Let’s slow down,” she instantly suggests.
He nods with a strained smile. She’s considerably moved; he must have carried out a painstaking search of the area for her, in spite of the discomfort, so she keenly offers, “When we get to the orphanage, please let me take a look at your-“
“No thanks,” he promptly interrupts her, blushing already. His feet must be stinky by now, and he has a valid excuse. “I have to leave soon.”
Her heart sinks; she should have known. A man of important status like him should have a frantic timetable and a demanding lifestyle, but it’s a letdown nonetheless. “I see,” she replies in a level tone to feign nonchalance, looking down to avoid making eye contact with him.
Then a long silence falls between them. Candy wonders if Albert is going to tell her anything about Kimberly the nurse at all. Little does she know that he’s actually contemplating whether to inform Candy of the reasons behind his unanticipated grueling schedule today. Then his conversation with Kim this late afternoon returns to his head.
“Why such a hurry, Al?” asked Kim, who looked at him with disappointment in her face. “Do you have to go back now?”
“Sorry,” he murmured, his eyes downcast. “It’s for my peace of mind.”
“Worried about Candice White?” she asked, point-blank. Kim knew he had come to the orphanage all the way from Chicago today, so she was lucky in this regard.
When he merely nodded, she remarked curiously, “She looks so young. How old is she?” Kim had caught a glimpse of the pretty orphan girl with healthy pink cheeks. Of course she didn’t know Candy had been running at top speed.
Albert smilingly dodged her question, “I thought it’s rude to ask a woman her age?”
Kim burst out laughing. Apparently, he remembered how he had discovered her age back then. Shaking her head in disbelief, she said with a voice edged with nostalgia, “I can’t believe you still can make me laugh, even at a time like this.”
Then she fondly grasped both his hands and expressed her gratitude, “Thank you for helping. I appreciate it.”
“Don’t mention it.”
She tightened the grip of his hands before releasing them. She remembered how she used to love holding these warm hands in hers. Then she heard him, “Kim, I’ll meet up with you after I get hold of Candy. In the meantime, Georges knows what to do.”
For a few seconds Kim stared at him with her eyebrows knitted together and her lips pursed skeptically. Then she raised a direct question, “What is Candice White to you?”
He shrugged his shoulders with friendly informality before he replied, “She’s a very important friend.”
“You can’t fool me, Al,” Kim challenged in a teasing manner, visibly unconvinced. “And you’re right, she does look a bit like me.”
“No, you got the wrong idea,” he denied, chuckling in embarrassment. “Let me fill you in when I have a chance.”
“Can’t wait!” she replied with a wink, giving him her seal of approval. Then he felt a push on his back. “Let’s catch up later. Hope to see you soon.”
“You bet,” he uttered, smiling at her. Presently, he was too preoccupied to notice that she was miles away. They hadn’t seen each other for years, and he was certainly not the same carefree man she had loved in Africa. All these years she thought he had originated from Michigan, but during the ride she had learned that he was the sole heir to a family of prestige and prominence in Illinois, so she could picture how the burdens and responsibilities weighed on him. No wonder he had always been well-mannered and yet mysterious about his upbringing and background. Back then, he had told her repeatedly, “I’m not whom you think I am.”
Concerning his outward appearance, he had the same chiseled features that could effortlessly capture anyone’s attention, but now he was irresistibly attractive in a different way. Not only he looked posh and dashing in his suit, but he also exuded an air of sophistication. Besides, she could scarcely believe he was a natural blond. Her mind traveled back in time and recalled how much she had enjoyed combing his long brown hair under his hat with her fingers. Falling in love with him had not been in her plan, but by the time she had realized it, she had fallen hard already.
Those were the days of my youth…
When she stifled a sigh, Georges entered the room and uttered, “Sir William, the carriage is here.”
“Thank you, Georges!” said the young boss with a smile of appreciation, and without delay he mumbled under his breath such that only his assistant could hear him, “Wish me luck.”
Meanwhile, Albert is walking side by side with Candy, which seems surreal, almost too good to be true. With that said, he’s feeling grateful from the bottom of his heart. Earlier this afternoon when he was explaining to Georges about the change of plan because of Kim, they all heard Candy’s response to Mr. Cartwright’s question. The old man’s voice dripped with concern, and the girl sounded terribly upset. Albert’s countenance immediately darkened with anxiety, and he craned his neck to scan his surroundings, but only Kim spotted her. From where she stood, Kim saw Candy running away from the orphanage. Georges then lowered his voice and offered, “Sir William, I’m at your service.”
The young boss grasped the unspoken question but said, “Let’s attend to Kim’s needs first. I’ll come back myself.”
Albert would not delegate this personal task to his assistant. Something must be bothering Candy, and she likely went into hiding. He had a hunch it was related to him; perhaps she disliked the fact that he had come uninvited, so he might be the last person she wanted to see. Yet, he had been sitting idle for far too long, and he was determined to resolve their issues by talking to her face to face. If he ended up being pushed away, so be it. At least he tried.
Now that Albert and Candy have just re-established their friendship, their relationship is still in its fragile stage, so he’d rather not take any risk. Instead, he’ll be on his guard and cautious with his words, like walking on minefields, in case his better intentions are misunderstood. Hence, although he has considered asking Candy what upset her earlier this afternoon, he hesitates for the moment. He’s aware Kim has sought Candy for help today. If he broaches this sensitive subject, he might need to allude to Kim or the problem she’s dealing with.
After some thorough consideration, Albert decides not to trouble Candy with his private matters with Kim. First, even if he can skip the details, he does not feel at ease giving an account of his past when he does not have ample time to organize his thoughts. More importantly, his reminiscences involve Kim too. He won’t tell anyone about her without her permission. Last but not the least, he highly doubts Candy is interested to know. So far she has not mentioned anything about it. Therefore, it may be best to let the matter drop.
While Candy doesn’t mind his silence, they are heading near the bottom of the hill. She reckons Albert will leave as soon as they are back to the orphanage. Just then, he speaks up, “I hope you’re feeling warmer now, Candy?”
“Oh yes, thanks so much,” she replies at once. “Your coat is unbelievably cozy, and it’s not heavy at all.”
He breaks into a contented smile. “Glad you like it. It actually belonged to my late father. He bought one for himself and a matching one for my late mother when they traveled to Scotland at the end of their honeymoon. You know, the winter there can be brutal.”
To Candy, the fact that Albert talks about his family is a great start. She won’t push him even though she used that as a joke earlier. At this moment, Terry’s dazzling smile resurfaces in her mind. They had such a wonderful time in Scotland that summer, and it feels like ages ago already.
Candy also remembers her conversation with Terry’s mother in Rockstown after Terry had sobered up and enchanted the audience with his charisma. Back then Candy strongly believed Terry would be back on his feet again. She also searched her heart; gone was her passion for him. She had no regrets, and breaking up had been the right decision because Terry had undeniably chosen Susanna over her. Not long after that trip, Candy was truly relieved when she chanced to read a magazine article about Susanna’s loving reactions to Terry’s return after he had gone missing for months. At that moment, Candy sincerely wished him success and fulfillment, and most of all, she wished them happiness.
Aloud, Candy responds to Albert, “I was told even cashmere sweaters could be very expensive.”
“Aunt Elroy said so too, especially because my late father would only purchase from a reputable merchant from Asia, who claimed to hand comb their goats when they shed naturally instead of shearing them in winter. As you can probably guess, my aunt sees to it that these coats are well maintained for sentimental reasons.”
He recollects his aunt’s frown of disapproval when she said to him, “You know I’m keeping them for you and your future wife. It’s not even winter yet. Why do you want to wear this particular coat for your upcoming trip?”
Aunt Elroy was right. His own light jackets would have sufficed. He told her it was a business trip; she did not suspect because Georges would accompany him dealing with work-related tasks. If Aunt Elroy knew her nephew intended to buy land for Candy’s sake with his own money, she would have thought he was out of his mind and tried to stop him at all cost. In any case, since this would be Albert’s first significant expenditure, he wanted his late father to be his “witness” from the beginning of the negotiation process. Furthermore, dressing impeccably for the occasion would not only show his respect to the landowner but also convey his sincerity. That’s why he bought a pair of new shoes too. His minimalist mindset contrasts starkly with the maximalist approach deployed by his relatives living under the same roof. Their closets are full of new or barely used clothes and accessories, but for Albert, he has a variety of tailored suits primarily for keeping his professional image, and yet he’s been wearing the same pair of shoes since his recovery. Understandably, they are quite worn out from extensive use.
Candy’s voice interrupts his train of thought, “Yes, this overcoat looks like new to me.”
He chuckles. “Believe it or not, Aunt Elroy made me promise her not to ruin it.”
Before Albert knows it, Candy reacts by removing the coat from her. Due to her petite size, the hem of the overcoat is dangerously close to the ground.
“Wait!” he utters in a haste, internally cursing himself for his blunder. He stops her just in time, draping it back on her with his hands firmly pressed on her upper arms. “Don’t get me wrong-“
But he’s stunned into speechlessness when she inhales sharply. Their sudden proximity catches them unprepared. With their faces about half feet apart, he can feel her warm breath on his face, and she’s noticeably breathing quite unsteadily. Even in the dim conditions, he can see her freckles sprinkled across her nose between her resplendent eyes.
Likewise, she’s dazed and nonplussed; she’s near enough to see a tuft of stubble on his cheeks, reminding her of their cohabitation as brother and sister. She also finds solace in breathing in his sweat mixed with the familiar scent of his body, but at the same time, she feels like she has butterflies in her stomach when she observes his eyes twinkling beneath his thick eyelashes.
The awkward moment of staring at each other’s face does not last long however. The instant his eyes glow with the light from behind her, they both hear a boy shout as he holds his lantern higher, “There they are, Miss Pony, the man found Candy!”
It’s Jimmy, the oldest boy in the orphanage. Albert loosens his grip at once, his face reddened and his mind still reeling from what has transpired between them. Candy takes a step back as well, feeling embarrassed beyond description. Before Jimmy’s enthusiastic cry, Miss Pony spots Candy and the young man facing each other with his hands on her shoulders; they are completely motionless, his neck bent low and her chin raised. It’s shocking to say the least, so Miss Pony nearly drops the lantern in her hand. As the old lady absentmindedly pushes her glasses up her nose, taking in the sight of the man’s coat on Candy, Miss Pony can’t help wondering about the nature of their relationship. Who is this young man? He called himself Albert and said he was Candy’s friend back in Chicago.
Miss Pony and Sister Lane first met him this late afternoon. When both were busy working in the kitchen, Jimmy informed them about a male visitor at the front entrance. It was almost the end of their office hours, so Miss Pony assumed the visitor wanted to ask about adoption, but the visitor looked too young to be interested in parenting. Thus, it made sense to her when he introduced himself as Candy’s friend, and he politely asked, “May I talk to her?”
Sister Lane then exchanged a questioning glance with Miss Pony. It was strange that Candy got two good-looking visitors on the same day, but Sister Lane frowningly explained to Albert that Candy hadn’t come home since returning from the field trip. He could discern their consternation, so he swiftly excused himself, “Let me try to find her.” Then he promised them he would bring her back if he could track her down.
After he left, both Sister Lane and Miss Pony had mixed feelings. They were baffled why Candy behaved abnormally today but also curious why the man came all the way from Chicago for her. Then they remembered the lady visitor, who had mentioned she would return but never did. Nonetheless, the kids were hungry, so Miss Pony and Sister Lane did not indulge themselves in imagination.
While cleaning up after dinner, neither the young man nor Candy had shown up, so Miss Pony and Jimmy began their search for Candy. Sister Lane stayed behind, getting the kids ready for bedtime stories. The search party had no clue as to Candy’s whereabouts, but they would head towards her beloved retreat first.
Miss Pony then hears a voice calling her name, drawing her back to the present. Candy has calmed down and approached the search party with Albert, and Candy turns to the boy before she continues in a placid tone, “and Jimmy, let me introduce-“
Albert stops her gently and explains, “Candy, I’ve told them already. Remember I came here first?”
With her eyes widened, she asks, “So they know that you’re Granduncle William?”
“Granduncle?” Miss Pony echos incredulously. “Granduncle William?”
The questions from these ladies throw him off balance for a long moment. Despite being fully aware of the impending necessity to reveal himself as William A. Ardlay, he was loath to admit it when he arrived at the orphanage. He didn’t mean to deceive or mislead Candy’s foster mothers, but he had an inexplicable desire to present himself as Candy’s friend rather than her guardian. After all, he never sees himself as one.
Miss Pony is dumbfounded for several seconds. She’s never heard of anything more absurd than this. To her, the man is at most in his late twenties. Yet, the name sounds extremely familiar. She can’t pinpoint where she heard it before until she sees the young man clench his jaw, striving to keep his composure. In response to Candy’s reasonable question, Albert languidly shakes his head with a pained look in his eyes and a deep furrow in his brow. This formal title was thrust upon him when he was but a child, now widely known in the clan as the title for the patriarch, but for the first time in his life he finds it borderline offensive.
“So Albert is your adoptive father, Candy?”
Miss Pony is able to connect the dots at last, even though the notion that the young man is related to Candy this way remains unfathomable. And what were they doing in the dark before our arrival? Didn’t Candy tell us she had not met her benefactor until shortly before leaving Chicago?
Noting Albert’s pensive mood written all over his face, Candy bites her bottom lip and corrects Miss Pony, “Granduncle William is my benefactor.”
Albert seems rather disturbed, but Candy has no idea what’s exactly vexing him. As a matter of fact, neither does he. Nevertheless, she resumes her introduction of the young man standing right beside her. She tells Miss Pony and Jimmy that Granduncle William was the one who adopted her into the Ardlay’s family and gave her the privilege to use his last name, her mellifluous voice filled with genuine gratitude. She goes on and on and speaks highly of Granduncle William, and her narrative is accurate and to the point.
To Albert, hearing Candy talk about Granduncle William’s kindness from her perspective is unprecedented. But he’s far from feeling flattered, not to mention this experience is somewhat uncanny, like she’s not really talking about him but another man with the same title, so he stops paying attention. The thing that occupies his mind next is that he should have protected the poor orphan girl from harm through other means instead of granting his nephews’ desperate pleas.
So he isn’t even aware Candy has abruptly ceased her speech when all of them are blinded by the headlights of an oncoming vehicle.
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Writer’s note:
Thank you for reading! In Candy Candy Final Story (CCFS) Candy mentioned a few times that Albert looked younger than his age, so even though he should be around thirty in this story, Miss Pony thinks he looks like a man in his late twenties. Also, Candy’s wordplay “Graaandpa” is based on CCFS, and for your interest, please read Lost in translation (Part 1) and Lost in translation (Part 2).
I’d like to quote Anita’s insightful comment here. I agree with Anita and also think that Candy and Albert were only friends before he left for Africa. Some fans are convinced Albert already had feelings for Candy in London, which I disagree. In this fanfic, I like to explore the idea that while Candy had romantic feelings for Albert already, he did not quite understand himself yet.
I’d also like to share this drawing by Igarashi with you (published in Nakayoshi Magazine), kindly provided by Mariela! ¡Muchas gracias! 🥰 The title can be translated as “heart penetrating love and passion (emotion)”.
This is my translation attempt for the small prints: “Because of love, people feel joys and sorrows, and because of love, people suffer— Where on earth is the storm of love that wraps around Candy and Terry, Susanna, taking them—?”
Hi!
Really enjoyed reading your new chapter. The quality of your English is undeniably very high and so is the congruence of the structure of this story so far.
By the way, that illustration of Candy by Yumiko Igarashi is so interesting because it depicts her in a completely different light to what the readers are accustomed to. In this illustration, in particular, Candy seems to be melancholic and that’s different to her otherwise ‘signature-style’ cheerful tone. On the other hand, however, this drawing bestows depths-of-character and elicits emotion.
Thanks for sharing and kind regards!
Hello @Lakewood, you made me blush 😊😚 Thank you so much for your compliments. Now this is pressure… Just kidding. I’ll try my best to keep up.
Yes I really like this particular illustration by Yumiko Igarashi. We can feel Candy’s feelings, so tangible.
Take care and best regards to you too 🤗
No pressure, Ms Puddle. Take your time and whenever you’re ready to submit your subsequent material is entirely up to you. Besides, it’s summer and you deserve a break just like everybody else.
Thank you @Lakewood. I’m taking a short break now btw but I’ll start writing again soon. I hope you will enjoy your summer break too 🤗
That’s great! Glad you’re taking a bit of a break. Thanks again for all your support!
Hello Ms Puddle,
Thank you for considering my comment in your new post. I appreciate your feedback and support.
Unsurprisingly so, your new chapter is fascinating and the characters involved are so relatable and engrossing. I am also looking forward to knowing more about Kimberly and the nature of her relationship with Albert. Based on your story so far, Kimberly appears to be infatuated with Albert; however, it is uncertain whether or not those feelings are reciprocal. As far as the CCFS is concerned, Albert did seem positively impressed by this young and beautiful American nurse to the point of devoting written time for her in his letter to Candy. Yet, emotions and people change eventually and irrevocably. Therefore, it remains to be seen how this story will unfold.
Regards,
Anita
Thank you @Anita for your contribution actually 🤗
What a delight to know that you found this new chapter fascinating! Thank you for your kind words ❣️ About Kimberly’s relationship with Albert, as I mentioned to others, I’ll reveal more as the story unfolds. I hope you won’t be disappointed. 😉
Hi, Ms Puddle and Anita! Thanks for your contributions and I agree that Anita’s comment is spot on. But then again, her comments are always intelligent and erudite.
Well said!
Couldn’t agree more myself!😊👍👍
Thank you!
Greetings!
I am impressed with the rapid pace of your online contributions with regards to your fanart and fanfiction. I am pleased to see that you have resumed writing and your new work so far is amazing. These new chapters are so vivid that it’s as if I’m watching a movie. You have brought life to the characters of the CCFS by delving into their darker feelings such as insecurities, jealousy, dread, etc. Well-developed and intricate characters have a wealth of traits ranging and often vacillating between the positive and negative ones. This is what being human is all about and humans are known to be inherently fallible and susceptible to making mistakes. Provided these characters learn from their mistakes and intend to improve, then such characters demonstrate a proclivity for further development and are worthy of note.
Apparently, I find your idea to bring Kimberly into the scene (or in Candy and Albert’s case, into the ‘arena’), to be a brilliant one because it adds so much intrigue and thus makes the plot so interesting.
I look forward to your next chapter but only when convenient for you. No need to rush . Take your time and enjoy the summer vacation.
All best!
Greetings to you too, @Halcyon Days! Thank you so much for your highly encouraging feedback❣️ So glad to hear you find my fanfic intriguing and like my Kimberly as the “third wheel”. 😉
Like you, I think both Candy and Albert have their flaws and are far from perfect. I don’t understand why it took him so long before he decided to confess to her on Pony’s Hill. Some people said Terry might be the reason but I think there could be more than that. Candy’s trolling or anger might contribute to Albert’s insecurities as well. Who knows? 😉
I usually take a brief break in between chapters but thanks for your understanding. I’ll do my best. Hope you enjoy your summer too! Take care 🤗
Taking a break is a sensible decision and you sure do deserve it. I hope you enjoy your leisure-time and focus on doing what you love the most.
Best Regards!
Thanks again @Halcyon days for your kind words❣️ The same to you too. Take care and stay safe 🤗
Thank you for providing a new chapter of your story so soon, Ms. Puddle. Take care of yourself too. The pandemic is still here and there is a long way until we manage to get over it completely. The climate change is here too as we can see daily. Right now a severe heat wave has hit southern Europe. Here in Greece the temperature is well over 40 and will reach up to 45 C degrees. It is the worst and longest heat wave this country has experienced in decades.
Your story is getting better and better. You have managed to give an intricate and intriguing nature to the relationship of Candy and Albert. There are certainly special feelings between them, but neither has found a way to express them to the other yet. Apart from the revelation of Albert’s identity and his new role in Candy’s life, there is the presence of Kimberly, who apparently is in love with Albert. Remains to be seen if there is any hope for Albert to reciprocate (since this is about Candy and Albert, I guess there is not), but her appearance will definitely create some issues. She is a character we know very little about, and it is no wonder that in many fanfictions Albert is having a romantic relationship with her. Maybe he did, since Albert has remained a mystery to the readers as well. There are still a lot we don’t know about him either, so it is possible there was something special between him and that nurse who looked like Candy. There are some who claim that he might have a romantic relationship with the nurse because she reminded him of Candy whom he had been trying to forget (meaning he had feelings for her before he left for Africa). I don’t agree with that theory either. I think everything started during their cohabitation while he was amnesiac and knew Candy from a new perspective, not knowing anything about his past. I wish Nagita had been able to reveal more about Albert’s life as she said she wished to. Too bad that restrictions from her publishers didn’t let her write all she had in mind about certain characters, as Albert, Terry, Susanna, Patty, even Neal. Especially Albert, both in the manga and the novel, is revealed as a fascinating and multilayered character, even though certain parts of his life remain unknown to the readers. I’m glad to see that you delve deeply into his feelings and thoughts in your new story, as you have done in all your previous stories.
Keep up the good work, and don’t forget to give yourself some well-deserved rest.
Also thank you for providing the above illustration from Nakayoshi magazine and for the translation offered. This is a beautiful drawing of Candy. She seems so feminine and charming here.
I agree with you, Fay. That illustration from the Nakayoshi magazine is stunning and Candy’s expression is different as if a bit more pensive and brooding.
Yes @Sarah I agree. This is one of my favourite illustrations by Igarashi. 💞
Hi @Fay, so glad to read you also like the picture I shared (kindly provided by Mariela from her collection). I think Candy in this particular drawing is very pretty too, and I chose it mainly because it matches the mood in this chapter. 💕
The heatwave hasn’t hit Athens yet-at least not the Northern suburbs where I currently reside but the meteorological reports state that it could hit a 41-42 degrees Celsius during next week. It’s the forest fires which are the most devastating though and the government is useless, as always. I hope you live at a safe distance from those dangerous areas.
On a positive note, however, our country has such a large variety of stunning beaches where we could swimming and eventually beat the heat to a certain point.
Take care!
Apologies.. Meant to say: “We could go swimming..”.
It seems that the temperature of 41 and 42 degrees will be the usual thing for most of the areas the following days. A difficult week is ahead of us. You are right. What makes the situation even worse is the wild fires. Luckily there is not any where I live, in southern Peloponnese, and I do live near the sea, although even in my hometown we reached 40 degrees Celsius yesterday.
But as you said, at least our country is blessed with many wonderful beaches which can somehow help us bear this unusual heat.
Take care too, and stay safe.
You take care too, @Myra!! I’m sure the beaches will be full of people so be careful too. The pandemic is not over yet. Sigh…
Thank you very much for your positive feedback, @Fay 💞 You made my day!
About Albert and Kimberly’s relationship in my fanfic, please be patient with me. I’ll reveal more in each chapter to keep it intriguing. About Albert’s feelings for Candy, I also agree the romantic feelings didn’t start until he was suffering from amnesia, at least in the manga version. In my fanfic I made him more unaware of his own feelings… At least not yet. 😉
I try not to write long chapters so each chapter is focused, and I can update more frequently. In light of the surge of new cases around the world, I totally agree with you about the global pandemic being far from over. Since I stay home anyway I spend my spare time on something I really enjoy. Thanks for your kind words, my friend 🤗
I also heard about the wild fires and the heat wave that will likely last till next week. I sincerely hope you’ll find ways to keep cool and hydrated. Make sure you drink lots of fluids too. The heat wave that we experienced several weeks ago was terrible, and hundreds of people actually died because of that. Many of them had lived alone and had not taken any precautions unfortunately. 🙁
Take good care of yourself, Fay 🥰 Do you live close enough to any beach?
I can’t wait to read more about Albert and Kimberly. As you said, since Candy had already two romances at this young age, not to mention her childhood crush on Prince on the Hill, why couldn’t a grown up man like Albert be also romantically involved with another woman? Besides, he was 11 years older than Candy and it would be natural for him to have a few romantic experiences before he met and loved her. There have been many speculations about Albert’s love past, especially because very little is known about his life, let alone about any possible love affairs. So it will be very interesting to see how his relationship with Kimberly will evolve in your story.
The heat wave in Canada was indeed terrible, and the number of deaths was shocking to say the least. People were not used to such high temperatures, and therefore they were totally unprepared. All these extreme weather phenomena give us clear warning that our planet is in serious danger. I sincerely hope there is still time to do something to reverse the situation before it is too late.
Fortunately I live in a seaside town, and my home is less than a kilometer away from the beach. However, even in places near the sea temperatures are very likely to reach more than 40 degrees C.
Thank you @Fay for your encouragement! 🤗 Yes you’re right. We know so little about Albert’s past except for his upbringing or imprisonment as the sole heir. It makes sense that he had feelings or involvement with other ladies prior to his accident in Italy, and the American nurse without a name was highly likely one of them.
About the heat wave, I agree. Like you, I hope it’s not too late yet. 😣 Do take care of yourself. What I did weeks ago was to wrap a damp towel around the back of my neck with all the fans turned on. Once the towel became warm I rinsed it with cold water again.
Hello Fay and Myra,
How are you? Are you alright? I’ve been reading about the wildfires near your vicinity and I hope both of you are safe. If I’m not mistaken, Fay lives within the Peloponnese peninsula and Myra in the suburban region of Northern Attica.
Hello, @Christine. Thank you for asking about us. I’m all right, and thankfully safe although there are wildfires in my area too. I sincerely hope Myra is also all right, since Northern Attica is the area most plagued by the wildfires. This is indeed a great catastrophe. A devastating blow for the environment that will definitely affect our lives for many years to come.
There had been another terrible wildfire three years ago in a seaside area east of Athens called Mati. 102 people had died then, most of them in the fire and several drowned trying to escape to the sea when they were trapped in a beach.
I’m so glad you’re alright. Hopefully, Myra is too.
As for Mati, yes, I’ve read about it and I remember the news coverage about it online. It was a terrible tragedy and, unfortunately, those who govern the country appear to not have learned from the grave errors of the past. There seems to be very little protection when it comes to forest fires and arson in Greece even though the hot and dry weather during the summer should have kept the governmental officials alert 24/7.
Agree with you, @Christine.
Here there’s a strict ban of open fire or BBQ in the parks but people don’t always adhere to the rules. Sometimes people care more about their freedom 😕
Thank you so much for your concern, @Christine. That’s very kind and considerate of you. Indeed, I live in Northern Athens but in a suburban area which is at a safe distance (at least for the time-being) from the afflicted areas. However, the smoke and smell of burnt wood and chemicals have permeated all of Athens and the area which I live in is no exception. Those areas which have been burnt have a massive ecological as well as emotional value for me and for so many people. Those areas in the North of Attiki which have been destroyed used to be picturesque and scenic landscapes with lakes, rives and all sorts of dense flora and forests, especially pine trees. Pine tress, however, could turn into a severe nightmare for fire-fighters when burning because their pine resin exacerbates the spreading and intensity of the forest fires. So far, the fire appears to have abated a bit but in other areas it’s still very dangerous and could ignite again and become even worse than before. The high winds are not helping the situation at all. It seems as if the stage has been set for the ‘perfect storm’, or rather in this case, the ‘complete eradication of the natural environment and ecosystem in Northern Attiki. This horrific event is going on all over Greece and so many people have been forced to evacuate their homes. No one knows how this end. What’s for sure though is that the Greek government is a circus and the prime-minister is a clown. He has only demonstrated political ineptitude and if he has an iota of dignity (which I doubt), he must hand in his resignation once this nightmare ends.
Typo: No one knows how this will end.
Apologies, @Christine, but my previous message is riddled with typos. Apparently, I meant to type @rivers’ and not ‘rives’; I also meant to type ‘trees’ and not ‘tress’. Just for the record..
No worries, Myra.
I’m glad and relieved that you and Fay are alright.
I totally agree with you when it comes to incompetent governments and political leaders. They seem to be effective only during election campaigns and that’s the only time they value-or pretend to value-human life and well-being.
So true, @Christine. To add insult to the injury the elected politicians don’t usually keep their promises 🙁
Unfortunately, it all boils down to zero accountability from politicians and lack of socio-political vigilance and awareness from the citizens who voted for them.
So glad to hear that you’re all right, @Fay! How are you coping with the heat wave these few days? Best wishes to @Myra too 🙏
I wonder what caused these wildfires in Greece. The forest fires happened in the past or happening now in our province were primarily caused by people negligence 😣😤
It finally rains today after 40+ days of dry streak in Vancouver. Hopefully that helps with the fight against the spread of wildfires.
The heat wave seems to have passed for now, although the atmosphere is still polluted by ashes carried by the wind. Unfortunately, wind hasn’t stopped, and this is the big problem when there are wildfires. It gets terribly difficult to put them out when it’s windy. It’s really dreadful to see all those villages destroyed, houses burnt down, thousands of people leaving their homes with as many belongings as they have been able to save, all those poor creatures, wild and domestic, which perished in the fire, and of course the few remaining forests in our country. There are also two people dead because of the fires, a firefighter and the owner of a factory who saw his property being destroyed by fire, and as it has been said, the shock had been so great for him that he died of a heart attack.
In most cases, arson is the cause for wildfires in Greece. Sometimes there is negligence too, but considering the great damages caused, this is no less a crime. As in the case of Mati in 2018, it was reported that the fire was caused by negligence. That negligence, though, led 102 people to their death, not to mention the damage to forests and buildings in the area.
Sadly, the ecological damage by the current wildfires is too great. There will be nothing left for next generations who will know what a forest looks like only from books, movies or TV documentaries.
Thank you for your concern, @Ms Puddle and @Fay. Regarding @Fay’s analysis, she is spot on and I have nothing more to add. I have already explained a similar reality to @Christine in my message above.
As far as these current fires are concerned, however, it appears that several people have been arrested because they were circulating in the afflicted areas with various chemicals and other flammable products. Although climate change is for real, this particular nationwide disaster in Greece could be a result of organized arson. It’s not the first time such crimes have been committed against the wildlife and human population of this country.
Glad to hear from you too @Myra. It saddens me to read people have deliberately destroyed the environment, and not the first time too 😭
While deeply saddened for the unprecedented chaos afflicting Greece and many other countries due to the catastrophic repercussions of climate change, I am pleased to know that both of you-Fay and Myra-are safe from harm. The wildfires (or arson) must be a devastating blow to you, your loved ones and your nation as a whole.
Glad that you’re safe, folks. I’ve been communicating with my friends from Greece as well as my Greek colleagues here in the UK. The situation is beyond any form of rectification. The only ‘positive’ note is that the death toll isn’t anywhere as near as the devastating fire in Mati in 2018 which claimed over a hundred lives and injured almost two hundred. Nonetheless, this current fire in Greece has ruined the lived of thousands of people and rendered them homeless.
Thank you, @Sarah and @Anita for your concern. Indeed, this is devastating to the whole country. Climate change is here but it is precipitated by those criminal actions, since the disaster that takes place in Greece right now is definitely arson. The area most destroyed is the island of Evia which is burning for six consecutive days. I agree with @Anita that regarding the death toll the current situation can’t be compared to the tragedy of Mati, but unfortunately it’s also disastrous, considering that the lives of thousands of people will be affected and nature was possibly given the “final blow”. About 1,2 million acres have been burned in Greece until now.
Hi @Fay, I must say it’s unfathomable why some people intentionally destroyed the forests of their own country and properties of their fellow countrymen, leaving disastrous consequences. As you said, thousands of people were affected and lost their homes or villages. 😢
Strangely, before I read your comments or Myra’s, I thought the causes were primarily climate change and the extreme heat. The articles that I’ve read, like this one below, mentioned nothing about arson. Of course I believe you and Myra, but I wonder why important details like this have been omitted.
https://www.bbc.com/news/world-europe-58138614
[lives]
Thank you all for expressing your concern. This is profoundly appreciated.🙏
The crux of these recurrent devastating forest fires in Greece are a result of certain factors ranging from climactic conditions to political corruption and blatant political ineptitude. Adverse weather conditions often in tandem with extreme heatwaves have never been unbeknown to the Greece regions, especially during the summer season. However, when Greeks vote for politicians who are short-sighted, greedy and cunning-foolish jackasses it’s inevitable that such catastrophic events will occur and reoccur without anyone in charge ever being held accountable. Whether right-wing or left-wing politically, the common denominator of those political parties in power is utmost and unlimited stupidity and downright sleaziness. Right now in Greece, there is public rage ignited against the prime-minister and no one would blame these people. I’m with them 100%. However, the Greek citizens have to do more than express rage. When the dust sets in, it’s going to have to be a time for reckoning and action-taking. Resignations are obvious and if the don’t happen, then there is a strong possibility that political instability will become even more severe which could lead to civil unrest and eventually early elections.
Typo Alert: “…Greek regions…”.
Please ignore any other typos if found.
With regards to your queries concerning the international press surrounding the allegations of arson having been committed, there are reports (from the Greek as well as foreign press) regarding the arrest of possible culprits. No one is denying climate change; however, there appears to have been alleged arsonists having taken advantage of the extensive heatwave so as to hurt other people and the environment. There have even been arrests involving alleged arsonists trying to set fire to parks within the city centre of Athens these past few days.
Here are a few links, fyi:
tinyurl.com/2eh67bnt
tinyurl.com/3khp775m
tinyurl.com/3jeh4p83
tinyurl.com/tbatyrzm
tinyurl.com/u7rvwvpm
tinyurl.com/3hkznhwn
tinyurl.com/3vvnnxsu
Thank you Myra for addressing my query. Appreciate it. I’ll later modify your comment to make these links clickable so that it’s easier for others to find more information about the current situation in Greece.
Each and every logical and intelligent individual understands and empathizes with your frustration, Myra. Unfortunately, the politics of greed superimpose any infinitesimal element of dignity and natural beauty in this world. Not that everyone is unscrupulous. On the contrary, the greatest majority of people have the best of intentions for both the human and non-human existence of this world. However, there are only very few people courageous enough to take action whilst most people remain silent and thus passive recipients of this worldwide injustice and slaughter of nature.
I’ve got nothing else to say but quote the erudite Canadian astrophysicist, Hubert Reeves, who is brief and concise on this matter:
“Man is the most insane species. He worships an invisible God and destroys a visible Nature. Unaware that this Nature he’s destroying is this God he’s worshiping.”(Hubert Reeves)
Exactly!
I’m sorry to hear about the mass destruction involving the forest fires in such a beautiful country as Greece. I am relieved that Fay and Myra are safe from harm.
I would also like to thank Myra for providing those useful links to articles for us English-speakers.
Unfortunately, the repercussions of climate change have arrived much sooner and have become far more aggressive than originally fathomed by researchers in the relevant fields of study. Such mass destruction of wildlife worldwide may become the ‘new normal’ from now on. Hopefully, humanity can resume to logic and become effectively considerate to the environment and its natural resources before it’s too late.
Thank you @Ms Puddle for sharing the aforementioned links provided.
I would also like to thank @Lynn and everyone here in the forum for their heartfelt words and generous support.
Take care and stay safe!
Thank you very much for providing this new chapter so quickly. How kind of you to share your creative content with us even though you’re so busy with your real-life job and other responsibilities. I know I may sound a bit ‘motherly’ but please make sure to get some rest during this summer as you have earned it with all your hard work. I’m a bit of a ‘workaholic’ myself but my husband and I have taken a vow to always try to take a break from work even if it’s rather short. Research has shown that even short breaks at regular intervals during the winter, spring and summer seasons do wonders for human health and well-being.
How about the vaccination? Are you over and done with that procedure? The CDC has issued an announcement that a third dose may be required due to the delta variant.
There’s definitely light at the end of the tunnel when it comes to this global pandemic but we still need to travel many more miles until we reach the desirable end.
Thank you @DreamCatcher for your kind words. Your concerns for my well-being is deeply appreciated❣️ Yes I’m a bit of a workaholic myself lol but I do sometimes take breaks by going to the nature. Where I live is blessed with ocean, lakes, rivers and mountains. That being said, I enjoy the process of writing (or entertaining my imagination), and I have so much in my head that I want to write them down. 🤗
I’m glad to hear that you and your husband are making a point to rest from time to time. That’s very wise 👍👏 I agree that short breaks are essential to our health. I’ve accumulated many vacation days due to Covid and my manager said the same, so I’ll take some short breaks for the rest of this year.
I’ve got two doses of Pfizer and yes I heard of the discussions of getting the third doses. Sigh… I’m not as optimistic as you though. For now I’ll definitely wear a mask or two whenever I go out.
Take care DreamCatcher!
Based on the recent announcements made by the CDC, wearing facial masks and maintaining social distancing continues to be imperative for vaccinated and unvaccinated alike due to this far more aggressive COVID-19 variant.
Facts.
Marvellous chapter, Ms Puddle! It was such a nice welcome to receive this update from you. I have enjoyed reading this additional chapter of yours while having my morning coffee at the veranda. Despite the intense heat, the nearby beach is a most beautiful welcome and the sea view is fantastic.
The character development is done so well as you have retained the authenticity of Keiko Nagita’s character in tandem with providing your own distinct style in writing. Having read your other fanfiction as well, it’s pretty much evident that you have developed your own writing style; on the one hand, you always demonstrate so much respect for Nagita, and on the other hand, you equivalently manage to maintain your own style in written expression. Kudos to you for that.
Talk to you again soon and enjoy the summer!
Typo: Nagita’s characters …
Thank you @Irana93 for reading my fanfics. Your positive feedback is very much appreciated❣️ You made me blush 😊 I’ll try my best to continue writing this fanfic.
I hope you enjoy your vacation so far. Must be nice taking a well-deserved break. I’m not going anywhere at this point, especially there are outbreaks everywhere it seems.
Take care and stay safe, Irana93 🤗
Thank you so much and please stay safe too!
Hello again!
Very pleased to have read the third chapter of your story. The plot is getting more and more fascinating and intricate. I also like those brief snippets of information regarding the relationship between Albert and Kimberly whilst working together at the medical clinic in Kenya.
I’m so anticipating the next chapter and thank you so much for your time.
Furthermore, I want to point out that I agree 100 per cent with what Anita has stated in her very insightful and intelligent comment.
It goes without saying that there was never anything romantic going on between Candy and Albert during Candy’s schooling at St Paul’s in London because both of them were in completely different phases in their lives. Besides, Candy was only a teenager back then and falling in love with Terry albeit torn asunder regarding Anthony’s untimely death. As for Albert, he had absolutely no romantic feelings whatsoever for Candy but only felt pity and compassion for her. This is the reason why he listened to the desperate pleas of the his nephews and saved Candy from harm in Mexico by becoming her guardian and protector until she reaches legal age.
However, Albert was a very young and rebellious man himself and after having completed his university studies in England and having established several successful business within the proximity of London, he decided to embark on a long journey to Africa and leave everything and everyone behind. It was ***his*** life and he had every right to do what he wanted with his own life and future. Yet, Nagita wanted to couple Albert and Candy but that happened much later in their lives when they were both legally consenting adults and having endured many trials and tribulations together-as Anita has very accurately pointed out.
Well said, @Michelle! Couldn’t agree with you more and, indeed, @Anita’s commentary is erudite and astute.
Thank you @Irana93.
Yes, my sentiments exactly, @Michelle. Candy was really way too young when she was studying in London, and Albert was around mid-twenties or so.
Though he never meant to be her father figure or guardian, he should know he was her benefactor. That alone should affect his mindset somewhat. He probably could already sense something brewing between Candy and Terry too. That’s why the author made him lose all his memories later in the story to make it possible for Albert to get to know Candy “from scratch”.
That being said, there are some readers who think otherwise, which is fine with me as long as we respect one another’s perspectives. 🙂 😉
Thank you very much for your encouraging words, @Michelle❣️ So happy to hear that you like reading about Albert and Kimberly’s relationship. I was initially a bit worried when I had this story in mind. Some readers can’t seem to accept that Albert had feelings for other women in his past. Come to think of it, Candy being ten years younger had two love interests (or three, if including POTH) before Albert, so why can’t he? 😉
Of-course, that could be the case. Otherwise, it would be double-standards mentality. That being said, what can apply for one character could also apply for another. Just as all the other CC characters had the innate right to be rebellious and adventurous, Albert also had that same right.
Well said – Ms Puddle & Michelle! Some fans foolishly believe that Terry is the only one who’s got the right to be rebellious but that’s apparently not the case as many other characters in the CCFS turned out to be much more courageous, praiseworthy and revolutionary such as Candy, Albert, Stear and George. Another highly commendable character is Fran Hamilton because she had the fortitude and utmost strength of character to provide her medical services in the crux of the battlefield during WWI.
Thanks, @Jesse, and I agree with you that there are far braver characters in the novel and one such ‘unsung hero’ is the Salvation Army nurse, F. Hamilton. In her own words, Candy expresses utmost respect and admiration for Hamilton’s bravery but also commitment to her line of work and professional responsibilities. If anyone could be regarded as a feminist in this novel, that definitely is Hamilton; she’s educated, intelligent, dynamic and independent.
Carissima! Adoro questi momenti sospesi tra loro due, anche se a volte mi fanno una rabbia! D’altronde, è esattamente così che si comporterebbero Candy e Albert, con i loro turbamenti, con i loro dubbi, con le loro riserve… Sono molto incuriosita da questa storia che Albert ha avuto con Kimberly: ho letto molte fanfiction (e io stessa ne ho scritte) dove i due hanno una relazione molto spensierata e libera, con lei (l’infermiera che somiglia a Candy, sempre con nomi diversi, la mia ne ha almeno due XD) che immancabilmente sì innamora di Albert. E quale donna sana di mente non lo farebbe? Ma lui ha il cuore già occupato, contrariamente a quanto sostieni alla fine nelle tue riflessioni: a me (e non solo) è sempre piaciuto pensare che, già a Londra, Albert si sia reso conto di quanto quella bambina stesse crescendo e il suo viaggio in Africa doveva essere un modo in più per scacciare quel sentimento “inopportuno”. Però la tua Kimberly sembra (e sottolineo sembra) essersi lasciata alle spalle quell’amore e ora ha bisogno di qualcosa che non riguarda i suoi vecchi sentimenti. Ma il ritorno di fiamma è dietro l’angolo e si nota che Albert non le è indifferente quando descrivi la sua emozione nel rivederlo così elegante e… biondo! Insomma, qui gli equivoci sono a portata di mano, persino il diniego di Albert di farsi controllare le vesciche ai piedi (dopo tante ore potrebbero puzzare, ahahahah, stavo rotolando dalle risate a quel pensiero LOL) potrebbe far pensare alla ragazza che non vuole stare solo con lei. Spero che il prossimo aggiornamento avvenga presto, sono tanto curiosa! Complimenti, la tua storia mi appassiona proprio come le altre, un abbraccio!
Cara @moira78💞 Grazie mille 🥰
So glad to read you like reading the doubts and reservations of Candy and Albert. What a delight to hear that you’re intrigued about the story of Albert and the nurse. I’m sure there are many fanfics about them, and you’re right about her name, because she doesn’t have a name in the original story. 😀
So you think Albert had feelings for Candy in London? Thank you for sharing your thoughts, and yes we have different opinions, but of course that’s fine. Thanks again for your encouraging feedback❣️
Hello,
I have enjoyed reading the continuation of your recent story. I wonder how the dynamics between Candy and Albert will develop as this obvious tension between them is intriguing.
Take Care and Thanks!
Thank you so much @Myra, and like I said to @Sarah, it’s very encouraging to know that you read my update already. 🥰 You take care too 🤗
Hi Ms Puddle,
This is a very interesting chapter of your new fanfic and I like the way you have begun clarifying the otherwise complex relationship between Candy and Albert.
Looking forward to the next chapter and thanks for keeping us posted!
Wow, @Sarah!! So happy to read your comment soon after I have updated. 🥰 I take this as a compliment and thank you very much 🤗
Those are the ‘perks’ of having subscribed to your awesome blog and receiving notifications regarding your updates in due time.😉
Thank you @Sarah❣️